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Hitchcock 10-10-04 05:44 PM

String9487 vs Dopeman
 
Battle Rules:

10 bars max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 10-13-04 at 05:44 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Hitchcock 10-10-04 05:45 PM

do me a favor n voet on my battle wit Leazy

System 10-10-04 05:45 PM

Dopeman has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 05:45 PM.

System 10-10-04 05:46 PM

String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 05:46 PM.

Dirty Nigga 10-10-04 06:08 PM

this lil fuck sayin ''please dope, take it eazy''..
who the hell do you think i am huh? leazy?...
this is round 2 the first time i admit you beat-me...
i was glorifyin, it was horriyfin, now you need a ghostwriter to defeat-me..
its a brand new day an i'ma brand new emcee..
i can see the word elevate dosent apply to you..
from your rhyme scheme i'd say homer an you have the same I.Q!..
ya rhymes are about as random as the numbers in ya name..
one thing we can take from this we can show yo mom the girl you've became!
stealin yo sisters panties an wearin her lipstick..
ass cheeks open for some dude named bubba moanin ''ahhh this some nice dick''..
thinkin your in prison an you dropped the soap...
SON, you was a mistake an conceived over ''dope''....

expanations.......
he murderd some dude named leazy n claims he didnt even try...
an the finisher, uhmmm...i'm implying i'm his father an we n his momma only had him as a mistake cause we fucked cause his momma is a dope fiend....ya know? kinda smart if you think about it (sarcasm lol)

Hitchcock 10-13-04 02:39 AM

STRING IS IN THE BUILDING!!!!!

eh yo i dont know why i waste time on this irrelevant fuck
the knife poke out ya face like some elephant tusks
u aint hot, u a disaster, ya heart is shook fasta
n ya rhymes look sorta like u a Garth Brooks rappa
look,.. this hoes gotta pay
cuz he lose more times than the team the Harlem Globetrotters play
u gon have lumps on ya face the size of Lebron's nose
ugly as a lawn gnome, n dopeman change his name more than Sean Combs
.....Alias's unneccessary
quit trippin, cuz u aint affordin to bling
punches drop u flat on the mat, call me Lord of the Ring
watch this thug get punched
ima have to "Bitch" dopeman, bcuz i already "Son'd" him once(ooo)
u aint hard nucca, u dont keep the steel sheeth
n u soy burger rapper, u aint ready for real beef
u feel meek, bcuz my textual trident
make this homosexual frightened, his testicles tighten
u can play this verse back like DVD
u cant see me G, Dopeman on that crack, cocaine, or PCP

Hitchcock 10-13-04 02:41 AM

uppin for votes holla at ya boy

HottnessDefined 10-13-04 06:02 AM

Voted For: Dopeman

dopeman wun diz battl hiz flow wuz sik even doh hes a bitch hiz flow wuz nice i likd da punchez and hiz flow it wuz sik dat last line wuz nice diz other guy had ok flow 2 but not az strong datz y i vote fo u ok

Dirty Nigga 10-13-04 07:59 AM

hottness, fuck off votin for me all the time with your bullshit votes

upin for real votes

Psyco 10-13-04 02:35 PM

Voted For: Dopeman

Dopeman
this lil fuck sayin ''please dope, take it eazy''..
who the hell do you think i am huh? leazy?...
8/10 good opener

this is round 2 the first time i admit you beat-me...
i was glorifyin, it was horriyfin, now you need a ghostwriter to defeat-me..
7/10 good punch in that line there

its a brand new day an i'ma brand new emcee..
i can see the word elevate dosent apply to you..
7/10 not a bad punch and a little bit of personal in there

from your rhyme scheme i'd say homer an you have the same I.Q!..
ya rhymes are about as random as the numbers in ya name..
10/10 good punch and personal

one thing we can take from this we can show yo mom the girl you've became!
stealin yo sisters panties an wearin her lipstick..
10/10 personal heaven

ass cheeks open for some dude named bubba moanin ''ahhh this some nice dick''..
9/10 ha ha good line

thinkin your in prison an you dropped the soap...
SON, you was a mistake an conceived over ''dope''....
9/10 good closer
total 60/70 great job

string

eh yo i dont know why i waste time on this irrelevant fuck
the knife poke out ya face like some elephant tusks
6/10 not a very good opener aginst a vet

u aint hot, u a disaster, ya heart is shook fasta
n ya rhymes look sorta like u a Garth Brooks rappa
5/10 not a good line at all

look,.. this hoes gotta pay
cuz he lose more times than the team the Harlem
Globetrotters play
5/10 no punch or any thing just a filler

u gon have lumps on ya face the size of Lebron's nose
ugly as a lawn gnome, n dopeman change his name more than Sean Combs
7.5/10 a little bit of punch and a personal but not much

