Judge & Jury vs Yvonne
 

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6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Check in by: 10-07-04 at 07:33 AM

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Closed - Expired / old battle win

Yvonne has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 07:46 AM.

Judge & Jury has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 07:46 AM.

You pussy nigga taking too much confidence thinking u good
dis site is full of lil kids you shuda kept ya wack spit to ya hood
dis dude still countin his abc..what u know about the jury?*
the only place you get buck in rappin is right down the nusery
he got his ass broke in 9 good times and still askin 4 mo**
tinks 2 b a vet,yeah by battlin a N.O with a No-Show***
i needed a place to lay my ass and let my flows drop****
now open ur mouth as i win..to compensate i say props #

*he posts in the abs thread..and a lil kid knows nothing about law...the jury

**he's lost 9 times..and i take that as breaking some1's ass in

***N.O =noob..he battles x-on and he no showed..

**** means i shit on him

# means i cheer him up by tellin him props..atleast he tried..


we will return the votes...honestly...

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Quick keystyle......................


Sayin ure battles get slept on, reason is cuz u “spit wack”
MC’s read the first line of ure verse and then “click back”
Ure sig becomes relevant cuz u know this the EVE of ure “loss”
U (D)yin (M)erked (X)tra strong, u just been killed by the “boss”
My kills just be one below 100 cuz I roll packin double “nines”
Only thing u bustin is my gut with them corny ass cheddar “rhymes”
Yvonne cud be hot news and still wudn’t hit the “prime-time”
Understand real rhythm, I speechmark each time I “rhyme-lines”


...........if u dont get the punches then dont bother voting!!!

uppin this shit mayne!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dont sleep!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin peeps dont be snails!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

get uppin on this!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 honest votes ppl......favour will be returned!!!

and if u dont get a couple of my lines

her sig has changed now.........................but it used to have Eve and DMX on it

Voted For: Judge & Jury

Not a bad battle from either side, VOTE JUDGE AND JURY

Judge , nice punches wordplay and personals for he eve and DMX lines, they was tight.....



Sayin ure battles get slept on, reason is cuz u “spit wack”
MC’s read the first line of ure verse and then “click back”
Fuckin funny as fuckk and dope aswell

Ure sig becomes relevant cuz u know this the EVE of ure “loss”
U (D)yin (M)erked (X)tra strong, u just been killed by the “boss”
Loved it the whole eve and dmx was creative

he got his ass broke in 9 good times and still askin 4 mo**
tinks 2 b a vet,yeah by battlin a N.O with a No-Show***
the way you said newb def, should have been different.. that made your verse hella wack and didnt really connect with any of your punches...
You have ghotten better but should be challenging people on your lvel

No beef just the truth

i needed a place to lay my ass and let my flows drop****
now open ur mouth as i win..to compensate i say props #

This was terrib;e


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This was feedback posted for Judge & Jury
 

Sayin ure battles get slept on, reason is cuz u “spit wack”
MC’s read the first line of ure verse and then “click back”
no.
Ure sig becomes relevant cuz u know this the EVE of ure “loss”
U (D)yin (M)erked (X)tra strong, u just been killed by the “boss”
the fuck? wack
My kills just be one below 100 cuz I roll packin double “nines”
Only thing u bustin is my gut with them corny ass cheddar “rhymes”
no.
Yvonne cud be hot news and still wudn’t hit the “prime-time”
Understand real rhythm, I speechmark each time I “rhyme-lines”
nah...

You pussy nigga taking too much confidence thinking u good
dis site is full of lil kids you shuda kept ya wack spit to ya hood
no..but better then the other guy
dis dude still countin his abc..what u know about the jury?*
the only place you get buck in rappin is right down the nusery
nah.
he got his ass broke in 9 good times and still askin 4 mo**
tinks 2 b a vet,yeah by battlin a N.O with a No-Show***
dont like it.
i needed a place to lay my ass and let my flows drop****
now open ur mouth as i win..to compensate i say props #
blah...


i explains the each line for both verses and in my opinion Yvonne wins
for coming less wack and less played...had stronger punches that landed
harder and just a better overall verse.

pz

^^^^ wat the fuck is this joker doin in here..................
clearly u dont know the meaning of wordplay hoe, so get the fuck outta my battle!!!!

well you dont no nothing about personals

you are wack SKANO

get he fuck out of here with thjat gayu ass feed back

SHE HAS EVE AND DMX IN HER SIG

Sayin ure battles get slept on, reason is cuz u “spit wack”
MC’s read the first line of ure verse and then “click back”
and that was funny

YOU SHOULD LEAVE THIS SITE IF THATS HOW YOU POST YO FEEDBACK

Listen children, the lines he used are weak and played and didnt
come to my interest whats so ever so basically they arent good
if your going to sit here and talk shit to be over some bullshit played
out verse that judge wrote they you might as well set it up!

pz

CAUSE YOUR WACK

HAVE NO TALENT AND NO IDEA WHAT A PERSONAL OR WORDPLAY IS

HER SHIT=

well i wont even go there

She got some skills but lost here

SKANO

I aint seen your shit but im judging you uskc since you havnt posted your verse yet and if you did, learn how to post it cause the thread is empty......

LIL KID

maybe you want to read the rules befor you speak, he is supposed to
drop 1st then i will drop, yet i dont see his verse so im not dropping and
wasting my time on that kid, till he drops im not droping...


lil kid.

