Voted For: PntBlnkDistnce

PntBlnkDistnce

this terror-is-shit i'll grapple-ya-throat, tackle-ya-hopes
only time you punch-lines is when youre mad-at-ya-coke
^hot opener!
Hold yah eyes terror Yah pupils bout to-be-popped-out
Makin you the new Kanye RV wonderin why-you-dropped-out
^nice one...
Lurkin-with-grace heres some patches' hopin i-dont-gore-you
guess I win cause if youre unknown nobodys gonna vote-for-you
^hmmm, decent but couldve been better
youre tuckin-your-cock entrust-youll-fucken-get-shot
and put in medical-arrest like a nurse fuckin-a-cop
^ok line but again, couldve been better
im evil-with-clips while your whole demeanor-is-bitch
cut ya nuts off that way youll have an un-beat-able-dick
^nice closer
Good drop although you fell off a little near the ending, flow was nice, vocab and wordplay were good...maybe could've had some more hardhitting stuff but overall good one!

Terror2005

See? I'm about to take this cat out in an instance,
leave him picking up his own nuts from "pntblnkdistance
^weak opener...
Give ya a better job, you need ya own grave to dig,
While the only vote your gonna get is already in ya sig,
^nah, doesnt make much sense...
You battling me, you gonna leave in serious "terror,
It seems it wont take much to leave ya with a brain error
^played...but okay i guess...
Nobody's heard of ya, so take ya weak shit back,
It's a shame even on ya open mics ya had to beg for feedback,
^blablabla, heard it all before...
I would sit through ya verse, but it just bores me,
this is the end ya "od'd and lived, but ya life was a "Short story"
^good closer
Flow and vocab was pretty good but you need more hardhitting punches and personals, this shit was mad played! Just get a little more creative

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