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10 - 20 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 10-12-04 at 10:10 AM

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One-Man-Band has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-09-04 10:12 AM.

String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 04:50 PM.

Ima leave ya up in a daze… look at him………. no doubt this chump is a gay
Fucker ya lame.. ya couldnt even tie this one if ya read the front of ya name
As I punch watch my glove gleam… ya flow's more stagnant than a mud stream
I flood scenes, dropping something dope to make ya skin jump ya blood stream
Ya suck, you're wack, i think it's time all of us demoted this dude
I guess ya beat a couple peeps, too bad only newbs voted fa you
The gay in you lusts.. kid ya pray on the nuts of every vet that you see
Said you wanted a good battle, whos ya #1 pic? heh you bet it was me
Leave what's above ya neck in debris……. crack ya whole spinal column n' set
I got 'em in check.. dude's gotta good rec, but sorry, ya still just a wanna be vet
No chatter or play, ya get beat battered n’ maimed, sledge hammers shatter ya frame
crushin ya set.. you playin Russian Roulette n’ the first round jus splattered ya brain
Ya gotta admit.. its obvious shit…... I rip a lotta you kids when I bust cuts
Ya done. Ima treat this like ctrl+alt+delete……… and “shut” the “fuck up”*
OK.. ill stop, it's insane how i'm rockin ya brains.. got me dispursin a killer
I aint even tryin kid.. check again, in my books this whole verse was a filler



*ya know when some shit fucks up.. ya push ctrl alt delete to shut it? well yeah...

STRING IS IN THE BUILDING!!!!!!!

yo, dont come in here wit that lame spit
this flame prick,licked the same clit,jenna jameson played wit
u aint shit,ya punches is wack, n each one is a sin
he like a Sealy mattress, i sleep on him n win
this one-man-band, gon b one man down
he red wit embarassment like u got a sun tan now
ya head pumped up, like this lil fuck is bustin
but he couldnt "Make the Band" if he was Puffy's cousin(oooh)
he fell off real quick, u aint quite on my level
its makes no sense homie, u throwin ice at the Devil
ima let u try twice
cuz son ya punches bout as precise.. as 3- blind -mice
25-9? he must of bought him a deal
u a carbon copy bitch i neva thought u was "real"
eventually when i spit the messages has gotta get thru
fuck punches, jabs n uppercuts, i throw karate kicks too
i'll body this dude,he try to get hair on his face from eatin puss
too bad his flows make as much sense as a speech from Bush
he think he got a throne, watch as i rob him
One man's bad at math, cuz HE DONT WANT NO PROBLEMS

uppin for votes holla at ya boy

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Open Mic's

Lick Shots=Hitchcock feat Paul Cain and The Sick One
Opposite of Cold= The Cartel
Dear Others=Hitchcock
Kill That Static=Hitchcock

uppin for votes holla at ya boy

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Open Mic's

Lick Shots=Hitchcock feat Paul Cain and The Sick One
Opposite of Cold= The Cartel
Dear Others=Hitchcock
Kill That Static=Hitchcock

Voted For: One-Man-Band

good battle.

OMB - u came tight as man...this verse had bombs all through it. personals all throughout the whole verse connected. dope vocab and wordplay as always. structure good flow good.

String - this was a decent drop aswell u had some good personals there. sick opener. flow was good. no disrespect to u mate u just aint on the same level as OMB sorry kid. OMB gets my vote.

return the favour.

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Voted For: String9487

MY Dawg, OMB:

Ima leave ya up in a daze… look at him………. no doubt this chump is a gay
Fucker ya lame.. ya couldnt even tie this one if ya read the front of ya name

whoa... c'mon O, ya started off with a gay line and then came with a weak follow-up line... definitely the weakest opener ya ever dropped... pick it up from here on out

As I punch watch my glove gleam… ya flow's more stagnant than a mud stream
I flood scenes, dropping something dope to make ya skin jump ya blood stream

ok... multies were there... no real punch yet but i feel a set-up for sum'n coming

Ya suck, you're wack, i think it's time all of us demoted this dude
I guess ya beat a couple peeps, too bad only newbs voted fa you

ehhh...played concept... wus going on with you in this one O?

The gay in you lusts.. kid ya pray on the nuts of every vet that you see
Said you wanted a good battle, whos ya #1 pic? heh you bet it was me

nice... like the personal about who he picked vet-wise...lol

Leave what's above ya neck in debris……. crack ya whole spinal column n' set
I got 'em in check.. dude's gotta good rec, but sorry, ya still just a wanna be vet

about as effective as the last line.. keep em coming

No chatter or play, ya get beat battered n’ maimed, sledge hammers shatter ya frame
crushin ya set.. you playin Russian Roulette n’ the first round jus splattered ya brain

ehhh... starting to fall short again... nice multies though

Ya gotta admit.. its obvious shit…... I rip a lotta you kids when I bust cuts
Ya done. Ima treat this like ctrl+alt+delete……… and “shut” the “fuck up”*

lmao... i liked the way ya phrased it... seen this before but not the way you put it...lol

