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saaran vs socrates
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Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-20-04 at 09:44 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
Socrates has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-20-04 09:18 PM.
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saaran has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-20-04 09:19 PM.
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I hate this fuckin pussy, cuz damn hes not at my level
So imma torch his shit like he sat on a toilet for the devil Saaran imma use you name against you, wrap you ho Cuz fuck im on a mission, and youre still in a pueblo Ill hit you below the belt, so when i aimed way down south I swung and hit lips, and im NOT saying i hit you in the mouth Fuck hes a whack everything. although he tries to fake it Rhymes his softer than a pillow,so he should take his verse and blanket Im smashing you head in sliding glass doors, fuckin nympho So ill show you to the door for your loss, and take the win-dow Blah. |
Claim ya runnin rv in text witcha vet status
you forget my text is rabid... love to see how ass ya audio is... thats if you had it I'ma whiteboi squeaky voice, i know it, cuz y'all seen this Quit fuckin wit rv stick to penis... diss how i'm white when ya name yaself afta a caucasion genius no terms for played words, slowly killed ya cuz ya heard my sins not bad 8 losses...had that by the time i had thirty wins Glad you quit battlin, your verse more from a corny guy Shit yo ass came back to rv to up your porn supply |
This was feedback posted for saaran
hmm hard to vote i would give it to saaran he had nice punches but iunno...
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LyrikalMonstuh [6:43 PM]: how bout this...
LyrikalMonstuh [6:44 PM]: if YOU win, ill change my user title to "saarans bitch" for one month LyrikalMonstuh [6:44 PM]: If I win then you put "Socrates bitch" in your user title for one month LyrikalMonstuh [6:44 PM]: deal? accomplishmentdv [6:44 PM]: no cuz i aint bout that i wanted to battle you to see if you could back up how good you are LyrikalMonstuh [6:44 PM]: hahahaha accomplishmentdv [6:44 PM]: but if you win i'll do it accomplishmentdv [6:44 PM]: no problem LyrikalMonstuh [6:44 PM]: iight accomplishmentdv [6:44 PM]: but you aint gotta do it if i win just making sure its official and you dont deny it |
yeah its notta big deal to me... i will do it... Pride is notta problem
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uppin your dumb fukkas better vote dammit...........
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yo up dis bitch .... c'mon hoes vote on this aight...
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zzzzzz... sleepin hoes lets get some votes in dis bia bia
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Voted For: saaran
This battle was pretty tight...nice wordplay and creativity from both but mostly saaran who had the better overall verse. Saaran: Claim ya runnin rv in text witcha vet status you forget my text is rabid... love to see how ass ya audio is... thats if you had it ^nice bar good structure and personal good creativity. I'ma whiteboi squeaky voice, i know it, cuz y'all seen this Quit fuckin wit rv stick to penis... diss how i'm white when ya name yaself afta a caucasion genius Kinda multy in there with goos personals again and a good punch. no terms for played words, slowly killed ya cuz ya heard my sins not bad 8 losses...had that by the time i had thirty wins ^Good personal AGAIN and good diss. Glad you quit battlin, your verse more from a corny guy Shit yo ass came back to rv to up your porn supply This personal made me laugh I really liked it. Overall saaran's verse was better for having nicer wordplay and packed with personals. Socrates: I hate this fuckin pussy, cuz damn hes not at my level So imma torch his shit like he sat on a toilet for the devil ^Nice line,not too bad of a punch kind of an elementary diss though. Saaran imma use you name against you, wrap you ho Cuz fuck im on a mission, and youre still in a pueblo ^Wasn't feeling this line at all.Attempt at a personal but it came rather weak.Couldve been better with some rewording. Ill hit you below the belt, so when i aimed way down south I swung and hit lips, and im NOT saying i hit you in the mouth Worst bar of ther battle I think, crappy punch and personal. Fuck hes a whack everything. although he tries to fake it Rhymes his softer than a pillow,so he should take his verse and blanket ^Kinda played out but well thought out, one of your best lines. Im smashing you head in sliding glass doors, fuckin nympho So ill show you to the door for your loss, and take the win-dow ^Good closer, good wordplay for that one. Ive seen socrates come wayy harder in his other battles so I was kind of disapointed.Nice verse from both though keep doing your thing. V/ saaran. |
Return the favour when I get a battle up by the way, i forgot to add that in there...
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I would RTF but that is real gay of you to have over 1000 posts and not know what wordplay and personals and punches are. saaran, im not bitchin and im not gunna get his vote taken off but damn
Ill hit you below the belt, so when i aimed way down south I swung and hit lips, and im NOT saying i hit you in the mouth ^^he said that was a personal. LMFAO.not a good vote at all. :nono: |
Voted For: Socrates
socrates: i didn't see any self-glorification and thats good punches were straight but i don't really think you tried.... last line was pretty dope but it was a tad self-glorified at the very end but it had nice wordplay............... overall: 7/10 saaran: decent verse in my opinion nothing special you talked about yourself a lot and you kept on saying your white for some odd reason I will never figure out maybe..... punches got played close to the end of your verse and wasn't as effective as socrates so by those facts I vote for... socrates....:) |
k ... but u missed out on the aim convo we had... he was tryin to pull a race card on me...
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Voted For: Socrates
Socrates- nice punches.....the wording was great..... the beggining was great ending was ok..........1st, 2nd, 3rd bars were fukin dope man..... Saaran-bleh ok verse overall...word ya pucnhes a lil better.............not much...sorry |
This was feedback posted for Socrates
best line was ya closer.. shit i can find 3 different types of wordplays on that one... that was a dope punch....
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Voted For: Socrates
Saaran Claim ya runnin rv in text witcha vet status you forget my text is rabid... love to see how ass ya audio is... thats if you had it Nah...weak opener, no diss. I'ma whiteboi squeaky voice, i know it, cuz y'all seen this Quit fuckin wit rv stick to penis... diss how i'm white when ya name yaself afta a caucasion genius LMAO!..errr, nah! no terms for played words, slowly killed ya cuz ya heard my sins not bad 8 losses...had that by the time i had thirty wins nope...thats self glorify Glad you quit battlin, your verse more from a corny guy Shit yo ass came back to rv to up your porn supply best bar^still weak...links are played Socrates I hate this fuckin pussy, cuz damn hes not at my level So imma torch his shit like he sat on a toilet for the devil nice...no punch but nice meta Saaran imma use you name against you, wrap you ho Cuz fuck im on a mission, and youre still in a pueblo decent Ill hit you below the belt, so when i aimed way down south I swung and hit lips, and im NOT saying i hit you in the mouth LMFAO..haha...dope bar right there Fuck hes a whack everything. although he tries to fake it Rhymes his softer than a pillow,so he should take his verse and blanket yeah i get the concept..coulda bin worded better. Im smashing you head in sliding glass doors, fuckin nympho So ill show you to the door for your loss, and take the win-dow lol...nice closer Imma give this to soc. saaran ya didn't really have any punches in here. this would of worked better if it was audio. soc just had harder punches and better wordplay, metas ect. the mouth punch was dope that def clinched the battle fo ya. v/ Soc rtf and drop an honest vote on this battle http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=157553 |
This was feedback posted for saaran
Just checkin the polls............................1
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This was feedback posted for Socrates
not good, ahh.... not good.
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Voted For: Socrates
this battle was pretty dope i expected a little more from saraan but his verse was good... i dont like the structure... no matter how you use that structure it still makes your lines stretched... couple OK punches but nothing too great... but... Fuck hes a whack everything. although he tries to fake it Rhymes his softer than a pillow,so he should take his verse and blanket this bar from soc was just dope... best in the battle and he stayed consistent with the disses... pretty good verse from you |
dig dat^^? word, lets finish this little thang off
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Voted For: Socrates
Claim ya runnin rv in text witcha vet status you forget my text is rabid... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD PUNCH PLUS NOT AN GOOD OPENER love to see how ass ya audio is... thats if you had it I'ma whiteboi squeaky voice, i know it, cuz y'all seen this ^^^^^^^^^^"ERM" ELEVATE ON PUNCHES FLOW TOOK OVA THIS PART BUT DA PUNCHES COMPLETLY WACK MAYNE Quit fuckin wit rv stick to penis... diss how i'm white when ya name yaself afta a caucasion genius ^^^^^^^^^^^ BAD PUNCH NOT HARD HITTIN AND NOT AN GOOD STRUTURE no terms for played words, slowly killed ya cuz ya heard my sins not bad 8 losses...had that by the time i had thirty wins ^^^^^^^^^^^^ "EH" NOT AN GOOD PUNCH Glad you quit battlin, your verse more from a corny guy Shit yo ass came back to rv to up your porn supply ^^^^^^^^^ O OK THAT WAS AN OK PUNCH BUT STILL CHA VERSE WAS PLAYED OUT SARRAN- U HAD AN WEAK VERSE DEM PUNCHES WERENT HARD HITTIN AND PLUS CHA FLOW WAS CHOPPED UP IN SOME PLACES , BUT EITHER WAY DIS WAS AN WACK VERSE NO HARD HITTIN PUNCHES AND NO FLOW PLUS NO PERSONALS I hate this fuckin pussy, cuz damn hes not at my level So imma torch his shit like he sat on a toilet for the devil Saaran imma use you name against you, wrap you ho Cuz fuck im on a mission, and youre still in a pueblo ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ O AIIIIIIIGHT "OK" PUNCH COULD'VE BEEN BETTA BUT GOOD FLOW MAYNE Ill hit you below the belt, so when i aimed way down south I swung and hit lips, and im NOT saying i hit you in the mouth Fuck hes a whack everything. although he tries to fake it Rhymes his softer than a pillow,so he should take his verse and blanket Im smashing you head in sliding glass doors, fuckin nympho So ill show you to the door for your loss, and take the win-dow ^^^^^^^^^^^ "EH" OK PUNCHES NICE FLOW SOCRATES- AIIIGHT MAYNE ELEVATE ON PUNCHES I MEAN SERIOUSLY BOTH OF U NEED TO ELEVATE ON PUNCHES OVERALL=THIS WAS AN WACK BATTLE, LOOK LIKE AN NEWB ONE, OK SARRAN- U DIDNT HAD NO PUNCHES NOT HARD HITTIN ONES AND FLOW WAS CHOPPED UP IN SOME PLACES ELEVATE ON THAT OK SOCRATES- U HAD FLOW BUT DA PUNCHES WERENT HARD HITTIN ATLEAST U HAD PUNCHES V-SOCRATES- FOR HAVING PUNCHES AND HARDER ONES TOO BASICALLY- SARRAN U CAME TOO BASIC, |
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