streetryda vs reloaded
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dickriding

lets do this bitch

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-13-04 at 05:13 PM

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Reloaded has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-10-04 05:15 PM.

checking in..................

streetryda has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-10-04 05:19 PM.

this bitch thinks he top notch, and stocks glocks but yet he asks for some recognition...*
yet hes missin, evision this kid winnin thats like a dictionary not having definitions...
preminitions that he'd get merked by his own crew, you shoulda shut up and listened...*
reload this page cuz i infected his head, spread curses, verses left your neck fissioned...
this kid asks to be taken lightly sayin that bitches dont need to hate his rhymes...
spines fractured, captured and left to die but clockwork cant turn back the time...*
herbs presence is pure contridiction like slim fast bought in the stores bulk...
while my wits are known to kill ya kids like cigar's second hand smoke...
put your broad on "lay away" and keep your open call-outz closed captioned...
my style is takin razor blades across bobo to keep them cutting-edge fashioned...

*has a thread in emcee introductions for ppl to welcome him
*mc_bad_boy told him that he'd merk'd bad
*hs rapper's name is clockwork

uppin man drop ur verse so ppl can start voting on this....peace~1

ok here we go........

yo this bitch named his self streetryda/
knowing his gay ass only a dick rider/
lil nigga you just dont know/
the words under your avatar are right"What Flow"?/
my rhymes are outrages they will add another color to your rainbow/
you and gay people stick together like velcrow/
you acting and you aint even part of the cast/
while rhyming my lines will change your personalities like the mask/
nigga know he dont be riding the streets/
only time he get some is when he be beating meats/
its obvious that you get more dick than me/
cause your gay and im "straight" in tha pussy

Voted For: streetryda

From beginning to end StreetRyda had it.. I didn't see any punchlines from reloaded, Come on dawg... You ryhmes rider with ryder, now I don't know what to say about that... But like I said SR from beginning to end, ELEVATE RELOADED

Voted For: streetryda

streetryda
structure is ok.. ur lines are a little stretched though.. flow fell off a little due to the stretchnes.. u had a few multis.. wordplay was alright.. some of ur punches connected.. attempted personals..

Reloaded
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. its newbish.. structure is ok.. ur line lengths were inconsistent though.. flow fell off a little due to the inconsistency.. no multis.. wack wordplay.. attempted punches, but none of them came out.. no good personals..

Overall
both had a decent structure.. both flows fell off.. streetryda had more multis.. better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. streetryda gets my vote..

VOTE - STREETRYDA

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aight uppin on these votes......lets get some more comin peeps
peace~1

uppin man lets get some more votes come......stop sleepin on this

up up up up whee these votes @ ppl come on daym

upping for some votes......

uppin lets see some more votes

uppin man lets get some more damn votes on this ya'll need to stop sleepin

Voted For: streetryda

streets got this, ever aspect, k.o. here thats all there is to it

other guy you needa elevate pz

Voted For: streetryda

ryda took this battle easily in all categories. the multies were pretty good although somewhat forced n that took away from the flow but other than that it was a good drop with decent punches. Reloaded needed to come way harder to win this battle his punches were not hot n word play wasn't hittin either
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shiiiiit yo uppin this like a mother....come on man one more vote to go.

peace~1

Voted For: streetryda

streetryda-u had stretched lines on this for half of tha battle, but near the end, u changed up yo style and made tha structure sound coo..u had harder punches and alotta personals from what i seen which gave u my vote...
reloaded-u had poor structure...thats tha first thing u should work on before entering another battle, and u need to try to be more creative...u punches just didnt land to me, and it sounded like u didnt even try...but thats on u...pratice, u gunna be ight soon
overall-streetrryda took this 1 in my opinion..he had harder punches and personals...


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