A.K.A. vs frein-ma$ter
 

Battle Rules:

4 bars
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-17-04 at 01:12 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

frein-ma$ter has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-04 01:14 AM.

here ya go....do ya shit and get this shit uppin....

yo,

yo,

...Like "Butlers Of Water Inspectors" You Serve *Empty-bits-of-Flow*...F Dent-This-Hoe, My Fist'll Paint ya Gums "Dark Pink" As i Strap *Cam Eras On ya Grill*[b](camera) Like [b]a Dentist-show**

..I Bring-to-flow And Send Ya 'Verse Under" Like ya *Spits-be-Low*...Cause I'll Win And I'll Prove I'm *Right Thirr * Like Veiws Of Todays Youth in Chingy-videos**

...It's Like "Mailing ya Frame" Cause I'll *Stamp-on-ya-bones*... Frein Clamp-on-da-Chrome... Cause It's Obvious AKA's *Thoughts Are Shitty* Like Dirty Pampers-On-a-Domes**

...Like "Questions About Eye Lids" My Verse is Leavein ya *Sights-Why'd*(wide)... Cause Frein's the type that "Kills ya Strength" and Tell Ya you *Might-Die*.. Slash The Croses Outscurding ya Name Till Christ-Rise...Cause Frein *Stick Bulbs In ya Inner Child* Then Make ya *Face ya Concience* to Help Tell ya Look On The Bright-Side**

done...g/l and uppin for ur verse......

then we can get some votes in

A.K.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-04 12:12 PM.

you a wack bitch that why you in a wack clique.
i'll punch you where there ain't no sunshine but i ain't lil flip.
slavery is abloshed so stop calling yourself master.
bullet will be peeling your skin like paster.
how you gonna say what you wanna say in 8 bars.
you pack razor and were pack ray guns since men are from mars.(girl are from venus and thats a razor)
i'ma stomp your ass out like i was cpt riding like game.
i got sticky fingers so i'm fin to take the money out your name.

Voted For: A.K.A.

Frein
u had potential 2 make this a very good drop but ya structure
and flow jus kinda fucked it all up 4 u
ya metas were ok and ya punches were there but they didnt
deliver u can work on ya structure and ya set ups and ya end punches that will help u out a lot

Ak
wordplay wasent really good ya punches were ok only reason u got this win 2 me is for an overall better structure
other than that u would of lost

uppin but dawg reall you gotta change that style you'll never get wins wit that

wtf seriously i wont change my godly style for some herb newbs....... i know ur dumb if u cant understand my structure but ??? that is d/r vote....u said i would win if i changed my structure???wat criteria is that u herb......

phhssssh

anyway uppin

Voted For: frein-ma$ter

stop merkin these katz mayn..its makin me cry

aka: you still wack and u been ehre for how long..rapp aint for you cuzz...yuor flow was ok..structure ugly..punches didnt even hit hard....persoanls...none....god dayum do something ur good at

freiN: u need to battle harder poeple ur merkin people and its makin me cry..punches are crazy...flow is aiight..structure creative....dope shit nigga

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atleast this cat ^^ understands rap when he sees it....uppin!

dude first off definally not troop hates me cause i voted against him and second you had the same guy vote for you like in everyone of your battle i see d/r there. and how you gonna call us newbs when got like 629 more post then you and trooper got nearly 1200 more than you so don't get your shit twized

uppin this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: frein-ma$ter

flow- I saw that frein master had better multi's and more punches than aka and they hit harder,
aka could have used more punches

personals- aka had more personals than frein, frein could
have used more of those as well

frein also had a better tone the way he used his words,kept me interested

I think aka did good but he didn't spit a hard enough verse to overcome frein

2-1 me...........uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: A.K.A.

yo hi me up a.k.a. i need to talk about a crew you need to be in D2R

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explain ur votes kid^^ .......anyway uppin!!!!!!!!

Voted For: frein-ma$ter

Damn Hands Down Ta Frein

This Couldnt Be More Onesided

AKA =- Your Shit Was Weak Ive Seen You Write Alot Better.
The Structure And Flow Was GOod But Wordplay And Also Multis/Vocab Was Weak As Fuck. Come Harder.. Ive Seen Better.

