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Check in by: 11-12-04 at 10:41 PM

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RED BEAM has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-04 10:12 PM.

GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-04 10:18 PM.

You think your unbreakable but you spit wit a flaw...
Sayin the same thing over n over again like Tim McGraw...
Withdraw your account...
before your records an embarrassment...
Wont be underground even if you were in the basement...
Could write your spit in crayon and it wouldnt melt...
Leavin' you wit more holes then on a fat mans belt....
Red Beams fucked like Robin without Batmans help...
Dawg lets out a yelp... like im standin on his tail...
Couldnt feel your lines even if they were in braillie...
You fail to realize you cant rap without a vocabulary...
If you punched with a knife you would stab me rarly...
Actin like Darth Vader swinging around your red beam...
I just merked ya now tell us how being dead seems...

gkillahs, im bout to rob u for my easy win
treat u like "a lotto scratcher" im bout to show u "the big spin"

u aint hardcore...release them thoughts from yo brain
im something like "sideshow bob" when im going insane

its danger goin against me, leave yo shirt painted all RED
with tha BEAM on ya head, lay u in yo dark bed(coffin)


U wunna call yo self raw, but ur spam aint beef
we can dig deeper in dirt, than athletes rockin cleets

u think u somewhere at the top, but i spoil ya dreams steady
and have u tumble down slowly like a party full of confeddy

my punches'll fade you up, matter fact, give u a taper
"RIP" this canada fag apart like a blank sheet of paper

im nuthin to play wit, told u once, and now u headed for danger
look dawg, mind ya folks, dont beef with strangers

tha morale of this story...is how a coward got merked
i cant "RIP" u all day, eat some breakfast first

quick lil something...vote HONESTLY people

holla back on this battle people

iight lets get some votes on this battle!!....

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Voted For: GKillaz05

u won much better quality....better everything redbeam is wack

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Voted For: GKillaz05

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=159406

could write your spit in caryon and it wouldnt melt...
leavin u with more holes then on a fat mans belt..
that was decent...

i thought u had the better punches..
flow was good
creativeness was good..
not a bad drop all around 7.9 outta 10...

redbeam u'r verse wasnt bad but u just aint hit hard with punches... ya flow was basic N average no hate just up ya vocab or get more creative cuz i felt u lack in that part as-well good battle thou..

vote: Gkillaz05

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Voted For: RED BEAM

red beam won...killaz rhymes seemed forced and some of it didnt make sense...red had better punches, vocab, and wordplay...both could have worked on their flow..my vote goes to red beam

UPPIN.. lets get some more votes on this ish.... explained!!

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lets get some more thoroughly explained votes...uppn

Voted For: GKillaz05

open: Red beam, This is mainly coz i dont know who Tim McGraw is. Sorry if that sounds stupid.

close: "Actin like Darth Vader swinging around your red beam...
I just merked ya now tell us how being dead seems..."
-This close is superior! personal and a hard hit. I bet red felt this.

personals: Red by a little. Not much on the personal side going on.

punches: Great punches either side.
GKilla's best: "Dawg lets out a yelp... like im standin on his tail...
Couldnt feel your lines even if they were in braillie..."
Oooh! bad boy! killer lines.

Red Beam: "its danger goin against me, leave yo shirt painted all RED
with tha BEAM on ya head, lay u in yo dark bed(coffin)"
Im defo feeling this!

win: Im giving to GKilla, mainly cos the punches were harder in my opinion. Another good verse from GKillaz05.

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