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:::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..::: vs Myth
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10 - 12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 10-18-04 at 06:08 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
:::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..::: has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 06:22 AM.
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Myth has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 06:23 AM.
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somebody got it twisted about banks bein gay...
it was this fool suckin dick an tap dancin with queers like ballet.. ok, so maybe you got a little ''wit''.. your idea of an open mic is trynna get some ''cock, boy'' like a ken keniff skit!.. shit, you couldnt even clown on a midget.. why? cause ya rhymes are comin up shorter than the zero digit!.. its time to quit, your dumb trynna claim your quick.. ya so whack, faggot, everyday you gotta change your gimmick.. if ya ''sick'' kid go to the clinic an be treated.. ya gon need to call up 'g-unit' for me to be defeated.. bitch remain seated, cause ya rhymes aint nothin but a myth.. the reazon your pissed is you n all ya alter egos had a ''lovers tiff''..! explanations...... the opener, he looks like lloyd banks, lloyd banks is apparently gay, figure the rest out for yourself.. 3rd an 4th line is he used to have the name 'quick witted' an the ken keniff cause on the smil shady lp the ken skit is all like ''hey cockboy''..ya know? its time to quit, your dumb trynna claim your quick.. ya so whack, faggot, everyday you gotta change your gimmick.. ^^^ again quick witted was his name, an the gimmick line cause he changes his name all the damn time.. the g-unit line again cause he look like lloyd banks.. an the finisher, do i need to explain? ...alter egos meanin his 5 diffrent laias/names he has, lovers tiff, yall know what that is right? uppin yall |
the council's got only about an ounce of good talent in it's circle *
i got dopeman scared, trembling, and shaking like a jello commercial this kids use to having his legs spreaded apart like his name is * suck dick? he'll gladly do it just to do a favor and become famous u can't be a vet cause ya losses are almost equal to half ya wins * kid plays with balls like soccer players so i'll crack his shins this boy done lost his damn mind, he's claiming he's haterproof * ya skins a bit rough, i'll kill ya and put it to greater use rematch? naw i'm good one wins enough, i won't spank u like spul did * dopeman's a fag he done gripped on more balls then spalding my punches and meta's will have u seeing black when ya eyes close i'm aiming to put out ya career and ambitions like water to pyro's *not that many good peeps, they offered me a spot *the lines that divide the letters in his name *his record *his user title *spul beat him twice |
dope verse
spalding line was hot g'luck... an yo, what about that collab? |
Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
the council's got only about an ounce of good talent in it's circle * i got dopeman scared, trembling, and shaking like a jello commercial this kids use to having his legs spreaded apart like his name is * suck dick? he'll gladly do it just to do a favor and become famous u can't be a vet cause ya losses are almost equal to half ya wins * kid plays with balls like soccer players so i'll crack his shins this boy done lost his damn mind, he's claiming he's haterproof * ya skins a bit rough, i'll kill ya and put it to greater use rematch? naw i'm good one wins enough, i won't spank u like spul did * dopeman's a fag he done gripped on more balls then spalding my punches and meta's will have u seeing black when ya eyes close i'm aiming to put out ya career and ambitions like water to pyro's ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE VERSE HERE GOOD PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AND WORDPLAYS somebody got it twisted about banks bein gay... it was this fool suckin dick an tap dancin with queers like ballet.. ok, so maybe you got a little ''wit''.. your idea of an open mic is trynna get some ''cock, boy'' like a ken keniff skit!.. shit, you couldnt even clown on a midget.. why? cause ya rhymes are comin up shorter than the zero digit!.. its time to quit, your dumb trynna claim your quick.. ya so whack, faggot, everyday you gotta change your gimmick.. if ya ''sick'' kid go to the clinic an be treated.. ya gon need to call up 'g-unit' for me to be defeated.. bitch remain seated, cause ya rhymes aint nothin but a myth.. the reazon your pissed is you n all ya alter egos had a ''lovers tiff''..! ^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE PUNCHES GOOD USIN PERSONALS AND PUNCHES NICE WORDPLAYS V-DOPE CAUSE HE JUST CAME HARDER WIT DEM PUNCHES AND PERSONALS MYTH-U HAD AN GOOD VERSE NICE PUNCHES AND PERSONALS DA FLOW WAS TIGHT,,,,,BUT DA PUNCHES WERENT REALLY HITTIN IT TO ME IT FELT A LIL BASIC USE MORE CREATIVE PUNCHES DOPE- NICE VERSE HERE GOOD PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AND USIN WORDPLAYS,,,,,NICE USIN CREATIVE PUNCHES I VOTE FOR DOPE CAUSE HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS MYTH KEEP DOING YO THANG DA PUNCHES WERE TOO LIL BASIC IN DIS BATTLE I SEEN YO BATTLES U COME UP WITH CREATIVE PUNCHES I DIDNT SEE DAT IN DIS BATTLE ~PEACE~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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good shit dopeman, we uppin peeps
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Voted For: Myth
aight this was an aight battle... myth is gonna take this one tho.. dopeman no hate but that shit about his rhymes bein a myth is old, many people have used that in battle already... aight both had decent flow... myth had the structure down pretty well and dopemans fell off a lil bit in places... both had good punches but myth came better with the personals. like i said this was a fairly decent battle and no hate to dopeman but myth is gonna take this one with pretty much an all around better battle verse... no hate hommie but that is just how i see this one..... VOTE- MYTH......... |
Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
dopeman got diz, it wuz a close battl n dat spalding line wuz hot from myth but dopez punchez were mo creative n dat loverz tiff killd da battl so dopeman getz my vote cuz of da bettr punchez but it wuz reel close Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
good battle...but my vote has to go to dopeman for this.. if ya ''sick'' kid go to the clinic an be treated.. ya gon need to call up 'g-unit' for me to be defeated.. bitch remain seated, cause ya rhymes aint nothin but a myth.. the reazon your pissed is you n all ya alter egos had a ''lovers tiff''..! ^^when ever i vote on a battle i try to rap it so i get da flow better and when i read dis i was like damn...cuz it felt like it all was flowin.... myth had some nice punches also i like the flow and punches and personals of dopeman better tho... |
but yo no hate on myth cuz his shit was nice too...if he would of had some better vocab instead of bein a lil basic he would of took this one...nice battle im ghost ~1~
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This was feedback posted for :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
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Voted For: Myth
another nice battle... myth your rhyms were again relly well put together you had good punches and flow was really good... dopeman: i liked your as much but i think myth just edged it with the wordplay close battle... i think myth got it because his had better punches and the flow was good... dopeman your verse was good and funny but myth edged it no hate return the favour links in the sig... peace \\// v/ myth Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
apppreciate the honesty homeboy...
uppin yall dont sleep |
Voted For: Myth
lol shit mayn Myth always come up with something Hott good flow both yall was good but Myth came harder with tha punches some good personals funny shit nigga said Jello Commercials lol tha last line was a kill killes tha flow hommie nice battle good luck to both yall with tha rest V=Myth came harder Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
I thought dopemans verse here was the better because he had better punches and structure the other verse was okay but it lacked multies and it lacked decent punches the only decent thing about ur verse was the structure and some nice word play. V dopeman Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
dopeman... nice with the ken kaniff shit.
myth... good all around verse, but i aint votin cause this 2 close of a battle. nice 2 both, keep it up return the favor in my sig |
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Voted For: Myth
Myth-good flow dawg in my eyes u merked him u had good flow structure betta punches good personals didnt really see any multis in either verse DOPEMAN-urs was alright but i have seen betta ur structure was wack as fuck had some good personals but in dis line:its time to quit, your dumb trynna claim your quick.. ya so whack, faggot, everyday you gotta change your gimmick: gimmick and quick dont rhyme dawg but keep doin ur thing.... return da favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=155261 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=155771 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Myth
flow-myth got this easy,dope your lines were way too stretched not feelin it punches/personals-myth had the harder punches,more and way harder personals, dopemans were kinda corn they were aight but didnt match up to myths good luck toboth no hate peace |
Dopeman Verse
somebody got it twisted about banks bein gay... it was this fool suckin dick an tap dancin with queers like ballet.. not feelin this ok opener but was weak 2/10 ok, so maybe you got a little ''wit''.. your idea of an open mic is trynna get some ''cock, boy'' like a ken keniff skit!.. tried to add witty i heard the skit its funny but this isnt lines r streeeetched but better then first bar 3/10 shit, you couldnt even clown on a midget.. why? cause ya rhymes are comin up shorter than the zero digit!.. hmm no wasnt feelin it again streeetched 2/10 its time to quit, your dumb trynna claim your quick.. ya so whack, faggot, everyday you gotta change your gimmick.. filler but it was aight 3/10 if ya ''sick'' kid go to the clinic an be treated.. ya gon need to call up 'g-unit' for me to be defeated.. weak but probably best line in the verse 4/10 bitch remain seated, cause ya rhymes aint nothin but a myth.. the reazon your pissed is you n all ya alter egos had a ''lovers tiff''..! ehh ok descent closer could of been better 4/10 no hate but wasnt feelin it as much as myths 18/60 Myth Verse the council's got only about an ounce of good talent in it's circle * i got dopeman scared, trembling, and shaking like a jello commercial nice i liked this and witty good opener 8/10 this kids use to having his legs spreaded apart like his name is * suck dick? he'll gladly do it just to do a favor and become famous eh wasnt really feelin this wen i first read it sounds like a filler but descent 5/10 u can't be a vet cause ya losses are almost equal to half ya wins * kid plays with balls like soccer players so i'll crack his shins good personal setup and punch delivered 8/10 this boy done lost his damn mind, he's claiming he's haterproof * ya skins a bit rough, i'll kill ya and put it to greater use hmm wasnt feelin this as much 4/10 rematch? naw i'm good one wins enough, i won't spank u like spul did * dopeman's a fag he done gripped on more balls then spalding nice i liked this good personal second best bar in my opinion 9/10 my punches and meta's will have u seeing black when ya eyes close i'm aiming to put out ya career and ambitions like water to pyro's everything good here nice closer and my favorite bar of the verse 10/103 everything was good here except for a couple of bars but this was kinda one sided battle no hate 44/60 good luck peace |
^mah bad for the feedback on the last bar of myths verse its 10/10 not 10/103 lol
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uppin for honest votes peeps
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Voted For: Myth
ok This was an okay battle not great but okay... Dopeman: Elevate dog I been watchin your battles and I wasn't feelin the punches in them the banks line against him are played very much as much as the myth lines... no hate just didn't feel this verse at all Myth: ok I liked your verse the meta4's kept interest but the soccer line was played tho adn the prsonal against spul hurtin him was nice you win easily in my oppinion *explained* peep open mic bitches lol both ya and shotta |
uppin yall......
dont sleep... honest votes will be returned |
Voted For: Myth
I give it to myth coz his punches were better and he used more mutlties n dopeman had like none. n y even mention bout banks coz of course he aint gay. but u both had good personals just keep it up n dopeman after reading one of ya open mics i thought you would have came harder dan dat. peace out Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin yall, dont sleep.....
honest WELL EXPLAINED votes will be returned |
This was feedback posted for Myth
uppin for this shit peeps, let's get this closed
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uppin for more votes, let's get this shit closed peeps, let's go, honest votes
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Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
diz wuz a real close one 2 call i think dat myth had da better puns in his verse, dey wuz sickening, but dope had da better personals, both verses connected well, viocab goes too dope an personals go to dope myth gets da pun side of da battle, but for ovverrall content i think dope gets diz, sorry myth Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
i have never seen so many unexplained votes, explain ya fucking votes people, we uppin for honest votes
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Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
Myth: k myth im being honest all you got is good personals no real punches there...no vocab...not realy any multis...metaphores thos are simple but you got them....but ya i gotta admit you had some nice personals but you didnt hit with punches it didnt work this time.... DopeMan: you had nice vocab gotta admit that...nice punches dem were real punches and im not rating shit because that says nothing...internet raps full of it to...but yes he had no multis eather well a few not real consider multis but...nice metaphores not bad at all.... VOTE: DopeMan return the favour in my battle verse banks this guy myth but honest iight cuz thats what i did...HONEST |
uppin yall, dont sleep
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Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
my vote dopeman... he had the better punches hands down, was more creative and original, a few lines flip good * ken skit * and all around tight verse nice flow and a nice drop.... 8.2 myth i've seen better from u but this wasnt one of them, u had a decent flow, u'r lines wasnt really well thought out there wasnt any real hard punches 1 personal that was ok not even that good and the rest wasnt really geting at him raw u just was diss N at times seem like u was just flowing get at him N stay on him N flip some punches or something but u can elevate still work on ya punches N get a little more creative.... vote: dopeman.... |
aight, can we get some votes?
honest votes will be returned...... shits goin to the wire, banks... g'luck homeboy uppin folk.. |
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