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Cal'Q'luS vs G_$peed
Battle Rules: 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 30 Minutes Ta Check In 1 Hour Ta Drop Your Verse- Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-12-04 at 07:09 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
G_$peed has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-12-04 06:41 PM.
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Cal'Q'luS has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-12-04 06:41 PM.
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Dont be posin calqlus and go play wit ur abakiss...
you tryin so hard to win bitch dont brake ur wrist... you aint got one of these hoe my P.H.D see... school boy you fucked up when you went against me... men pay you to give head hoe you take that 4 free... you rhymes really lack fact, punches, and creativity... movin round like you a fuckin G B dont be actin like me... actin like a pro bitch none of seen proz recently... thats enuff for ur lesson bitch dont be gangsta... and dont bitch like a herb when i won fuckin wanksta... |
You gonna shoot ya nine over?, stinkin rhyme oder...true soldier? Fuck a bullet, im'a grab ya heart, an pull'it out through ya shoulder Sending this kid “rock bottom” even thought he missed-off-the-N Writing no “solid” punches all “liquid” like I pissed-on-his-pen Im'a diss wit a temper , spit to the bitch in you, an offend'her Cause ya fuckin flow is cold an week, like pissin in december Dont attempt'it hectic, tryin to be my sik flow's antiseptic An u said'it....its your spot-light? fuck'it i'll make u epeleptic Laughing as i notice my punches are like a chain they all connected Sat screaming forget your “album” cause im the real “un-expected” |
nice verse man and g'luck...
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god dammit this a new battle so ppl should vote... fuck...
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Voted For: Cal'Q'luS
Damn, How much more one sided can this be.... (Cal) Im'a diss wit a temper , spit to the bitch in you, an offend'her Cause ya fuckin flow is cold an week, like pissin in december ....Nice shit! Laughing as i notice my punches are like a chain they all connected Sat screaming forget your “album” cause im the real “un-expected” ...Nice punch and finish (G) Dont be posin calqlus and go play wit ur abakiss... you tryin so hard to win bitch dont brake ur wrist... ..Wtf?, weakness man nice concept tho thats enuff for ur lesson bitch dont be gangsta... and dont bitch like a herb when i won fuckin wanksta... ...What we 50 cent alla sudden?, Damn man u need 2 elevate No hate in this V/ Cal q lus |
Return the favor, All honest votes are excepted and never reviewed.
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Voted For: Cal'Q'luS
my vote goes to Calqlus he ripped this shit down with punches and a flow that acutaly made sense........ dudes nice return the favor yall http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153382 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Aight Honost Votes Only Lets Get Some Votes Here 2-0 Uppin |
naw 1-0 uppin shit that fag tito didnt explain how mines and urz waz so i'll have that DQ'ed... if thats aight...
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Aigth Uppin For More Votes On This Shit............ |
Voted For: G_$peed
this was a tough battle to jugde. no one really had punches but if i had to vote it would be G you both had personals but cal had more and harding hitters cal got it for vocab and complexity flow goes to both but style goes to Cal i don't like .... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yes i got a vote... that was explained cuz he told both of us wut was wrong and wut was right...
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oh shit i posted the vote for the wrong person
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yep knew it... c'mon man get it together... hey PM strobe and ask him to switch... aight pz... dammit...!!!
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lol what up now son
nah i dont know yea PM strobe tho Yo TITO EXPLAIN ya vote aight ima have Strobe DQ your vote |
Voted For: Cal'Q'luS
damn!!! hot verse calqlus. sick rhymes man. nice punches. came with something clever in every line. flow was on point and strucure was good. G_speed was kinda weak. overall g_speed's verse was a 5 if even that. need to elevate...vote-cal'q'lus Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Yo Uppin This Battle For Some Votes ............ |
Voted For: Cal'Q'luS
one sided battle Cal'Q'luS: multi-city, ya multi's were just nasty, every line was like a multi and a punch, punches were hitting, flow was on point the whole time, structure was good, meta's were crazy, tight wordplay and creativity, sick opener and closer. good shit. 9/10 G Speed: wasn't really much to compare with calqlus', what the hell is an abakiss, punches were terrible, none of them really hit, to be honest it was an all around lack luster performance, u could have done alot better at least i hope u can, not much to explain here, elevate alot. 3/10 vote - Cal'Q'luS no hate to any of ya, return the honest vote, battles r in my sig |
This was feedback posted for Cal'Q'luS
checkin the polls n stuff just seein whasup on fellow crew members, nice verses yall...
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Voted For: Cal'Q'luS
breakdown Cal'q'lus flow-8/10 rhymes-8/1- punches-8/10 structure-10/10 total-34/40 G_$peed flow-5/10 rhymes-6/10 punches-4/10 structure-7/10 total-22/40 |
Aight Uppin 1 More
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Voted For: G_$peed
Overall I think Cal Q murked this man, pinches was better, flow was better, vocab & everything, G u need to elevate and focus more on ya delievery cousin....but overall this was just a 1 sided battle, good drop Cal Q!! HIt my battle up against Gkillaz and Comeback kid would ya? http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=153753 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=153551 |
Aww damn I accidently posted that in the wrong box have a mod change it for me ok..
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Voted For: Cal'Q'luS
no brainer. punches- cal werdplay- cal (week/weak is played tho) flow- cal. complex- cal (take the " " out tho, seems noobish =/) vote- cal i.m.o- g, try to put some metaphors wit ya punches to make em hit harder or to make em more creative. vote here- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=154154 |
ok i gotta vote again...
G_Speed ur verse was horrible. u had no punches in there. ur flow was good and so was your structure but you had no punches or personals. you didnt go at your opponent like you should. learn to be creative with your lines. you coulda re-worded that lines about givin head for free so that it hit hard. but overall your verse was a 5/10 cal'q'lus your verse was tight. you had a punch in every line. you had some wordplay which jus added on to this murder. your flow was good and you structure was on point. overall score 8/10 vote-goes to cal'q'lus |
god dammit explained votez fuck...
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Uppin This Muh Fuckin Shit Dont Sleep On This Shit |
Voted For: Cal'Q'luS
Calq won this battle easily multies were sick, and structure n originality was good. It also just flowed well overall good drop G-speed was terrible drop n rudematry bars all over the place. Bars didnt rhyme well at all only good this was structure holla at ya boy http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=154456 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=154205 |
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