oreo vs Bizzy
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

pink vs da rip

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-13-04 at 03:59 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

oreo has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-10-04 06:11 PM.

he declimed the last battle so im gonna close this this was up when he was online

Bizzy has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-11-04 09:52 AM.

stop cryin and post ya verse bitch,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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bizzy versus oreo, thats nabisco versus a lame,
you rhymes are whack, you put your whole crew to shame,
flow you spit is shit, when you get online all of r.v stanks,
couldnt even work magic and be better if you were loyd banks
if you were the oreo if this battle it would be easier to eat you
you need some elevtion, go back to hip hop preschool,
this whole site could could burn you and then laugh,
last time ya spitted hot you drunk to much water in your bath,
dont even ride the beats you play in your tonka cars,
if ya was a cotote ugly rapper still couldn dance round my bars
your game only gets upped if you were a fat girl in a thong,
you making it in rap??youd hear more why's than a jada song

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posts ya verse bitch ..............................* nuff said*

intro
'u wanna go 2 war?'--that's a 'question' i "ANSWER W/ARROWS",
imagine ya ASS GETTIN PADDLED & SLAMMED BY AN AVALANCHE IN A BATTLE/
u wont HAVE HALF A CHANCE 2 GLANCE AT THE BARREL,
dog, i'm 'bad 2 the bone', like "CANCEROUS MARROW"/

verse
u 'bout 2 get found FACE-DOWN when the BASS POUNDS,
my strategies BREAK GROUNDS;
showin yo wack ass how somethin GREAT SOUNDS/
get left @ a STANDSTILL when i show u the HANDSKILLS,
i drop niggas like ANVILS by the LANDFILLS/
i flip the script & leave u petro--ciphers get turned 2 SEMI-CIRCLES
& THEN MY WORK'LL turn the faces of MEN 2 PURPLE/
& that's how i SPARK SOME FEAR,
u try 2 rhyme, but u studder like epileptic AUCTIONEER/
aint none of yo FLOW'S HARD; i'll pull ya HOE CARD,
face it...u just a waste of sperm that shoulda been a BLOWJOB/
stupid; tell me, Y DO U RAP?
the smart ones who know they can't don't even TRY 2 DO THAT/
on this mission, my official ISSUE'S DISSIN,
4 even tryin 2 THINK on my level, u get left w/a chunk of brain TISSUE MISSIN/
with a MASSIVE WEAPON, i'm BLASTIN PEASANTS,
in essence, i'm the "future" & u can't get "PAST" MY "PRESENCE"...

and pick aint pimp

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Voted For: Bizzy

vote: bizzey...

flow.. oreo i felt was much easy to follow but if u cought bizzey flow it was preety good just at time hard to follow....
punches: bizzey by far was much more creative land'ed harder N was more RAW plain N simple...
creativeness: bizzey yet again...

vote: bizzey...

* keep elevate'in dogs... V.T is here still fuck Da R.I.P come bully R.V with the VIOLENT PEOPLE *

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Voted For: oreo

lol oreo kills bizzy...bizzy..... wack! you need some wordplay man and some tricky shit...u 'bout 2 get found FACE-DOWN when the BASS POUNDS,
my strategies BREAK GROUNDS;
^^ wtf!
that's how i SPARK SOME FEAR,
u try 2 rhyme, but u studder like epileptic AUCTIONEER/
^^^na!!! you need to elevate... your shits to simple...
oreo.. kill him well done

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Voted For: Bizzy

Aii I Think This Was A REAL Battle

Bizzy
Is Clearly (to Me ) The Winner But Heres Why
The Punches and Personals Where Jus Exqusiute And The Why You Could Catch His Flow N Rythm And Jus Fly Through His Verse And That Last Line Jus Put The Icing On The Cake Plain And Simple

Oreo
Ya Verse Was Hot But Bizzy's Verse Was Hotter (NO Hate) Yo Did Better Than I Wouldve Done For Sure (MAd Respect for You) I Woulve Lost Like Well.......LOst LOL But It seemz To Me Like You Need To Up Ya Personals Fo sho Yall Plz Do The Rii Thing And Vote in My Battle I MEan I Took The Time To Vote on Your Battles The LEast You Could Do Is Return The FAvor

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Voted For: oreo

A'ight...a decent battle. Bizzy...you NEED to change your structure. It is hard to read, and it doesn't flow that great...punches were okay, but the verse was structured so badly that it wasn't even really enjoyable to read...Oreo came with some nice punches and he actually had a structure to his verse. Flow was good, rhyme scheme could be a little better.

Vote- Oreo

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knock yo ass out the box uppin................................?????

do you call evryone that doesnt vote for yu a dickrider??????

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This was feedback posted for oreo
 

Good Battle........Checkin' Poll's :)
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upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin this shit......

This was feedback posted for Bizzy
 

wow yur wack your scture sucks nd your punches do too, lets
battle in the crewe battle we bout to have tommoorw

yes upppin word up homie^^^^......................................... ..

uppin, man i should win this kid dont even up his battles ............

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Voted For: Bizzy

u got it nice job u had good punches keep em comin ur structure was a little better and ur rhymes were dope nice flow too u came out strong from the beggining and his rhymes were easy n simple nice job homie keep uppin tho for votescheck thi one n vote man

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this is getting d/q unexplained as fuck,......................