*fuckin hell i thought battlin vets woulda been a gd shit....full of maturity...b4,durin and after the battle...but i guess i was wrong....smfh*











uppin

and yeah sorry i changed my sig...i just had to in remembrance of my homie....



its true my sig had even and dmx in it....

Voted For: Judge & Jury

King Solo

Sayin ure battles get slept on, reason is cuz u “spit wack”
MC’s read the first line of ure verse and then “click back”
/\ nice opener good punch on this one

Ure sig becomes relevant cuz u know this the EVE of ure “loss”
U (D)yin (M)erked (X)tra strong, u just been killed by the “boss”
/\ again good bar liked the DMX bit think i know why and good play off the name

My kills just be one below 100 cuz I roll packin double “nines”
Only thing u bustin is my gut with them corny ass cheddar “rhymes”
/\ 1st line self-G blah 2nd line nice punch an aight diss but could be betta

Yvonne cud be hot news and still wudn’t hit the “prime-time”
Understand real rhythm, I speechmark each time I “rhyme-lines”
/\ 1st line nice punch but endin it wit a self-G line na sry

Overall 7/10 King Solo i know ur abilities even though this was keystyle i seen u do much betta

Yvonne

You pussy nigga taking too much confidence thinking u good
dis site is full of lil kids you shuda kept ya wack spit to ya hood
/\ Nice opener nothin original though

dis dude still countin his abc..what u know about the jury?*
the only place you get buck in rappin is right down the nusery
/\ nice punch steady diss

he got his ass broke in 9 good times and still askin 4 mo**
tinks 2 b a vet,yeah by battlin a N.O with a No-Show***
/\ not really feelin this bar

i needed a place to lay my ass and let my flows drop****
now open ur mouth as i win..to compensate i say props #
/\ Self-G line no real diss sry coulda came betta specially for a closer

Overall 6.5/10: Yvey_Yvey sorry girl u had sum aight punches and some good wordplay but i think u still need a lil work on them some more...ur structure and flow however was real good...as was Solo's but i think u need more consistancy Yvey

V/Solo

This was feedback posted for Yvonne
 

YVEY YVE!!!... just checking out the stats and shyt and seeing if ya still elevating and shyt...lol... don't wanna vote cuz peops will think i'm being biased cuz of our history in KK...GL shorty

This was feedback posted for Yvonne
 

Voted For: Judge & Jury

king got diz far more better verse i liked da punchez an disses yvonne u r whakked ur verse didnt hav good disses u need 2 2 werk on punchez

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

thanx ILL-Grammatix...

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hottness defined...learn to vote....kid!!...


uppin this...votes shall be returned honestly....

Voted For: Judge & Jury

You pussy nigga taking too much confidence thinking u good
dis site is full of lil kids you shuda kept ya wack spit to ya hood
^^^^^^^^^^^ DAT WAS WACK~! GOOD FLOW BUT NOT AN STAND OUT PUNCH FOR AN OPENER//



dis site is full of lil kids you shuda kept ya wack spit to ya hood
dis dude still countin his abc..what u know about the jury?*
the only place you get buck in rappin is right down the nusery
he got his ass broke in 9 good times and still askin 4 mo**
tinks 2 b a vet,yeah by battlin a N.O with a No-Show***
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AGAIN NICE FLOW BUT DA PUNCHES ARE NOT HITTIN IT AND PLUS THERE AINT STANDIN OUT USE MORE CREATIVE PUNCHES 'OK"


i needed a place to lay my ass and let my flows drop****
now open ur mouth as i win..to compensate i say props #
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ERRRR OK DA CLOSA WAS KINDA OFF TO ME AFTA I READ DA EXPLAINATION ITS STILL IS

YVONNE-U HAD OK PUNCHES BUT WERENT ALL THAT GREAT NICE FLOW GOING NICE USIN PERSONALS AND PUNCHES BUT DA PUNCHES WERENT HITTIN IT I'LL GIVE U PROPS GOING AGAINST KING SOLO THOUGH


Sayin ure battles get slept on, reason is cuz u “spit wack”
MC’s read the first line of ure verse and then “click back”
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ LOL NICE OPENER GOOD DECENT PUNCH


Ure sig becomes relevant cuz u know this the EVE of ure “loss”
U (D)yin (M)erked (X)tra strong, u just been killed by the “boss”
My kills just be one below 100 cuz I roll packin double “nines”
Only thing u bustin is my gut with them corny ass cheddar “rhymes”

^^^^^^^^^^^^AIGHT GOOD PUNCHES NICE FLOW NICE USIN PERSONALS DA PUNCHES WERE DECENT AND REALLY STANDIN OUT



Yvonne cud be hot news and still wudn’t hit the “prime-time”
Understand real rhythm, I speechmark each time I “rhyme-lines”
^^^^^^^^^^^ WORD NICE CLOSA GOOD FLOW AND DECENT PUNCH

KING SOLO-U HAD WORDPLAYS PERSONALS AND PUNCHES I FELT U CAME MORE HARDER DAN YVONNE CAUSE DA PUNCHES WERE MORE DECENT AND REALLY STAND OUT

^^^^^^^^^ THATS WHY I VOTED FOR KING SOLO

RETURN AN FAV KING

This was feedback posted for Judge & Jury
 

just checkin' out the polls.......................and uppin:thumbup: