warrior vs BlanKo
 

Battle Rules:

6-10 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-25-04 at 02:50 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

warrior has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-04 08:09 PM.

BlanKo has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-25-04 12:13 AM.

warrior ya ' shit ' couldnt 'slide wit flow'if ya began to spit~some~'slipped'~'shit'
ya couldnt 'milk' a vote if u learnt to flip~n~twist~tits 2

Explosively seperatin spinal collums like I snapped~ya~fat~back,fuck coffins
im gon' leave ya buried ina stack~o~knap~sacks 4

Wen it comes to war, no way blank lacks~tact~wit~rap~facts,hit the ground wen i launch,stack~mats~wen~this cat~attack~back 6

Ima shatter retinas, cos i designed my words~to~burn~herbs, my vocabs ridiculous, ya man B drop,flip,turn~n~curb~verbs 8

You're a warrior~i'll slaughter ya prewrit~and bit~verse
Gonna be my "first win in a min'" like the RedSox reversed the ol' curse!!!!! 10


KO KO KO

im playin RV like chess wont rest till the best gone u the next pawn/
ur punches soft like cotton no wonder blank gets (blankets) slept on/

this bitch is fake, in this battle he gettin dicked like banks/(lloyds porno)
its like a shootout in an action movie the way im usin blanks/

ayo i break hoes wut the fucks a blanko/
ya name says it all cause im givin B. the L.....ANd the K.O./

check mate wit six lines

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vote bitches!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: BlanKo

man dawg this was easy warrior go and wave the white flag cause you lost bitch:
Flow: blanko
style: warrior
punches: blanko
personals: blanko
opener: blanko
closer: blanko
vocab: blanko
and what ever else: blanko

vote: blanko

thanks AKA ............................................vote you sleepers ...................................

Voted For: BlanKo

vote: blanko

multis: great multis blank...pretty much every bar except for the last one had good multis in it.....warrior u should really work on those

punchlines: every bar of blanks was a punch...he came pretty hard with em....warrior....i loved the last bar were u spelt out his name for the punch..i was feelin it

structure: good from both i guess

flow: some of blanks was a bit hard to read....some of the bars i had to read twice...but overall pretty good.....warriors flowed pretty good

overall, i had to go with who came with the hardest punches......so i had to choose blank....i felt like he had an overall better verse.....no hate.......please return the favor and vote on my battles vs. king dipset(topical) , vs. destiny, and vs heroic verse....thanks make sure the votes are completely honest

up up and away.

vote or get your face slapped...................................... lol come on people

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im'a have fifty freeposts i nthis thread b4 this battle is over....

cum on people, this battle was like a month ago..... i cn't believe it is still open..............

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.................................................. ......................lol 1 month for a battle to end?

Voted For: warrior

Yo mayne I'm givin this one to warrior...

Nice flow and some pretty good punchlines, wifa nice ending and good explanation...

Holla Back

Voted For: BlanKo

u got my vote homie nice job good punches keep em comin ur structure was deff better and ur rhymes were dope nice flow too he jus came up short on this one bro check out this one mav vote it
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Voted For: BlanKo

mmm.... my verse has to go to blanko...... better verse here than warrior..... warrior maybe if you dopped a few more lines you would have one....... it was a preety good verse..... just ideas were a bit basic

blanko....elevate man..... wasnt bad, you got potential you just need to elevate a little//// flow was a bit wack.... structure was nice.... had some wordplay and some good punches and personals.

return the favour k

yo return the favour ok....... drop a vote on one of the battles below ok... thx

Voted For: warrior

You Get My Vote.

Warrior: Punches, Persoanls, Punching Personals.. This Was A Great Verse For Only 6 Lines.. Good Job

Blanko: Your Verse Was Nice With Punches And Multies.. But Warrior Got it Wih His Punching Personals.. This Just Wasnt Your Battle..


Fav lines...

im playin RV like chess wont rest till the best gone u the next pawn/
ur punches soft like cotton no wonder blank gets (blankets) slept on/

ayo i break hoes wut the fucks a blanko/
ya name says it all cause im givin B. the L.....ANd the K.O./

Please Return The Favor With A Vote In The battle of your choice In my Sig.. Thanks..

Voted For: warrior

Warrior got this one on wordplay and punches... I felt Blanko's multis were real played and simple, I mean come on... anyone can rhyme 'attack' 'back' and 'fat'... gotta step it up if u wanna win battles with multis. I liked warrior's play on Blanko's name to close it, and the opening bar was hot, set it off right.

Hook me up with an honest vote if you can to return the favour. Peace!

This was feedback posted for BlanKo
 

Look Yall I Aint Votin In this I Was But I couldnt Decide So i Decided To jus check The polls lOL

end this battle come on vote its almost over........

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Voted For: warrior

V/Warrior .....good battle to both but warrior took this because his punchs hit hard an his was creative an flowed well......blanko ur verse was good also u had flow an sum punchs but they didn't hit hard an u weren't that creative......V/Warrior
PUnchs=war
structure=tie
multi's=war
vocab=tie
creativity=war
overall=war
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

Voted For: warrior

Damn, this batte sucked ass. For real. Shit was pretty pathetic. Anyway, warrior won, even though he told me it was a "good" battle and lied completely. Wow. Yeah, warrior won for punches, personals, pret much everything, although it was weak as fuck. Newbies need ot hit up tutorials, for real.