Battle Rules:

10- Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 11-02-04 at 02:49 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Verbal Abuse has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 08:00 PM.

9th Degree has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 08:12 PM.

In our last battle you dropped a fake line 'bout me havin' a pic
Then forged some nudes 'cuz you're self-conscious 'bout the size of ya tits
Am I rhymin' too quick? This just a keystyle, fast verse
Heard ya don't shave, this Hawaiian bitch brings new meaning to "grass skirts"
4-4? I'll change ya record from even to defecit
You verbally abuse ya friends 'cuz they can't stand ya speech impediment
I'm only doin' this 'cuz if I declined your ass would be bitchin'
Can't stand this heat, but woman you better keep your ass in the kitchen
I had to kill ya verbally, there's other methods I thought of
But drowning would be ineffective...'cuz Cubans are used to being in water

(she's Hawaiian and Cuban, that's all I need to explain)

Voted For: Verbal Abuse

Verbal Abuse-structure n flow was on lock...good punches n personals(if they are true) vocab wasnt to complex, but your drop seemed to get the job done anyway...nice

9th Degree-structure was a little off..messed with your flow, but it was still decent..you coulda came harder with punches...closer was shitty...nice personal with the grass skirt..made me laugh, but it was too little too late...a nice drop but VA took this

V/Verbal Abuse
Reason:More consistent with harder punches, better structure and flow

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quote your own damn lyrics...

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quote your own damn lyrics...

Voted For: Verbal Abuse

okay verbal got this battle

verbal-okay you had wonderful flow....it was a great read just rolled of my tongue as i read it.....very nice....you lacked vocab on this one but you made up with it in punches and personals...which won you this battle...your structure was also better than 9th degree.....ahah the punches were funny..i liked them a lot...very good multi's and meta's...good use of wordplay too...this was one of your better verses....keep it up

9th-okay you had good punches were humerous but verbal's were funnier to me....you had a horrrible structure..your personals lacked.....your one bar didnt rhyme good cuz defecit and impediment dont rhyme that well....you had better vocab than verbal......but you stretched your lines...you had good flow but verbal still topped you....i think you coulda came harder....if ya fixed up ya structure and worked on ya personals you woulda made the battle closer but verbal topped you....work on that stuff

no hate just tellin it how i see it...
return the favor honest explained vote..link in my sig....
peace~1

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.:Retired:.

Verbal Abuse: man you were just rhyming, i saw no persponals no punches, no scheme, no structure, just wordplay. horrible man. ya need to diss your opponent, ya want to ramble do topicals. cmon you basically gave him the win. its over.

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'i lose battles on purpose just so rappers can dream more' - LL
Bored so im Rapping on the internet Just for Spite....
Rhyme dictionary rappers please battle me with your writerns

Voted For: Verbal Abuse

V.A. = your flow was cool....your punches were hard (some were played..=thats me tho) but some hit good...personals were aight....need wordplay but it was somewhat creative oif a verse..but overall you had a nice verse

9th...your verse was weak...flow was aight strucutre was bad, (to me..u had played punches)....and your vocab was real basic....elevate lil' more...

Pz.

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Voted For: 9th Degree

WTF. . .dont tell me to vote on a battle like this ever again.

Removed

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