Two_Bit vs † Gødz Ångël †
 

Battle Rules:

5-20 Linez
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-09-04 at 11:30 PM

Must drop verse in 90 minutes after check in.

â€- Gødz Ã…ngël â€- has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-04 11:02 PM.

Two_Bit has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-04 11:02 PM.

aight here we go here we go

yo names god's angel but ya say you from hell?
that dont make no sense, do ya know how to spell?
i see you on ya bycicle dawg, ringin the bell.
you aint a hot mc dawg go back to ya shell
you know what makes me wanna stray
is when rappers use pink, fuck it looks gay
your the type of guy that would say
"OHMYGOD, DONT WEAR WHITE AFTER LABOR DAY!"
dawg what you gotta do is pray i dont spray
ya house with my m4 while i light a J.
when ya want sex you gotta pay
i could rhyme about you all fuckin day
you that big a fag, you bout to be in a bag
your not a gangster, youv never commited a crime
how do i know? you hesitated writin 20 lines!!

Two Bit, Wanna learn a little bit?. You aint worth cow shit, Got it?
When you Actually bother to post your verse, Dont bother Revising Shit,
You wont need too, It wont matter they wont read You Wack Verse,
You hafta Black out a word If it has something to with word of Curse,
I broke my mic so i could prove I dont need a vocal to make you sad,
Well you have Officially proven to me that your Lines are terribly bad,
I fugured that out the way you set up your call out in bitch slapped,
Well Consider me the winner, And you should consider your Self "Rapped",
5-20 lines?, Hmm.. "Two" Is more your style, It aint worth a While,
My first Word could Beat your WHole entire verse by 200 miles,
Goodluck Beating me you will need it, Need a leprochan To conceed it,
You dont know half the shit you say, You need a dictionary Just to read it.
You shouldnt feed it, If you didnt even rap you'd be better than this,
The only thing you covering on this lawsuit is your slef with piss,
When the judge call you to the stand, You slam down ya hand,
I'm mad that I got merked, Give me I win, And thats a command!
Calm down Jeffro If you that desperit dont battl me, Dont you see?
I wont even end this with an Embarassing close, I will lift up my nose,
You will hear me say, Your honor, Thank you for letting me Diss on this Hoe~

Peace~~~

G'Luck Homie~

for a guy that wanted a 6 line battle you sure wrote alot, props. im out. gl

Yeah... Thanx..... Peace..

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Voted For: â€- Gødz Ã…ngël â€-

this was a way one sided battle... shit wasnt even close, heres my break down....

Two Bit- structure was WAY off... punches and personals were very soft and didnt hit at all, wordplay and creativity were not there at all... overall bad verse, elevate like hell homie... seriously... no hate tho man... 2/10

Godz- good verse... structure was stretched but okay overall.. punches and personals were presant and some hit fairly hard. wordplay and creativity were also there and worked in the overall content of ya verse... i was some what impressed... elevate still no doubt but u got mad potential so keep doin what u do and stay up....

no hate to twobit just elevate homie and ya could get there...overall one sided battle........

VOTE-Godz

thanx fr tha vote......

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Voted For: â€- Gødz Ã…ngël â€-

â€- Gødz Ã…ngël â€- - iight verse, you had a good flow and some good punches.

Best Line - Two Bit, Wanna learn a little bit?. You aint worth cow shit, Got it?
When you Actually bother to post your verse, Dont bother Revising Shit,

Worst Line - 5-20 lines?, Hmm.. "Two" Is more your style, It aint worth a While,
My first Word could Beat your WHole entire verse by 200 miles,

Two_Bit - you had an OK verse - you need to work on some punches and a vocab.

Best Line - yo names god's angel but ya say you from hell?
that dont make no sense, do ya know how to spell?

Worst Line - dawg what you gotta do is pray i dont spray
ya house with my m4 while i light a J.
when ya want sex you gotta pay
i could rhyme about you all fuckin day
you that big a fag, you bout to be in a bag

OVERALL - this battle was a little whack, but my vote is for â€- Gødz Ã…ngël â€-. Better verse better flow.. better everything! Two you need to work on your lines throw some stronger punches.

Vote - â€- Gødz Ã…ngël â€-

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Voted For: â€- Gødz Ã…ngël â€-

5-20 lines?, Hmm.. "Two" Is more your style, It aint worth a While,
My first Word could Beat your WHole entire verse by 200 miles,
^lol... shit was funny as hell..
i was feeling the closer.. but overall u did nice.. those were the best lines in here well the funniest ones.. Godz angel-- u have nice verses.. i pulled that bar out because it had a couple of multis.. combinin' it with a metaphor will kill people (just advice) and maybe a harsh personal.. but uhm this dude Two-Bit isn't even on your level.. so this was one-sided.. Two-Bit, u gotta get more complex.. from ur first bar to your last, it was terrible.. the closer was the best (prolly) u disses Godz but not enuff to win.. elevate and try G. Angelz again.. aight pz..
/ Godz Angel

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Voted For: â€- Gødz Ã…ngël â€-

Ok This was kinda a weak battle but it wasn't the worse

~TWO BIT~
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Flow-7/10-flowed for most part but was off some places
Punches-5/10-Didn't see no hard hittin ones....elavate son
Personals-3/10-Where are they at...read they profile and get infoe
Vocab-5/10-Weak son....you need to think ahead of the game
Overall-6/10-You can do better. Just practice and then comback

~Godz Angel~
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Flow-6/10-the lines were too drug on...but it was ok
Punches-7/10-you just had enough to get um
Personals-6/10-Mostly all talking,Start dissin the MC
Vocab-8/10-Its Better Then what two bit had...it wasn't "TOO BAD"
Overall-7.5/10-You overall had an OK average drop....but you still had enough to take tha battle...

PZZ ~1~

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Voted For: â€- Gødz Ã…ngël â€-

punches got it personals hmmm uhm everything else was great and you gonna steal my style man dont do that. you are taking my style Gods Angel. You merced him flat him out.
peace return da favor with a vote.