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Dopeman vs Malefic
Battle Rules:
10 - 12 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 125 Check in by: 10-13-04 at 12:27 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Dopeman has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 12:28 PM.
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Malefic has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 12:32 PM.
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dope is ''coming for ya''...
the ''deep within'' cant do nothin for ya..*1* u can run, u can hide, or even duck, man my punches still gon fuck you up.. fat bitch you got wide load on ya huge ass like the back of a truck...*2* u aint gotta worry bout my flow, check your heart beat... cause off one bar i'm eatin at u like u'd eat ur lunch meat..!*3* ''no surrender an no retreat'' so my texts will 'dilute' you an ya 'peoples'.. no messin, gettin straight to the point with the disses like a churches steeple..*4* ya out for the count an nobody can be ya hero... so add a 1 to ya record inplace of zero..*5* ya gettin burnt like nero an this aint even a cd... to make it official i'ma t-bagg ya eyes so u really can never ''see-me''..! *6* |
The Council?...DopeMan?...and Welcome to the south?
Whats it mean? Your O-town self is an Empire Scout! Im like your title there son....and your KRS-ONE.. Lookin up for talent, but like your town, there is Nun(0-town) Dope?...Nope...Kid your a highlight realm full of bloopers- An the best one was when you actually called urself Trooper Please, Droppin verse you, It's like a DMV with no cone's I tear the muscle out your mouth, an spit thru ur jaw bone End your wit's wit spit...to leave fucked like pink lips Readin ur lyrics, so-stretched- it's like my CPU-skipped |
This was feedback posted for Malefic
sound like you was actually talking than rapping.........
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If you only knew....
LMAO. |
Voted For: Malefic
I Give This To Malefic... dopeman: Structure Was Poor. Ya Lines were stretched Like Mad. Really Messed Up Ya Flow (in my opinion). Decent punches But Wern't As Creative. Ya Had Multies But In Parts They Sounded Kinda Forced. Malefic: Nice structure. Flow Was On Point. Had Some Multies In This. Nice Wordplay And Metas. Punches Hit Harder Than His. And Ya Had A Couple Of decent Personals. Nice Verse. Vote: Malefic |
everybody vote against dopeman cuz he iz a dikkhead
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hotness stay the fuck out of grown mans business u fuckin idiot
upin this battle, pretty nice verse malefic, g'luck.. |
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^^^ what is that suppose to mean? o an upin |
it meenz u r whakked u biatch iam going 2 make peep vote aganst u dikkheed
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.........................fuck...
off...............okay? jesus christ you hang on my cock like you wannabe my testicles, get the hell on with that... upin yall |
Voted For: Malefic
Malefic The Council?...DopeMan?...and Welcome to the south? Whats it mean? Your O-town self is an Empire Scout! Nice punch there good structure and flow Im like your title there son....and your KRS-ONE.. Lookin up for talent, but like your town, there is Nun(0-town) Good punch again liked the way u dissed his location Dope?...Nope...Kid your a highlight realm full of bloopers- An the best one was when you actually called urself Trooper A good punch but i think a link would've made this bar stronger Please, Droppin verse you, It's like a DMV with no cone's I tear the muscle out your mouth, an spit thru ur jaw bone Nice wordplay here punch and flow on point End your wit's wit spit...to leave fucked like pink lips Readin ur lyrics, so-stretched- it's like my CPU-skipped Nice closer and wordplay Dopeman dope is ''coming for ya''... the ''deep within'' cant do nothin for ya..*1* no punch same line rhyme...na flow good but thats it u can run, u can hide, or even duck, man my punches still gon fuck you up.. fat bitch you got wide load on ya huge ass like the back of a truck...*2* 1st line no diss really 2nd line played punch aight at best u aint gotta worry bout my flow, check your heart beat... cause off one bar i'm eatin at u like u'd eat ur lunch meat..!*3* hmm an aight punch but not amazingly strong ''no surrender an no retreat'' so my texts will 'dilute' you an ya 'peoples'.. no messin, gettin straight to the point with the disses like a churches steeple..