OK.. ill stop, it's insane how i'm rockin ya brains.. got me dispursin a killer
I aint even tryin kid.. check again, in my books this whole verse was a filler

lmao... decent closer... it hurts to think that this was all filler...lol 7.5/10

STRING:
yo, dont come in here wit that lame spit
this flame prick,licked the same clit,jenna jameson played wit

lol...funny shyt... ok opener

u aint shit,ya punches is wack, n each one is a sin
he like a Sealy mattress, i sleep on him n win

ehhh...played concept...filler line

this one-man-band, gon b one man down
he red wit embarassment like u got a sun tan now

lol...decent punch... so far so good

ya head pumped up, like this lil fuck is bustin
but he couldnt "Make the Band" if he was Puffy's cousin(oooh)

hmmm... not too sure about this one... not bad but not great either... coulda been better

he fell off real quick, u aint quite on my level
its makes no sense homie, u throwin ice at the Devil

basic line here... nothing impressive

ima let u try twice
cuz son ya punches bout as precise.. as 3- blind -mice

again with the funny shyt....lol

25-9? he must of bought him a deal
u a carbon copy bitch i neva thought u was "real"

average line again...pick up the pace here

eventually when i spit the messages has gotta get thru
fuck punches, jabs n uppercuts, i throw karate kicks too

ok... might sound effective in audio with the different inflections in the voice but this is text

i'll body this dude,he try to get hair on his face from eatin puss
too bad his flows make as much sense as a speech from Bush

blah at this line... definitely filler

he think he got a throne, watch as i rob him
One man's bad at math, cuz HE DONT WANT NO PROBLEMS

ok closer... shoulda hit a lot harder here 7.9/10

as you can see this was a real close one in my eyes... OMB came weaker than his regular drops... no real bombs dropped in this one... multies were on point as usual but the personals and punches were lacking....

String tried to hit more consistantly with the punches... he came with a simpler more up-in-ya-face kinda style but it was effective enough to pull out the win...

respect to both... holla at my links when ya get a chance

word thanks 4 the honest votes..

IG pm me if ya want the favor returned.. same with most

word.. i think i half underestimated this battle.. eh..

UPPIN!

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Open Mic's

Lick Shots=Hitchcock feat Paul Cain and The Sick One
Opposite of Cold= The Cartel
Dear Others=Hitchcock
Kill That Static=Hitchcock

Voted For: One-Man-Band

Ima leave ya up in a daze… look at him………. no doubt this chump is a gay
Fucker ya lame.. ya couldnt even tie this one if ya read the front of ya name
As I punch watch my glove gleam… ya flow's more stagnant than a mud stream
I flood scenes, dropping something dope to make ya skin jump ya blood stream
Ya suck, you're wack, i think it's time all of us demoted this dude
I guess ya beat a couple peeps, too bad only newbs voted fa you
The gay in you lusts.. kid ya pray on the nuts of every vet that you see
Said you wanted a good battle, whos ya #1 pic? heh you bet it was me
Leave what's above ya neck in debris……. crack ya whole spinal column n' set
I got 'em in check.. dude's gotta good rec, but sorry, ya still just a wanna be vet
No chatter or play, ya get beat battered n’ maimed, sledge hammers shatter ya frame
crushin ya set.. you playin Russian Roulette n’ the first round jus splattered ya brain
Ya gotta admit.. its obvious shit…... I rip a lotta you kids when I bust cuts
Ya done. Ima treat this like ctrl+alt+delete……… and “shut” the “fuck up”*
OK.. ill stop, it's insane how i'm rockin ya brains.. got me dispursin a killer
I aint even tryin kid.. check again, in my books this whole verse was a filler
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ G-G-G-GODLY LOL NICE VERSE GOOD PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AND GOOD FLOW NICE MULTI'Z



yo, dont come in here wit that lame spit
this flame prick,licked the same clit,jenna jameson played wit
u aint shit,ya punches is wack, n each one is a sin
he like a Sealy mattress, i sleep on him n win
this one-man-band, gon b one man down
he red wit embarassment like u got a sun tan now
ya head pumped up, like this lil fuck is bustin
but he couldnt "Make the Band" if he was Puffy's cousin(oooh)
he fell off real quick, u aint quite on my level
its makes no sense homie, u throwin ice at the Devil
ima let u try twice
cuz son ya punches bout as precise.. as 3- blind -mice
25-9? he must of bought him a deal
u a carbon copy bitch i neva thought u was "real"
eventually when i spit the messages has gotta get thru
fuck punches, jabs n uppercuts, i throw karate kicks too
i'll body this dude,he try to get hair on his face from eatin puss
too bad his flows make as much sense as a speech from Bush
he think he got a throne, watch as i rob him
One man's bad at math, cuz HE DONT WANT NO PROBLEMS
^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE VERSE GOOD FLOW NICE USIN PUNCHES AND PERSONALS


V-OMB HE JUST CAME HARDER WIT DEM PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AND MULTI

BEST LINE:Leave what's above ya neck in debris……. crack ya whole spinal column n' set
I got 'em in check.. dude's gotta good rec, but sorry, ya still just a wanna be vet
No chatter or play, ya get beat battered n’ maimed, sledge hammers shatter ya frame
crushin ya set.. you playin Russian Roulette n’ the first round jus splattered ya brain
Ya gotta admit.. its obvious shit…... I rip a lotta you kids when I bust cuts
Ya done. Ima treat this like ctrl+alt+delete……… and “shut” the “fuck up”*
OK.. ill stop, it's insane how i'm rockin ya brains.. got me dispursin a killer
I aint even tryin kid.. check again, in my books this whole verse was a filler


STRING-NICE VERSE U HAD GOOD PUNCHES BUT OMB CAME ALOR HARDER IN DAT SECTION (PUNCHES) NICE FLOW PERSONALS& PUNCHES WERE GOOD BUT OMB CAME ALOT HARDER WIT DEM PUNCHES& MULTI'Z

BEST LINE:
yo, dont come in here wit that lame spit
this flame prick,licked the same clit,jenna jameson played wit
u aint shit,ya punches is wack, n each one is a sin
he like a Sealy mattress, i sleep on him n win
this one-man-band, gon b one man down
he red wit embarassment like u got a sun tan now
ya head pumped up, like this lil fuck is bustin
but he couldnt "Make the Band" if he was Puffy's cousin(oooh)
^^^^^^^^^ HA HA HA LOL


~PEACE~

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