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Banks vs JaSa
Battle Rules:
6 - 8 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-25-04 at 05:54 AM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
JaSa has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-25-04 02:54 AM.
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Banks has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-25-04 03:00 AM.
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i'm caving in his self pride and toppling his bars with not an ounce of remorse
attempting to beat me is like cancer patients using cigars as a health resource set the drop time for 2 hours after the check in, must have a slow mind process jasa showing skills is like paralysis victims winning 100 meter relay contests u sent me 2 private messages, at first i thought u was playing, u wanna loss i ain't even gotta attempt to win, i could beat u with my computer turned off u could attach a julius erving jersey to ya rhymes and they wouldn't be classic a vote, stevie wonder has a better chance of making in through rush hour traffic |
Fuck this whack head...Im spitting so furiously, im leaving him all slobbery,
Cause his bank of wins just got in a heist and im pulling off the robbery... Murderin this fool, over 100 posts but im still droppin his rank, But Lloyd wont lose his 'last name' when i demolish 'Banks'... Banks is a whack kid and the fact remains he is slaving for a loss, Cause the only time he is spitting 'sick' is when he forgets to 'floss'!... He's an unknown bank, that not one female would want to 'deposit in', Cause his "deposit slip" came up short like Dan Davito did in 'Twins'!... **nothin to explain, all name play offs... g'luck |
good shit jasa, good shit, we uppin for honest explained votes
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Voted For: Banks
this was just better, their wasn't really any quotables...it was just a little bit less played, seems like you guys are both alright already, maybe you didn't try but it was just really played, jasa was really played, especially with the floss line, maybe its just because i've been doing this for too long, but banks wins by a bit return the favor, honesty matters http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=156778 |
good verse banks...... and thansk for the vote J...
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no prob, you guys both have tons of potential, i like the verses, just the concepts need to be switched up a little
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we uppin for honest explained votes peeps
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............uppin for soem votes people............
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uppin for votes peeps, honest explained ones
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uppin for honest explained votes in this peeps
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Voted For: Banks
ok~ banks:your flow was good, nice punches,original and they hit strong against your opponent,hmm,ok personals, i liked your vocabulary,you said a lot in your verse,without overcrowding, i give this to you because of style and originality.. JaSa:your verse was good too,nice name personals and punches,but i just didnt think it was enough to beat him with,,but you both did well... |
^^ thanks for the vote....... uppin this shit.....
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Voted For: JaSa
vote jasa, because banks shit was just so played.... and putting them links in there made u look like your struggling to find a punch none of them were good.... jasa wasnt that much better but still better..... Fuck this whack head...Im spitting so furiously, im leaving him all slobbery, Cause his bank of wins just got in a heist and im pulling off the robbery... Murderin this fool, over 100 posts but im still droppin his rank, But Lloyd wont lose his 'last name' when i demolish 'Banks'... Banks is a whack kid and the fact remains he is slaving for a loss, Cause the only time he is spitting 'sick' is when he forgets to 'floss'!... He's an unknown bank, that not one female would want to 'deposit in', Cause his "deposit slip" came up short like Dan Davito did in 'Twins'!... 5.5/10 i'm caving in his self pride and toppling his bars with not an ounce of remorse attempting to beat me is like cancer patients using cigars as a health resource set the drop time for 2 hours after the check in, must have a slow mind process jasa showing skills is like paralysis victims winning 100 meter relay contests u sent me 2 private messages, at first i thought u was playing, u wanna loss i ain't even gotta attempt to win, i could beat u with my computer turned off u could attach a julius erving jersey to ya rhymes and they wouldn't be classic a vote, stevie wonder has a better chance of making in through rush hour traffic 5/10 return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157072 |
^^ thanks for the vote..... uppin for some more honest votes
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uppin for honest explained votes people
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Voted For: JaSa
open: banks....the punch he used was more effective than the on jasa used...i lyked jasa's concept, tho close: banks...pretty much the same reason as the last...but, jasa shoulda quit with tha "bank" concept...it woulda been better if he had've played off jus parts of banks name... flow: banks....jasa's was a lil off...even tho banks lines were long, they stayed that way the whole verse. werdplay: jasa...obvious reasons... metas: banks...jasa just had a lot of werdplays.. punches: banks...6th line got that one... favorite line: jasa's 4th one...that was n.y.c.e vote: banks.....he took more catagories *this was a good battle...i'd lyke to advise jasa to focus on the less obvious name plays...be more creative Vote Switched |
I wanted the vote to go to Banks....I didnt know that you had to put the vote in tha box under the person you wanted give the vote to
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^^ get a mod to fix it or something? :S..........
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Voted For: Banks
banks took this one but it was close they both had nnice rhymes flow structre meatas but banks hit a lil harder with his punches with better word play |
Voted For: Banks
you merked him easily..this was a real dope verse from u ur flow was good..structure was nice..personals was nice..thaz what i see alot in u... jasa..u had good stucturte...thaz bout it...elevate |
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