spite vs e-dubz
 

Battle Rules:

8-10 Lines
no crew votes
no hate votes
no d/r votes
no biting
no recycling

fucked up last battle, so here it is

Minimum posts to vote: 250

Check in by: 11-01-04 at 04:44 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

e-dubz has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-01-04 04:14 PM.

heres my verse that i fucked up before..

peeped your post, accepted..now you leave with a crushed neck
came in ok, left bleeding...now see how quick i changed the subject
your ‘destined to die in battle’ like pilots of kamakazee ‘fighter-jets’
this nigga gonna get ‘eatin’........... like a verse that a ‘biter-gets’
this pussy could run off with the script and still not steal this show
druelin on the stage...... still won't have crowds feelin your flow
you chose to get ripped...im the only reason that posts will come in
cuz standing next to ‘pooh’ is the only way your getting ‘close to a win’*

*winnie the pooh..

Spite has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-01-04 04:17 PM.

didnt bother arranging it by bars
check it.
your heat is flare to the best, i'll put my seed through your flesh, when i cum in your lungs and watch the baby tear through your chest, i suguest you shouldnt dare to test when the lions rest, hurt you just enough to have few words on your dying breath, shouldnt try and step to spite accept you couldnt have dodged him, only time your on-lines when you logged in
im so morbid i'll rip you and flip you from top to bottom like heinz bottles, break your spine till ya mind throttles, so i could send him his fate rendering to bend him in place, since his rhymes more copied over than benjamins face
i wrote this rap quick so fuck a rhyme scheme my lines feen
to smoke this fool in a joke or two show you what a gift is you might miss this, cause unlike ben affleck you aint surviving christmas, your dickless after i switch you from mister to madam, when i snatch your 'ribs out' and make a bitch of you like god did to adam (its over)
Sike! i aint done for the night you actually though u was bright, your weak pussy even ghandi would hurt you in a fight

uppin this shit....

Voted For: e-dubz

spite: man you were just rhyming, i saw no persponals no punches, no scheme, no structure, just wordplay. horrible man. ya need to diss your opponent, ya want to ramble do topicals. cmon you basically gave him the win. its over.

e-dubz:

ya verse had punches, ya verse had personals, ya verse had scheme, ya verse had strucuter, and ya verse was legit. but ya closure was conry. that winney the pooh line, i got it, believe that, but it wasnt rele a diss. seriously. not bad overall though, just work on some creative punches and ya got skill.

vote: e-dubz

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sorry , messed the first one up. heres the new one. hit it up. thanx.

uppin this battle...

stop sleepin on this shit..

Voted For: Spite

spite took it...betta multis...betta flow...betta structure...

spite: betta overall verse...more punches...betta punches...more of a battle feel to it...

dubz: nice shit...but come harder...use mo personals...u'll be ill once u elavate though...

uppin this battle..

uppin this shit..

lets get votes on this shit..

Voted For: e-dubz

i gotta give this to edubz just for the fact that i could follow his shyt... damn spite... seemed like ya coulda ha some dope shyt but ya bars was all fucked up and ya couldn't tell what rhymed with what at times... i'd catch ya flow... and then it'd be gone... i'd catch it again and you'd lose me again

edubz... not a great rhyme from you but ya structure was way better and ya closer was pretty original... i like d that shyt... best line in ya verse...

but other than structure, ya closer and the fact that i could actually follow ya rhyme scheme easier this prolly woulda been a lot closer.

vote goes to e-dubz for the reasons i listed above

one...
return the favor's y'all... links in sig

This was feedback posted for e-dubz
 

spite lost cuz da rulez say 8-10 lines.....he either cant count or is blind...i aint got enough posts to vote but i advise people who can vote to take a look at the rules

uppin this again..

uppin this shit...

come on, lets get votes in this fuckin shit

Voted For: e-dubz

e-dubz gets my vote

spite..yo shit was wack...yo lines were just
too strecthed n' shit...and tha punches were
aight but not hard enuff to get my vote tho..

e-dubz...nice shit mayn...yo punches were
hard & connected...tha flow was decent
and tha structure was in place & wasn't stretched
but overall..yo shit was better

Pz.

*RTF* under my sig

Voted For: e-dubz

my vote has to go to e dubs, much better verse here! punches were tough and hard hitting, flow was nice and consistant and the verse was structured well, vocab was quite nice.

spite... your verse was everywhere, flow was wack, structure wasnt there, lines were strehted and you went over the 8-10 lines! vote goes to e dubs

please return the favour and drop a vote on one of the battles below! pz