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..Xplicit.. vs FlyWhiteGuy
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-02-04 at 11:08 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
FlyWhiteGuy has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 12:09 PM.
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..Xplicit.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 12:30 PM.
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I'm Battlin this kid Xplicit.
Wen he messaged me askin me 2 Battle he sed he woz only gonna drop a few linez... he said he'd only drop six ? This faggot scared, this bitch sucks dicks.. Amma win this battle, every1 predicts... Now he's readin diss his heads in a mess Thinkin he shudn't of message me, he caused himself stress He's readin, knowin these lyricz impress knowin amma beat him n becum an online success Awww... bless... This kid'z ma first victim.. Wen I Beat him probably start teh whine, Chattin bout 'battle wernt uze, battle woz mine' if he did that in real life, i'd brake his spine Ad Brake his back in half wid juss 1 hand Ad make him scared, like a robot he'd follow ma every demand Yerr, bitch'd follow ma every command Fuck diss shit, Xplicit am lyrically attackin u, u understand? .............Try n lyrically abuse me Text choke, let everybody here see... That I'm a MUCH betta Emcee... |
imma post my verse in a little while...
*eating now* |
Aight…yo check it Ya shit wouldn’t be felt or seen better if u slice a slit in ya vision… Determining your sex was still left up to a doctors split decision… WhiteGuy went fishing and this kid got hooked cause of his mouth… I asked how u accomplished those wins..and all hands point south*… I must be crazy, accepting a battle with the dicks driving ‘Miss Daisy’… This fags words get me..lost but..still can’t seem to amaze me… Hey!..we do share the love of ‘pussy’ since I accepted your challenge… Wow ever since WhiteGuy came to this site in elevation you’ve grown a full ‘inch’… (get it) *=oops…haha forgot u have no-wins (yet) :) |
Bitch can't say shit, yea i got no ONLINE winz...
B4 u spit u eat, tryina battle me wid ur 3 chinz Yo fat boy, u say ma worst get u lost Relax n read fat boy, juss defrost.. Cuddn't hardly see dem wordz... Yo jus like ur dick tha writinz fuckin tiny N tha lyricz is too fuckin whiney Get sum money bitch, these coinz is shiney U Spittin like u sumkinda online pimp? Bitch i know your a online gimp I'll hit ur leg wid ma fist n give u a bad limp An u won't do shit, coz ur a big fat wimp.... Insted of spittin ur fat ass starts eatin Only way u gonna win this is if u start cheatin No Need... u will recive a beatin! N den maybe Tupac will be given u a greetin Yo am soon gonna be known as a lyrical legend Why u even wanna contend? Weather i verbally murder u or let u live will depend All on weather choose to attack or choose to defend Right now, defence is what u should intend Coz ma Rhymez are simply Rude, An yo amma conclude.. Wid hey DUDE! you kno your fat ass want summore food... So now u got summore time teh eat Juss b4 u spit 2 tha next beat So Long Fattie, go get sum food... I repeat.. |
This was feedback posted for FlyWhiteGuy
checkin polls.......but whiteguy you need to elevate your shit.....
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Voted For: ..Xplicit..
votes here: flywhiteguy: ya verse had no competitive portions, ya structure was off, ya flow wasnt there, ya wordplay didnt show, i didnt see real metas, a few attempted multis, but over all it wasnt even decent, ya tried. its prolly just that ya new. Xplicit: ya verse had some nice multis, ya structure was aight, i cant say ya lines were stretched cause ya used a different font and size, so i cant rele tell where ya were going with that. but ya personals connected, and ya punches landed, very understandable, ya had a decent opener, the closure was faulty, it only rhymed with an accent. next time make the rhyme scheme obvious, it helps out, trust me. but you definately too this battle, nice job on the punches, and congrats, return the favor, ill get you the link. vote: Xplicit |
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It wasn't even decent?... psst.. haterz... mine was much betta den Xplicits, he just talked aloada fuckin bull...
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Voted For: ..Xplicit..
damn...explicit not only won...he blew dis dude out da water... Explicit: damn...tite ass verse...nice punches...flow...and structure... FWG: you give us white folks a bad name...damn... got nuthin'... v/ Ex |
Fuck U..... Fuckin Haterz, Fuck diss online Shitt......
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..Uppin' this thread people..
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Voted For: ..Xplicit..
easy battle to vote on punches- Xplicit cuz u had em personals- Xplicit cuz u had em metas- Xplicit cuz u had em multis- Xplicit yours just flowed better flow- Xplicit cuz FWG felt forced structure- Xplicit overall better to look at humor- Xplicit had me laughin Xplicit i have notin to say on how to improve FWG cant say the same for u. structure wuz screwed up, no punches, no personals, an attempt at multis, no metas, flow wuz forced, and no humor. all u did wuz self glorify, youd be a lot better if ya would throw a punch. No Hate Just An Honest Voter. v/Xplicit pz |
FWG throwin punches is wut u do in battlin, if u dont want to self glorify then go to the self glorify cypher and do topicals cuz i think youd be better there.
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^^^ if u want to self glorify*. do topicals cuz i think youd do better there*
had to correct some typin errors |
Voted For: ..Xplicit..
my vote goes to xplicit, yo white, your flow was wack!! your punches were pretty weak and you need to elevate! , but its your first battle so you can only get better i guess, xplicit, nice flow, it was all pretty even and nice structure, punches were nice, pretty hard hitting, bit of nice wordplay, over all better verse! pleasse drop a vote on one of the battles below ok, thx |
.Sum1 vote mayn.
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Voted For: ..Xplicit..
this is a onesided battle,xplicit got this easy in my opinion, he had complex punches and most of his lines stood out unlike flywhiteguy,flywhiteguy had a good flow and structure but he lacked hard hitting punches and personals,both keep elevaten keep it up and return the favor in my sig thx |
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