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intensify effect vs Ill-Grammatix
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 10-12-04 at 09:16 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
Ill-Grammatix has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-12-04 11:34 AM.
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no peeking...lol
aiight, check it: my style's killer like jason vorhees but this kats to dense-to-hide so i creep in his dreams with lyrics with effects intensified convinced that i'll take an L in a battle against a guy with less talent than any noob still he wanna pretend he fly? "News Flash!" Fis ya structure, nukka- ya spit's fucked up this numb nut?... a "G"? nah, just a "yung buck" gettin' touched up tryna use my name to "come up" but this "thug's bones" is hollow flows is borrowed,ain't good enough,got better chances hittin lotto a million to one, i'll kill ya for fun, who's feelin ya. son? who gassed you to the point that you revealin ya buns? showin' ass? ya flow's trash like bits and pieces of ya pre-writes i knew ya needed the time that's why i set it up for 3 nights checked the thread before i dropped and ya still hadn't accepted i'll give ya credit-ya turn insomniacs to narcoleptics pathetic flows shows that ya "in-fear"-ior to I.G. this text-"tease" got ya knees weak so a win for you's unlikely invite me to fight? aiight, i'll take pleasure in making ya suffer benn generous giving L's, I got ya back, homes, here's another |
you gonna drop or what?... don't wanna waste a perfectly good verse, nah mean? ya told me to set it up so do ya thang man...one
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fuck...uppin for IE to drop his verse!!!!
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intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-12-04 09:08 PM.
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u'll get toasted herb, u know what my path is roast'in nerds...
the only way i'll be "below average" if is u "posted first" * ha* Grammatix a chump, he aint know I.E wreck-thugs... if i said "move-in" for the "kill".. he'll probley ask how much rest-was... so "ill" if u dont get it now... u'll get it soon... cuz i got this win in the "bag" like Shop-Lifters "changeing room"... plus ya sucky so even if u get a vote u'll be lucky... cuz i got ya head-pic like eddie griffin buck wheat... fuck, i'll wreck ya fleet, nah he's wack cant really mess with me... taking a 7-day vacation is Asultin... cuz ya u'r "style-is-week".... "weak" i'll put the nine in ya ear N let u feel the sound of fear... cuz ya skill's like baseball... bearly seen around this time of year... so tell me why ya chest harden?, i'll leave u with spear scars man... da gat i'll leave u with more "knick shot's" then Madison Square Garden.. like "cooked beef" u'll get drop after the knife... N like "urine samples" on autobiographies "i'll piss on ya chaper of life"... Punches Always land.. claiming U Cant Ssee straight cuz I got Mad Hooks..... plus Beatin U is 'No Problem' Just like BLANK MATHBOOKS...... |
^^^ thats all the time i had for befor the dead-line was due but i'll match ya bars quickly if u want me to....
or leave it like that up to u?? |
u'll get toasted herb, u know what my path is roast'in nerds...
the only way i'll be "below average" if is u "posted first" * ha* Grammatix a chump, he aint know I.E wreck-thugs... if i said "move-in" for the "kill".. he'll probley ask how much rest-was... so "ill" if u dont get it now... u'll get it soon... cuz i got this win in the "bag" like Shop-Lifters "changeing room"... plus ya sucky so even if u get a vote u'll be lucky... cuz i got ya head-pic like eddie griffin buck wheat... fuck, i'll wreck ya fleet, nah he's wack cant really mess with me... taking a 7-day vacation is Asultin... cuz ya u'r "style-is-week".... "weak" i'll put the nine in ya ear N let u feel the sound of fear... cuz ya skill's like baseball... bearly seen around this time of year... so tell me why ya chest harden?, i'll leave u with spear scars man... da gat i'll leave u with more "knick shot's" then Madison Square Garden.. like "cooked beef" u'll get drop after the knife... N like "urine samples" on autobiographies "i'll piss on ya chaper of life"... Punches Always land.. claiming U Cant Ssee straight cuz I got Mad Hooks..... plus Beatin U is 'No Problem' Just like BLANK MATHBOOKS...... whatever.... nice drop.... |
make sure you guys vote on his completed verse...one...GL IE
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Voted For: Ill-Grammatix
I.G won this battle bcuz he had way more punches that hit harder. Good spit as usual. Structure was on point n good creativity. I.E had a good verse as well,however, he didnt have enuff hot bars to counter I.G so he gets this bcuz of quantity of punches. holla at ya boy http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=154205 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=154457 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=154456 |
upp'in this.........................................
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uppin for votes.... holla honestly and we'll return the favor
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let's close this out... battle needs votes... will return the favor of an honest vote...leave links..one
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upp'in this battle..........................................
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This was feedback posted for intensify effect
checkin polls..........
