Mike Hawk vs Capital Punishment
 

Battle Rules:

10-16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No D/R
*Explained/Honest votes only*

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-01-04 at 04:43 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Mike Hawk has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-01-04 04:10 PM.

Capital Punishment has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-01-04 04:14 PM.

You straight garbage kid, not gangsta, just a actor
You were Banks? Doing the same movies as ya favorite rapper
Advantage. .me, you'll never get no respect in this game
Partly cuz ur wack, and because every day you change your name
The one to blame. . .he's been IM'n me since Saturday night
But I understand, I mean, everyone wants to be just like Mike
Kid is garbage, and actually thinks he's the best of us all
Kid's respect factor's like his structure. . .extra small
How can he think he's takin' the win, with all his dull stuff
Only reason he can link punches, is cuz thats what his verse is full of!

10, got over with it...lol@him settin it up in herb city aka frontlines. . .

Voted For: Capital Punishment

Mike Hawk:

ya had good motives, ya personals were tight, but they werent punches, ya had no wordplay, they werent in the slightest bit funny, they kinda just stated the facts. ya need some structure going, overall not too bad, but get some structure and wordplay under ya belt.

capitol: good read, ya came good, i havent seen nothin from you in a while, but eh. ya came better than mh. ya had som egood punches and had some nice wordplay, ya structure was tight, and ya punches landed, and thats wat counts. word. congrats on this win.

vote : cap pun.

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This was feedback posted for Capital Punishment
 

Im not votein cuz i aint tryin 2 get no shit started
but u merked Mike

Damn that ni99a suc

^ He basically took your style. . .of course you'd say that... .up

atleast our style gets vote u sux asss ni99a

Now get E clapped bitch

Fuck is a 'sux asss ni99a'
Thats all type of wrong, stop posting in here.

Voted For: Mike Hawk

Mike came pretty basic, but all of his lines were short and to the point. He had a few lines that hit pretty well and overall it was an average verse :thumbup:

Cap came pretty weak. There was no wit to his punches what so ever. His lines were horribly stretched so he tried to hide the fact by making his text smaller........boooooo.

Vote - Mike Hawk

Uppity, Upp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!

Uppin again. .........................................

Voted For: Capital Punishment

Capital P.
I liked ur drop...tha structure wasn't all stretched out
..tha punches were hard and landed...Vocab was pretty
decent here..but overall u had a pretty good drop here..

Mike Hawk
er...hmmm..banks line was okay..kinda played since practically every1 he practically battled said that 'bout Banks..punches were hard...but not hard enuff to get my vote..yo structure was aight..and tha flow was Okay

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This was feedback posted for Mike Hawk
 

both shit was whack...damn i expect much more from someone with as many groupies as usher

i agree 100% good battle fellas

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mike hawk got SONNED in this battle not even close honestly
plus i would MERK him as-well no COMP

the other gets the win HAND-DOWN FACE UP N RESPECT YA FATHER BITCH

Voted For: Capital Punishment



eww..that's sick, u in love with x at least the smiley tells the people
ya career's like a bad movie franchise so u won't do well in the sequel
^ok, but weak..
i'm not really into politics but i thought gay marriages were outlawed
mike defeating me, a better chance of arm amputee's trying to applaud
^^played concept
personals? hmmm... u gonna probably say i im'ed u on AIM for votes
u showing talent is funny like dislexyic kids attempting to take notes
^^meh, troops used both those lines numerous times(it played)therefor a weak bar n weak punch...
has a problem with structure,streches his bars like prom limosuines
ya talent is pop warner type shit, so u should go join tom's little team
^^weak, yo there not structured right...
we suck? why battle? contradict ya self like schizophrenic witnesses
should just quit rap and stick to wrapping ya families christmas gifts
^^i liked the first line but the 2nd sucked..
ya fronting, showed me ya verse on AIM, fluidmoon downed ya game
no skills, no one even applauds him so he places hands by his name
^^good personal, n i don't even care if its been used b4..lol
would say ya have d/r but look at ya wins, do it for u, shabba's champ
u ain't a real emcee kid, u just interior decoration on rv like lava lamps
^^ok, this was dope..best line so far..
kid claims to battle vets..lol, u probably bribed them like spul tried to
mh showing talent is like blind kids watching tv with their eyes glued
^^ok punch but weak for a closer, shouldve put the 1 b4 it as ya closer...
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You straight garbage kid, not gangsta, just a actor
You were Banks? Doing the same movies as ya favorite rapper
^^ok,decent opener.flow was nice
Advantage. .me, you'll never get no respect in this game
Partly cuz ur wack, and because every day you change your name
^^NICE, BUT SIMPLE..
The one to blame. . .he's been IM'n me since Saturday night
But I understand, I mean, everyone wants to be just like Mike
^^nope...this was wack..!
Kid is garbage, and actually thinks he's the best of us all
Kid's respect factor's like his structure. . .extra small
^^meh...lol..heard it b4...but still good..kinda like his clappin personal ya kno..
How can he think he's takin' the win, with all his dull stuff
Only reason he can link punches, is cuz thats what his verse is full of!
^^nice..but simple n not witty...

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