Assasin vs Verbal Phenom
 

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Check in by: 10-07-04 at 02:12 PM

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Assasin has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 02:14 PM.

Verbal Phenom has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 02:14 PM.

are ya usin the time limit kid...or will u be droppin 2day.....

ill leave ya lookin like a smurf..blue in the face..stuck for words while ya choke...
gettin ya ass smoked by me is the only way u'll know wot its like to be dope...
this fag aint sick,the only time he flowz heavy is when he bleeds...
he has to put dick in his mouth an swallow cum in order to 'succ seed'...
i leave ya paralized,crutches be the only bit of metal u be packin...
ya tht whack,ya come last place at the paralympics rappin...
verbal phenom spits rhymes more played thn lines from shakespeare scripts...
you could write ya whole verse in braille and we still wouldnt feel it...
its only right tht i acknowledge ya for tryin,we cant all have dope skillz when we write...
u could compress ya whack lines together and they still wouldnt be tight...

aight...nice verse........but i havnt joined writers block...lol.......dunno were u got tht from...uppin this yall..............

lol...its aight man.....now let get the votes in...........

Voted For: Verbal Phenom

aiiiiight
decent drop from verb, nice vocab, nice metas an the personals were right on point, decent drop verb..
u got my vote..

assasin, ya rhymes lacked creativity, an the structure was all messed up in some parts...

the shake spear scripts line was off the hook tho, but i think verb just edged this battle, sorry assasin...
no hate, just tellin it how i see it

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Voted For: Verbal Phenom

phenom gets this....

his lines were well placed....his wordplay personals and punches were BANGIN fo real..his verse was flowing all thru...and his lines werent stretched...trojan..u mercked me and mayne what happ herre?...ya last lines were stretched..u had hard punches but they werent bangin like phantoms...o well verbal gets this for a better verse which was interessting all thru and which kept on flowin...props to both tho...

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Voted For: Assasin

this fag aint sick,the only time he flowz heavy is when he bleeds...
he has to put dick in his mouth an swallow cum in order to 'succ seed'...
this was fuckin funny ass fuck

its only right tht i acknowledge ya for tryin,we cant all have dope skillz when we write...
u could compress ya whack lines together and they still wouldnt be tight...
that was ok


Verb Phenon. why you shrink down ya lines so they dont look stretched and shit, wack punches anf lame ass atempts at personals... OPTION AND CONDOM DONT RYHME

Battle Is Only One Round Like Writers Block Yall Never Make Round 2**
Respect Is Out Of The Question... Asking Newbs To Join Ya Crew?!?
only good line and it didnt even affect him

VOte assasin for better verse and better use of dissing and more funny to read.....



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Voted For: Assasin

yo i think you won this one in by a few cats actually everything but punches if that give you an idea

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Voted For: Assasin

this verse was the best it had the best punches I really like this verse very much because of them they were just on top. Some nince flow there to and inners good opener and nice closer over all 9/10 The other verse wasn't good man it had really bad wording and alot of dum played stuff not good flow at all ima have to give u 4/10.

thats no hate vote bitch ur verse sucked..........

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Verbal Phenom


Kid Ya Can't Battle With The King of Verbs, Losing Isn't An Option
Alias Demonstrates Ya Lyrics Must Suck Being Named Afta A Condom*
(ok opener not the best)

Battle Is Only One Round Like Writers Block Yall Never Make Round 2**
Respect Is Out Of The Question... Asking Newbs To Join Ya Crew?!?
(ok but really no punch)

Your Future Is Dim And Hard To See Like A Dark Room With No Lighting
Change Ya Name To Parrana Coz Every "Line" He Sees He Sure To B Biting
(nothing but a little bit of a pernosal)

This Dogs About To Be "Put Down" Coz everytime You Drop We Consider
It "Foul"
U Winning Is Doubtful So Do What America Did To Saddam And Hand In The
Towel
(not a bad closer but you need to explane your last line)


Assasin

ill leave ya lookin like a smurf..blue in the face..stuck for words while ya choke...
gettin ya ass smoked by me is the only way u'll know wot its like to be dope...
(good opner and you had a good punch in there)

this fag aint sick,the only time he flowz heavy is when he bleeds...
he has to put dick in his mouth an swallow cum in order to 'succ seed'...
(ok punch buta little bit nasty with the dick in the mouth and cum seed)

i leave ya paralized,crutches be the only bit of metal u be packin...
ya tht whack,ya come last place at the paralympics rappin...
(good pounch in that line wit the parlized and crutches)

verbal phenom spits rhymes more played thn lines from shakespeare scripts...
you could write ya whole verse in braille and we still wouldnt feel it...
(best punch in ya whole verse in bouth of those lines)

its only right tht i acknowledge ya for tryin,we cant all have dope skillz when
we write...u could compress ya whack lines together and they still wouldnt be tight...
(nice closer had a little bit of meaning to it)

so as you can see Assasin won it because of poor a poor opponet

return the favor boys and gurls

Voted For: Verbal Phenom

verbal lol dope opener here the vocab and flow good as fukc as weel as the disses also good shit punches were dope as fuck and won you this battle 8/10
assasin dope structure was kinda streched here punches were not as good as verbals but decent they hit disses were good too vocab nice as weel as flow if your punches were stronger you wouldve won this but he just outclassed you with punches7/10

Voted For: Verbal Phenom

i vote for verb cuz had a good structure
i gie the flow to assassain thogh,
but verb had some good punches and had the opener
assasian had the closer though
over all verb was better

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Voted For: Assasin

all in all i think that assasin had better punches and vocab. but verbal took flow. soo im gonna have to say assisan took this one.

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Voted For: Verbal Phenom

Verbal Phenom: good opener with a nice personal it could have rhymed though, good punches, ok meta's, good structure which made it flow good, good personals, no multi's, ok closer, closer could have been better. overall 7/10



Assasin: nice opener, good punches, ok meta's, ok structure, ok flow, a few multi's, not really any personals, nice closer. overall 6.5/10


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