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^^^ u should of voted forget peeping the poll's.......
we had our difference but thats dead no beef lets keep it gangsta no need to hate on someone whos doing ya thing just like i im ya feel me, BUT!!!! i still want a re-match dogs 4real.... upp'in for votes...... |
This was feedback posted for intensify effect
i want free money so i resulted into feedbacking:)
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^^^ WTF???
u could of took 2 min of ya life just to drop a few extra words to vote in this battle so whats good?? u couldnt do that??? |
upp'in for a coupe of votes i will return the favor..........
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yo Forsaken...lol...wus ya account #... i think i still got a hidden stash somewhere..lol |
upp'in this battle for more votes mang...............
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upp'in this battle......
good luck much props...... |
upp'in this battle............................................ ...........
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uppin this battle ... c'mon ppl let's get this over with already
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upp'in this battle yet again fellas whats good.......
i will return only honest vote..... |
Voted For: Ill-Grammatix
This was a pretty weak battle. IG started really weak, but picked it up toward the end. IE never picked it up.....so Vote - Ill Gramatix Vote on my battle bitches http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157553 |
can we get a bar by bar explaination going on here.....
with a better explation or somethign..... |
yeah for real... i appreciate the vote but yo... why vote if the shyt is gonna get deleted for not explaining it?
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upp'in for more votes people dont sleep on this battle........
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u'll get toasted herb, u know what my path is roast'in nerds...
the only way i'll be "below average" if is u "posted first" that shit was hot and i was feeling it u'r verse was tight with a good flow and nice punches that hit hard and all around just was raw and i felt ya verse from jump till end the other guy verse was tight as-well but i just aint feel like he aint have no quotables so there for I.E verse was better but i'll son both of ya in a battle so DONT FUCK WITH ME |
upp'in for votes.......
who the hell is this kid hang-man..... lady fiya would merk U dunny..... |
Voted For: Ill-Grammatix
i-g, some simular lines here that you dropped in our battle....but w/e.... line limit had alot to do with this battle, in my opinion if ie wouldve dropped more he wouldve had it... i thought his metas n punches were nicer. ..but flow goes to i-g...i-g ya punches were kinda on the weak side compared to what ive seen.."honestly"... both had good structure...creativitie goes to ie though but overall im gonna go with i-g for my vote.. . word of advice ie< drop more then that next time n you might win..pc.. |
DAZ did u vote on this verse......
u'll get toasted herb, u know what my path is roast'in nerds... the only way i'll be "below average" if is u "posted first" * ha* Grammatix a chump, he aint know I.E wreck-thugs... if i said "move-in" for the "kill".. he'll probley ask how much rest-was... so "ill" if u dont get it now... u'll get it soon... cuz i got this win in the "bag" like Shop-Lifters "changeing room"... plus ya sucky so even if u get a vote u'll be lucky... cuz i got ya head-pic like eddie griffin buck wheat... fuck, i'll wreck ya fleet, nah he's wack cant really mess with me... taking a 7-day vacation is Asultin... cuz ya u'r "style-is-week".... "weak" i'll put the nine in ya ear N let u feel the sound of fear... cuz ya skill's like baseball... bearly seen around this time of year... so tell me why ya chest harden?, i'll leave u with spear scars man... da gat i'll leave u with more "knick shot's" then Madison Square Garden.. like "cooked beef" u'll get drop after the knife... N like "urine samples" on autobiographies "i'll piss on ya chaper of life"... Punches Always land.. claiming U Cant Ssee straight cuz I got Mad Hooks..... plus Beatin U is 'No Problem' Just like BLANK MATHBOOKS...... or this verse............ u'll get toasted herb, u know what my path is roast'in nerds... the only way i'll be "below average" if is u "posted first" * ha* Grammatix a chump, he aint know I.E wreck-thugs... if i said "move-in" for the "kill".. he'll probley ask how much rest-was... so "ill" if u dont get it now... u'll get it soon... cuz i got this win in the "bag" like Shop-Lifters "changeing room" plus ya sucky so even if u get respect that'll be lucky cuz i got ya head-pic like eddie griffin buck wheat i think ua int see the whole verse fam.. |
you both kno n been here long enough to kno how this system works...voters cannot see ie's completed verse.so this thread n battle should be closed n verses should be copy/pasted into a new battle thead...!
com'on you both kno this.... why waste voters time..?..?!!!!!!!!!!! |
damn...ya know... i ain't even think about that... and it's obvious that my opponent didn't either... it's easy to forget about that when ya got access from the beginning... Yo I.E. ... if ya wanna scrap this battle then it's cool with me... i don't wanna have an unfair advantage over ya shyt since peeps can see ya whole shyt.... holla back...one
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i think he prolly would...lol....srry i thought ya'll knew....lol
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yea we can end this one... and re-open a new one with the whole verse in it and see again who would of won... we can do that since its fair enough.... yea close this one and re-open a new one with the whole verse in it.... |
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