.....Alias's unneccessary
quit trippin, cuz u aint affordin to bling
5/10 nothing but filler

punches drop u flat on the mat, call me Lord of the Ring
watch this thug get punched
6/10 a very small punch

ima have to "Bitch" dopeman, bcuz i already "Son'd" him once(ooo)
u aint hard nucca, u dont keep the steel sheeth
4/10 not much rhyming in that just filling in the blanks

n u soy burger rapper, u aint ready for real beef
u feel meek, bcuz my textual trident
6/10 another small punch

make this homosexual frightened, his testicles tighten
u can play this verse back like DVD
9/10 ok a good punch but not great

u cant see me G, Dopeman on that crack, cocaine, or PCP
1/5 bad closer
total 54.5/95

vote /Dopeman
easy win
and for the record string you need toat least make your lines an even amount

return the favor
CeRtIfIeDtHuG
x-on
lil rip
TitoBronsky

Dirty Nigga 10-13-04 03:28 PM

upin yall, dont sleep...
honest votes will be returned if ya leave a link

Hitchcock 10-13-04 06:18 PM

genocide obviously doesnt know what a punch is but w.e uppin for votes

Dirty Nigga 10-13-04 06:21 PM

a upppin yall
g'luck string..............
honest well explained votes will be returned
peace

Dirty Nigga 10-14-04 08:52 AM

can we get sme honest votes an they will be returned if honest an well explained
uppppppin

Hitchcock 10-14-04 10:28 PM

genocide obviously doesnt know what a punch is but w.e uppin for votes

Dirty Nigga 10-15-04 05:59 AM

yeayea.....
........................
!
upin yall

Dirty Nigga 10-16-04 11:25 AM

can we get some honest votes an thye will be returned?
peace

Hitchcock 10-16-04 11:38 AM

uppin for votes holla at ya boy in PM if u want the votes returned wit honest opinions

Hitchcock 10-16-04 05:02 PM

uppin for votes holla at ya boy in PM if u want the votes returned wit honest opinions

Dirty Nigga 10-16-04 07:11 PM

dont sleep
dont sleep
an dont sleep
upppppppppppppppin

Hitchcock 10-16-04 10:56 PM

uppin for votes holla at ya boy in PM if u want the votes returned wit honest opinions
__________________

Dirty Nigga 10-17-04 11:44 AM

dont sleep folks
upppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hitchcock 10-17-04 12:56 PM

uppin for votes holla at ya boy in PM if u want the votes returned wit honest opinions

Dirty Nigga 10-17-04 06:51 PM

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dont sleep..........
honest votes will be returned

GKillaz 10-17-04 07:06 PM

Voted For: Dopeman

Dopeman - good spit man, your flow was on and you had some good punches in there.

Best Line - ya rhymes are about as random as the numbers in ya name..
one thing we can take from this we can show yo mom the girl you've became!

Worst Line - this is round 2 the first time i admit you beat-me...
i was glorifyin, it was horriyfin, now you need a ghostwriter to defeat-me..

String - Good spit man, you had a good flow and your punches were hiten hard.

Best Line - look,.. this hoes gotta pay
cuz he lose more times than the team the Harlem Globetrotters play

Worst Line - quit trippin, cuz u aint affordin to bling
punches drop u flat on the mat, call me Lord of the Ring

OVERALL - This was a close battle.. but I gotta give it to, Dopeman.. I just felt his flow a lil more.. and his punches were hitten a lil harder. Was a close battle tho.. String your shit was good too, I just felt his more.. no hate.. peace

Vote - Dopeman

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Dirty Nigga 10-19-04 06:34 AM

thank you
can we get more votes?
honest well explained votes will be returnd

Parallel 10-19-04 06:27 PM

Voted For: Dopeman

DopeMan:
k you clearly won string if weak to how many wins and shit he has lol...nice stucture nice flow a lil vocab not bad..haha rhymed haha...but ya cearly better punches onesided by far:laugh: your punches were hot and nice wordplay stucture like i said took him this was clearly a one sided biatch hahahahahahahahha...

String:
k dawg that was weak you have wack stucture and no vocab no punches no nuffing try elevating haha you have nothing period ahha.....try elevation lol you need it bad like man you ahve no punches or wordplay it needs so much work a lil multis but multis just give lots of flow...thats it...so ya

VOTE: DopeMan

Dirty Nigga 10-19-04 07:15 PM

upin yall
1 more voted needed for the win
dont sleep

Dirty Nigga 10-20-04 06:50 AM

uppin people
dont sleep
1 more vote needed
honets votes will be returned

Hitchcock 10-20-04 10:26 PM

uppin for votes, tired of gettin hated on but w/e

Dirty Nigga 10-21-04 05:33 AM

would yall STOP sleepin
one more vote is needed
so dont hesitate to drop a dman vote

Dirty Nigga 10-21-04 10:57 AM

can we get the final vote?
it will be returned!!!!

TuNiT 10-22-04 07:21 AM

Voted For: Dopeman

iight, diz wuznt a very close battle
string yuh came weak, da puns didnt hit at all, da vocab was soft an da personals wernt much better, u need elevation

dopeman yuh flow wuz iight da bars connected well, da puns were hot in most places, i dunt understand yo openener? but fo da most part yuh flow wuz sickening, u got diz hands down, but it wuznt da strongest oppenent


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