Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-14-04 at 03:56 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

~...razor...~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-04 03:57 PM.

"gkillaz" wtf i'll kill u down
u punches weaker than water i got the crown

never underate me ill smak u down-town
ur face worse than shit ur worse than a chicken jumpin up n down

ur just 1 of thoses fuck herbs who cant rap or use verbs
id love2 c u trip of curbs man u gay ass cunt ur face disturbs

u act like a girl use a wax machine
ur a twat worse than a mexican jumping bean

die bitch die in hell u go ur names fucked up yes u no
man poor basterd live in da streets and he go no doe the fuckin ho-mo

GKillaz has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 03:44 PM.

If one punch hit ya, it'll kill ya like thunder...
Thats all it takes.. your a one hit wonder...
Leave ya 6ft under... RV aint goin to miss you...
You got a rappin' issue, softer then a tissue...
Razor's skills be like ghosts they just dont exist...
You cant touch this, razor aint shit like piss...
Make your last wish before your no longer here...
Ya couldnt flow if I drank ya n pissed ya out like beer...
My punches hit ya over n over there instantaneous...
New names Ben Dover, I left you fucked like an anus...

HAHAHAHA.. good luck!!

upin.............................................. ..

uppin.........................................

Voted For: GKillaz

gkillaz" wtf i'll kill u down
u punches weaker than water i got the crown
^^^^^^^^^EHHHH NOT AN GODO OPENER PLUS NOT AN GODO DECENT PUNCH ELEVATE ON PUNCHES


never underate me ill smak u down-town
ur face worse than shit ur worse than a chicken jumpin up n down

ur just 1 of thoses fuck herbs who cant rap or use verbs
id love2 c u trip of curbs man u gay ass cunt ur face disturbs

u act like a girl use a wax machine
ur a twat worse than a mexican jumping bean
^^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD FLOW HERE BUT DA PUNCHES ARENT STANDIN OUT,,,,,U CAME WEAK ON DIS PART NO PERSONALS NOR GOOD PUNCHES


die bitch die in hell u go ur names fucked up yes u no
man poor basterd live in da streets and he go no doe the fuckin ho-mo
^^^^^^^^^^^^ GAY PUNCHES ARE SO PLAYED USE MORE CREATIVE PUNCHES "OK"

RAZOR-YO PUNCHES CAME WEAK AND PLUS U DIDNT HAVE ANY CREATIVE PUNCHES TOO BASIC IN MY EYES


If one punch hit ya, it'll kill ya like thunder...
Thats all it takes.. your a one hit wonder...
^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE OPENER GOOD PUNCH NICE FLOW


Leave ya 6ft under... RV aint goin to miss you...
You got a rappin' issue, softer then a tissue...
Razor's skills be like ghosts they just dont exist...
You cant touch this, razor aint shit like piss...
Make your last wish before your no longer here...
Ya couldnt flow if I drank ya n pissed ya out like beer...
^^^^^^^^^ERRR "OK" PUNCHES GOOD FLOW BETTA DAN RAZOR


My punches hit ya over n over there instantaneous...
New names Ben Dover, I left you fucked like an anus...
^^^^^^^^^^ NICE CLOSA GOOD PUNCH NICE FLOW

GKILLAZ-U HAD GOOD FLOW NICE PUNCHES AND GOOD WORDPLAYS

V-GKILLA HE JUST CAME HARDER WIT DEM PUNCHES AND PLUS HE GOT MORE CREATIVE

RAZOR-U NEED TO ELEVATE ON PUNCHES YO PUNCHES CAME WEAK IN DIS BATTLE,,,,USE MORE CREATIVE PUNCHES "Ok"

v-GKILLAZ CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW

~PEACE~

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Voted For: GKillaz

gkillaz nice verse mayne i liked it and it flowed well... the punches were hella funny...

razor you need to elevate your lines flow but they dont hit... try to find punches that you can use...

v/ gkillaz

uppin......................

i forgot to mention repay the favour links in the sig... thnx

come on people we need you to drop and explain... V O T E S

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Fucka E-Style, Its da mothafuckin G-Side

Voted For: GKillaz

alright, soo GKIllaz took this. .better punches.. better flow.. and structure..


Overall Gkillaz was a lot better

Razor, you need to elevate man.. your verse was pretty wack.. look at other peoples battles and study them, learn what they do, it will help..


Vote g Killz

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Voted For: GKillaz

aight
pretty tight battle
killaz...
ya flow was decent as hell, nice punches an personals, in a few bars ya shit was kinda uncreative, but ya punches still got you my vote..
nice drop...

razor, ya flow was decent, original in places, an ya vocab could have been better, decent punches, personals wernt as strong as killaz
stp ya game up a little, no hate tho
just tellin it how i see it

return the fave in my sig
peace

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