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...Xclusive... vs oreo
Battle Rules:
6-10 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No D/r, i know you do it Accept and its due tomorrow at noon 12 to be exact dont decline you bitch or i will bunk this shit in my sig... Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-01-04 at 08:56 PM Must drop verse in 1800 minutes after check in. DQ'ed for asking for votes: Quote:
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you gonna accept? dont be a bitch cuz you will be shown in open mic and in my audio anyway
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oreo has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-29-04 10:11 PM.
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...Xclusive... has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-29-04 10:13 PM.
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You talk to much for a moist cookie dipped in a ‘glass’ of milk…
My punches run smooth over you like the ‘fabric’ called silk… You think to much of being older in age makes you better… What the fuck your getting nervous sweating in a warm sweater… You ducked me the first time so you ‘stalled’ for time to pre-write… ‘Stop’ fingering up your beef curtains…damn that shit isn’t right… I don’t care if you like running your ‘tongue’ up a line of sweaty shit… That makes my sick to the ‘stomach’ to hear you also like to quit… He thinks when hes named after a “cookie” and from Cincinnati… That he can roll wit style but naw hes a fried ‘biscuit’ eating fatty… |
your a cocky lil bitch, why you wanna battle me so bad, caint find a newb to beat?
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naw...i wanna shut your cocky ass up how am i cocky that dont make sense i dotn brag about shit...and yell o look a elevated cough cough you...hurry up and spit fag...
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i can geta pettion on here to claim you lame
only thing exclusive about you kid is your name you dont have enough vocab to not say cookie, im sicker than you, but i still won't play hookie, 14 and your still throwing temper tantrums, couldnt spit fire if you were a jack-o-lanturn, crushing your dream like rotting for the yankies, after this battle youll need a lyrical hankie pankie, you a broke ass bitch, look at your account {$25} a viagra couldn't even raise your D/R counts and all the girlies say your prettyw fly for a white guy? look at your pic=LOSER |
ok you can shut your mouth now...you had no punches only personals thats not a punches ok uppin...
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o and im not broke i have 20000 look you'll see..uppin
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uppin...................your bank gots 25, that why i said acount, dikhead
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wtf...your the dickhead i got 23088 read loser...uppin
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Voted For: oreo
lol id have to go with oreo on this....even though i didnt appreciate the yankee line.... punches: oreo had better punches...both were decent...but xclusive...i just felt like some of the lines were a bit wack and u could have done a lot better multis: oreo had a lot more....xclusive u didnt really have any multis in your verse structure: both were pretty good flow: oreo yours flowed pretty good...maybe a couple parts that didnt flow too great......xclusive....yours flowed pretty good too...but i kinda thought some of your lines were a bit stretched....just my opinion NO HATE AT ALL......JUST MY OPINION return the favor w/ my battles vs. destiny a king dipset. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: oreo
damn oreo..good punches and personals...oreo won...but i'm not votin Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
that was feedback..sorry................................
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damn yall cool, upin............................................
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This was feedback posted for oreo
Checking Tha Polls Here Lets See This Good Drop Kid
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Voted For: oreo
exclusive your vese looked like u tried to hard...... and still it sucked....u just dont have any good shit..... oreo's wasnt that much betta.......but he didnt have to try hard in this one............ he gits it for betta every thing....... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: oreo
close and looked forward to battle punches- oreo becuz u had more and harder hittin personals- oreo u had more multis- neither metas- oreo just overall better flow- X structure- X word play- tie humor- oreo oreo nice drop. good punches and metas, i guess just keep elevatin cuz i cant find anythin wrong. X man your wordin wuz messed up and half your verse is self glorifyin. No hate just an honest voter. v/oreo pz |
Voted For: ...Xclusive...
aalright both had personals but oreos were pretty played so i give u personals flow oreo but thats cause his vocab sucked lol so flow oreo vocab xclusive oreo came really basic nothin special overall im givin it to x because his personals were funny his complexity was good flow was ok i think u won bcaus oreo doubted u and came wack dont ever come wack it might hurt u and i think thats what happened here so goood job to both but i gott give it to lil x |
Voted For: oreo
oreo won this battle barely bcuz it was not that great at all. but Xclusive just sounded like he was crying the whole verse to b blunt. Orea had the better punches even tho his flow was pretty simple. work on creativity of punches both of u to spice up ya verse. holla at ya boy Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
upin.............................................. .....
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Voted For: oreo
Vote-Oreo Oreo Got My Vote Kid Came Pretty Slick Good Lyricsl Tha Flow Was Cool I Was Feeling It His Vocab Was Tight Good Shit Decent Structure Over All 8-10 ...Xclusive... Pretty Good Flow Kid Decent Structure Some Good Personals Came Out Pretty Hard Good Started Ya Flow Was Cool Nice Drop Over All 6/7-10 Big Ups To Both Yall One Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: ...Xclusive...
Jea Xclusive got this easily..oreo shit was too basic xclusive...see wat im sayin u elevated quickly ur punches are way doper..and u had crazy structuer...ur flow was nyce aswelll....wordplay was theer.......ur vocab was pretty nyce u just straight merked him oreo: ur shit was aiight but too basic u need to make ur punches hit alot harder if they are gonna be that short u naww wat im sayin...but ur shit was straight..vocab...was bad....structure was ok and flow was good.. vote X |
uppoin............................. quit d'qin every vote i get
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Voted For: ...Xclusive...
here's the breakdown... Oreo yo man..your rhyme scheme was really basic.. though I see youre elevated..it wasn't enough for Xclusive..like it was like a freestyle..with writer's bock man..I aint hatin cuz we coo.. elevate some more Xclusive your punches were pretty good and the closer was funny..made me laugh.. and I never laugh...EVER..flow was good and structure was about between iight and good.. so you win for an overall better verse |
Voted For: ...Xclusive...
Xclusive-You rap pretty good for a 14 year old Canadian lol...anyways....decent structure with a nice flow...good job opening with a personal....not to many decent punches or wordplayand your vocab was weak...but overall nice drop oreo-a good structure and flow...but all your shit was basic...couple of good wordplay there....no real good punches or personals..vocab was also weak V/Xclusive reason:felt he was more consistent and hit harder...better personals return teh favor in my sig or against RapGod...honest votes only thanks |
Voted For: ...Xclusive...
Good battle: Punches: Xclu Personals: xclu Complexity: xclu Flow: tie Structure: tie Vote: xclu Xclu had a more plished verse...oreo's verse didn't really have any punches just a bunch of played concepts..no hate but elevate Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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