Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 10-24-04 at 11:40 PM

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Theosophic~Truth has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-04 01:41 PM.

6 barz homie..... ~1~

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CataclyzM-i-C has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-04 01:42 PM.

aiight............................................ ..

now soon to be 3-0

yo dis nigga must b crazy sniffin lines wit wiskey/
Theosophic is as real as Fredro Star on dance 360
Its an automatic W cuz my 12 gauge never misses/
My rhymes are so hot he feels da burn when he pisses
You only have so much time before my bomb's last tick/
Theo cudnt spit a hard bar if he was Rodney King'd wita knight stick
Every nigga from the Bean has a flow das 2 fierce/
Closest u'll ever be to the "truth" is playin Live wit Paul Pierce
Usa noobie mafucka, Im the lyrikal assassin/
Dumb enough 2 battle me stop smokin crack n keep passin
Another victory under my belt but ur rhymes are still trash/
Have another nigga spit for you n pay em in RV cash

muthafucka


its a rap...quick shyt i threw 2gether cuz i wont be back 2nite...pease nigga


~1~....( uppin for your verse )

Blah!


Cat thinks he's cool, rockin jada, he's loving his pic
tried to grasp a higher level, and I felt a tug on my dick
this struggling bitch, I'm sorry please excuse that curse
herb or wack vet does it matter he's both, so whats worse
so pay attention cataclyzm, face foward and listen clear
cuz like a door salesman at a homeless shelter.........
................u have no buisness here
cata tries to rap like a gangster, ha! but soon he'll regret
cuz its funny......
.....I've never met a gangster that spits on the net
he throws up beantown......like he needs to belong
so he joined a voters circle and now he's 2 wins along
he says hes right on my ass, and its really makin me sick
so I lean to the left, pull down my pants, and take a shit

ok....I'm done....Dont no show.....

blahh ur a softy.........

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somebody vote please...............................

Voted For: Theosophic~Truth

ha ha ha. funny stuff mam

cataclyz - u had an ok verse overall. your opener was whack. and so was the 2nd bar. u came harder at the end startin with the paul pierce line. u had a good flow and all ur lines were even. ur closer wasnt very good. overall - 5/10


Truth - nice verse from you. you had some nice wordplay and some good punches. i woulda liked to see some personals frm you. i liked the homeless shelter line from you and ur opener. u had a good openeer. ur closer was weak though. overall - 6.5/10

truth won this he had better punches than the other dude. both of u need to be more creative with ur punches though

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Voted For: CataclyzM-i-C

ok both were good and i dont really knkow you i should vote for cause you both had some good hits then again some soft ones so. cat had good structure and had more harder hits so he gonna get it.

fav cat lines:
the first bar, the last line, and the "truth" line was tight.

fav theo line:2nd line, and the last line was ok.

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