Frein-Raw Verse
Even Tho The Structre Was A Little Bit Stretched You Still Came Rock Hard With Your Punches Homie..Flow Was Tight Wordplay Nice And Also Alotta Vocab And Multis'

Good Verse...

Frein-

3-2 me uppin for more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11!!!!

This was feedback posted for frein-ma$ter
 

Again check'n out ya style .............................Up'n

upping this battle yall it 3-1 him so lets get this closed

^^^^^^^^^^uppppppp Letssssss Go Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!

vottttttttttttttttteeeeeeeeee people....uppin@!!!!

Voted For: frein-ma$ter

frien got diz
even doh his struycture waz awfdul again, it took like 2 times to read it befo i understood it, but fien had da better puns in hiz verse
much more creatiive
so he gets my vote

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This was feedback posted for A.K.A.
 

mmm, good battle, checking polls

kkk 4-1 me .......upppppppppinnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!

4-1 me .........come on lets get 1 more vote in!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin lololol damn i can't believe this isn't over lolol geter down

Voted For: A.K.A.

kinda weak battle. both need to come harder than that.

frein master - damn. how do you manage to type your verse like that? i was confused about where lines started and ended. i really didnt wanna read it after the first line. but you had some ok stuff. your opener was weak. and so were the 2nd and 3rd barz. the only decent punch you had was the closer. you had no personals in ur verse. u mentioned his name once but u coulda switched it with someone elses name too and used the same verse. ur flow was off becasue your structure wasnt really good. overall 4/10


a.k.a - coulda came a lot harder than that. i seen a lot of your other battles and this wasnt really up to par. your flow was good and your verse was easy to read cause all the lines were basically even. your opener i wasnt really feelin it. maybe it coulda been re-worded. but it was a weak punch. you tried some personals that didnt really hit but they were there. your closer was kinda good. overall - 5/10


a.k.a wins because he had a better flow, his strucuture was ok and even though he had weak punches they were there and he tried some personals..........

2-2 let get it done

ok you are allowed to vote...........................

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!uuuuuu uuuppppppn!!!!

vote dam you............................................... ..........

Voted For: A.K.A.

I have to give my vote to---- AKA
I jus think that AKA had better word flow and vocb.
I have to give AKA a 9/10 and frein a 8.8/10! Bot were pretty good but I think fein could have done a little better of a job.

unexplained^^ but i dont care no more........upppppin!!!!

finish it come on???? how come we ain't getting no votes?

Voted For: frein-ma$ter

this is obvious......

multis: frein master.......every single one of his lines had a multi in it.....i dont think the was one bar without one.....aka i dont think u really had any....maybe one or two....but i dont think so....not hate at all...just stating facts

flow: aka got this....his flowed a lot better.... some of freins lines were a lil stretched....maybe just cuz it was a lil harder to read...i dunno...just my opinion

punches: frein....every single one of his bars had a punch in it...he dissed aka a lot better......aka had a few punches...but i just dont think his were as strong as freins

no hate at all....im just stating facts.....return the favor with my battles vs. destiny and king dipset.....thanks

Voted For: A.K.A.

OKi nice battle didnt like both ya vers that much...
Frein: your verse was somewhat ook... it has very bad strcutre and it was very hard to follow i had to read it 5 times to actualy get what you are saying.. ok punches.. not that hard.. also ya personals werent that good.... yours was also stretched as fuck.. which is not good... also ya flow was very... out of place... which gets aka the win... he won cos of better flow and strcutre.. also he had a better verse.... Frein took the punches but he mostly lost cos of his flow and his lack to flow good.....

Vote AKA

1 more godamn it.........................................

Voted For: frein-ma$ter

AKA:
that was hella weak dawg...get soem punches in your verse dawg ok ill admit there was some attemts n shit but bad stucture and well it flowed thats good but bad stucture...you gotta admit youve also seen better form yourself...cuz ive seen better from you back in the day or thats jsut cuz i have elevated so damn much...4/10

Frien-Master:
k that was pretty tight punches hard hitting dope punches thats for sure...some wordplay attemts not bad but dayum bad stucture but still flowed...read some of the vets verses you'll see how stucture goes...iight...you get this tho...6.3/10

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4-4 uppin for the last vote.........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!