Battle Rules:

4 bars
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-17-04 at 01:12 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

frein-ma$ter has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-04 01:14 AM.

here ya go....do ya shit and get this shit uppin....

yo,

yo,

...Like "Butlers Of Water Inspectors" You Serve *Empty-bits-of-Flow*...F Dent-This-Hoe, My Fist'll Paint ya Gums "Dark Pink" As i Strap *Cam Eras On ya Grill*[b](camera) Like [b]a Dentist-show**

..I Bring-to-flow And Send Ya 'Verse Under" Like ya *Spits-be-Low*...Cause I'll Win And I'll Prove I'm *Right Thirr * Like Veiws Of Todays Youth in Chingy-videos**

...It's Like "Mailing ya Frame" Cause I'll *Stamp-on-ya-bones*... Frein Clamp-on-da-Chrome... Cause It's Obvious AKA's *Thoughts Are Shitty* Like Dirty Pampers-On-a-Domes**

...Like "Questions About Eye Lids" My Verse is Leavein ya *Sights-Why'd*(wide)... Cause Frein's the type that "Kills ya Strength" and Tell Ya you *Might-Die*.. Slash The Croses Outscurding ya Name Till Christ-Rise...Cause Frein *Stick Bulbs In ya Inner Child* Then Make ya *Face ya Concience* to Help Tell ya Look On The Bright-Side**

done...g/l and uppin for ur verse......

then we can get some votes in

A.K.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-04 12:12 PM.

you a wack bitch that why you in a wack clique.
i'll punch you where there ain't no sunshine but i ain't lil flip.
slavery is abloshed so stop calling yourself master.
bullet will be peeling your skin like paster.
how you gonna say what you wanna say in 8 bars.
you pack razor and were pack ray guns since men are from mars.(girl are from venus and thats a razor)
i'ma stomp your ass out like i was cpt riding like game.
i got sticky fingers so i'm fin to take the money out your name.

Voted For: A.K.A.

Frein
u had potential 2 make this a very good drop but ya structure
and flow jus kinda fucked it all up 4 u
ya metas were ok and ya punches were there but they didnt
deliver u can work on ya structure and ya set ups and ya end punches that will help u out a lot

Ak
wordplay wasent really good ya punches were ok only reason u got this win 2 me is for an overall better structure
other than that u would of lost

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uppin but dawg reall you gotta change that style you'll never get wins wit that

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wtf seriously i wont change my godly style for some herb newbs....... i know ur dumb if u cant understand my structure but ??? that is d/r vote....u said i would win if i changed my structure???wat criteria is that u herb......

phhssssh

anyway uppin

Voted For: frein-ma$ter

stop merkin these katz mayn..its makin me cry

aka: you still wack and u been ehre for how long..rapp aint for you cuzz...yuor flow was ok..structure ugly..punches didnt even hit hard....persoanls...none....god dayum do something ur good at

freiN: u need to battle harder poeple ur merkin people and its makin me cry..punches are crazy...flow is aiight..structure creative....dope shit nigga

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atleast this cat ^^ understands rap when he sees it....uppin!

dude first off definally not troop hates me cause i voted against him and second you had the same guy vote for you like in everyone of your battle i see d/r there. and how you gonna call us newbs when got like 629 more post then you and trooper got nearly 1200 more than you so don't get your shit twized

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uppin this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: frein-ma$ter

flow- I saw that frein master had better multi's and more punches than aka and they hit harder,
aka could have used more punches

personals- aka had more personals than frein, frein could
have used more of those as well

frein also had a better tone the way he used his words,kept me interested

I think aka did good but he didn't spit a hard enough verse to overcome frein

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2-1 me...........uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!