*4* 1st line had flow kinda self glory 2nd line if ya gettin to the point then start coz there was no diss there dawg ur wastin lines ya out for the count an nobody can be ya hero... so add a 1 to ya record inplace of zero..*5* Again no decent punch diss can't see flow good though ya gettin burnt like nero an this aint even a cd... to make it official i'ma t-bagg ya eyes so u really can never ''see-me''..! *6* 1st line aight better 2nd line was aight too but not a strong closer V/Malefic He had the better punches and was more consistant overall. Dopeness u had hardly any punches to be honest flow was all you had and eve Malefic beat you on that because u had short lines then long lines str8 after ur punches hardly any seen and when there were punches...they lacked...u still need elevation dawg... Malefic...nice punches and decent flow like i said u did take this relatively easily in my opinion u had him on flow structure ur punches killed this battle as did ur personals fav lines in particular were the O-Town lines good flippage on that... Another thing Dopeness...lose the *1* thing it's very newb like the / thing :thumbup: RTF in ma sig vs KING_LUCIF |
yea yea, 2-0 him, nice one
upppin for more votes............. |
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Voted For: Malefic
u had beter punches without doubt u had better personals u had a better flow ur structure was also better dope work on that structure itll help ur flow alot and up the vocab both |
Voted For: Malefic
Malefic won this battle bcuz his punches hit harder and structure was good. Dopeman's verse was pretty corny, didnt flow well at all, n the punches didnt hit very hard. only one good bar from him about the church steeples. so malefic takes this battle holla at me http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=154205 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=154456 |
couldnt agree more...
ya got the win malefic, i came weak, good job |
This was feedback posted for Malefic
Yea you won this due to having better punches simply.
More direct and you connected with 2 good bars. Nothing over average.. pretty much average. Not bad tho.. a lot better what I've seen on here. V/Mal |
Uppin.
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Voted For: Malefic
The Council?...DopeMan?...and Welcome to the south? Whats it mean? Your O-town self is an Empire Scout! Im like your title there son....and your KRS-ONE.. Lookin up for talent, but like your town, there is Nun(0-town) Dope?...Nope...Kid your a highlight realm full of bloopers- An the best one was when you actually called urself Trooper Please, Droppin verse you, It's like a DMV with no cone's I tear the muscle out your mouth, an spit thru ur jaw bone End your wit's wit spit...to leave fucked like pink lips Readin ur lyrics, so-stretched- it's like my CPU-skipped ^all original lines in this battle, with the O-town, lol... only thing that kinda fell off was the last bar.. best bar: was the one with the DMV with no cones, creative.. and funny, nice malefic... dope is ''coming for ya''... the ''deep within'' cant do nothin for ya..*1* u can run, u can hide, or even duck, man my punches still gon fuck you up.. fat bitch you got wide load on ya huge ass like the back of a truck...*2* u aint gotta worry bout my flow, check your heart beat... cause off one bar i'm eatin at u like u'd eat ur lunch meat..!*3* ''no surrender an no retreat'' so my texts will 'dilute' you an ya 'peoples'.. no messin, gettin straight to the point with the disses like a churches steeple..*4* ya out for the count an nobody can be ya hero... so add a 1 to ya record inplace of zero..*5* ya gettin burnt like nero an this aint even a cd... to make it official i'ma t-bagg ya eyes so u really can never ''see-me''..! *6* ^ur structure was messed up in this battle.. sum of ur lines were played the church and the steeple comin' to a point.. and the dilute and peoples portions, the opener was terrible i have no idea what u were thinkin' puttin' that as a opener.. this shit was like a newbie-challenged verse or sumthin' (being honest).. the closer was the only portion that was aight.. everything else was crappy.. u basically didn't come hard enuff, dopeman, malefic took the punches and structure and personals sum what... that's my vote, malefic... |
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