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distilled 11-12-04 09:23 PM

distilled vs ...Xclusive...
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R
Explained votes



Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 11-15-04 at 09:23 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 11-12-04 09:29 PM

...Xclusive... has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-04 09:29 PM.

Parallel 11-12-04 09:49 PM

accept hoe..........................................

System 11-13-04 11:21 AM

distilled has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-13-04 11:21 AM.

distilled 11-13-04 11:21 AM

Faggot .

distilled 11-13-04 06:07 PM

This bitch thinks he can call me out, lmao, fag

You make less sense than chinese cartoon's dummy,
I mean we'r still all awaiting this 'Audio soon, coming'
I say awaiting, the word I'm looking for is dreading,
Who wants to here a 14 yr old, attempting story telling,
Especially a Faggot that wears pink at parties to be cool,
I look at Mike Hawk's sig, shit get's me rollin every time dude,
To be honest you can't type, So how you gonna battle??
Even your family hates you 'No pics of X up on the mantle'
Serious man, you'v got a face even a mother would hate,
Your like 'I'll be as good as you in 3 years when I elevate!!'

10 lines Foo'

Hurry your bitch ass up and lets get some votes

distilled 11-13-04 08:25 PM

You Faggot!!!!!

You were just online, now post up your verse.

Parallel 11-13-04 08:59 PM

Distilled lets see if u can “represent” that name and stop time…
By “defending” your mom trying to get on me like a jiggly lime…
How are you gonna be good at “audio” coming from the U.K…
Tempting to “sound” awful like a English men with tooth decay…
I cant believe you asked elephants if your raps were so “tricked-out”…
Then got “played” by animals with “dead” brains & now ur forgot about...
Im sry you don’t have to mention you like “cross-dressers” that’s ok…
Its iight you reach for ur 1 dollar on top the “table-dresser” to pay…
Im so sry English people are not a “force” of anything in crew fights…
You “push” & try to “squeeze” fat ones alot when u dont have the rights…

La Cosa Nostra 11-13-04 10:35 PM

Voted For: distilled

Omfg... Xclusive that was wack, there was one half decent punchline and even that was worded badly.

Distilled, you came aiight, mainly focusing on personals. It flowed better and was worded so much better then Xclusives wackness. Xclusive man you need to elevate badly:

Distilled lets see if u can “represent” that name and stop time…
By “defending” your mom trying to get on me like a jiggly lime…

Wtf was that.. Seriously.. None of it made sense.. Its like saying yo yo, ummm your names distilled, can you stop time?
uhhh uhh, yo, jiggly lime..

It started nowhere, and there was no personals or punchline. Do you even know what Distilled means?

Elevate.. A lot.
Thankyou.

Peace.

distilled 11-13-04 10:47 PM

Shit if my verse don't merk you, that does, now shut up. It's all fact, accept it, and die before my rhymes!!!

uppin

Da Vinci 11-13-04 10:48 PM

This was feedback posted for distilled
 
Shit I was just bout to read these and give feedback but my ride is here, I will do when I get back

Parallel 11-13-04 11:24 PM

Nos...distilled i looked it up it means stop time...the defination i found...

distilled 11-14-04 07:39 PM

Where did you look that up???

distilled is when you distille something, like distilled water, you make it purer, along those lines, can't be bothered explainin but Damn, stop time.

your an idiot

Parallel 11-14-04 09:55 PM

want profe?.........i use a rhyme site that tells me what word mean...i dont use it to rhyme but i usto...but i can prove it...and when you explain something you dont use the word for the defanition..

~Luciano~ 11-14-04 10:48 PM

Voted For: ...Xclusive...



Distilled lets see if u can “represent” that name and stop time…
By “defending” your mom trying to get on me like a jiggly lime…
...6/10
How are you gonna be good at “audio” coming from the U.K…
Tempting to “sound” awful like a English men with tooth decay…
7/10
I cant believe you asked elephants if your raps were so “tricked-out”…
Then got “played” by animals with “dead” brains & now ur forgot about...
6/10
Im sry you don’t have to mention you like “cross-dressers” that’s ok…
Its iight you reach for ur 1 dollar on top the “table-dresser” to pay…
4/10
Im so sry English people are not a “force” of anything in crew fights…
You “push” & try to “squeeze” fat ones alot when u dont have the rights…
6/10

Ya punches were ok ya wordplay was overall better
and ya structure was pretty much on point
ya meta's were good this was one of your best battles i seen

You make less sense than chinese cartoon's dummy,
I mean we'r still all awaiting this 'Audio soon, coming'
7/10--LOL
I say awaiting, the word I'm looking for is dreading,
Who wants to here a 14 yr old, attempting story telling,
4/10
Especially a Faggot that wears pink at parties to be cool,
I look at Mike Hawk's sig, shit get's me rollin every time dude,
3/10
To be honest you can't type, So how you gonna battle??
Even your family hates you 'No pics of X up on the mantle'
6/10
Serious man, you'v got a face even a mother would hate,
Your like 'I'll be as good as you in 3 years when I elevate!!'
5/10

Damn u came out hittin on all cylinders wit ya opener
but u feel righ off after that
ya punches were simple and ya wordplay wasent elevated at all
i exspected alot more from u
overall u jus didnt bring it in this battle

distilled 11-15-04 01:41 PM

Wow, Xclusive has better wordplay than me.....

I guess I can't read.....

TeamOne 11-15-04 06:56 PM

Voted For: distilled

ok......... how the fuck does xclusive have that ok seemin record????? his shit should be flip flopped..... ive literally seen some worse shit from the 4-7 rec cats on this site

but now onto the battle........ distilled came kinda weak...... dind really hit me hard with anything but he got his disses and personals in on X..... altho that razzle dazzle audio on noobs was ten times better than this...... every line had a punch or a personal, which is good, but none of em were really great

ok xclusive..... u told people to peep this b.c ur wordplay and shit was bein misunderstood..... and ill tell u y....... cuz there was no word play......i mean "played" and "dead"????? how do those work together???? and lines were juss straight stupid.... and ur shit really didnt flow like with the table dresser and cross dresser lines....... no hate....... keep doin wat uw ere doin, but i uinno how its possible for u to have that rec if this is wat ur comin with......jiggly lime.... WTF?!?!?!? and distillation has to do with purifying water and takin out all the contaminants in water, dumbass

v/distilled

distilled 11-15-04 06:58 PM

Word^^^

Dude knows what he's talkin bout.

Fuck it then, I guess I'ma have to try a little at all in audio.

And Xclusive, distilled has nothing to do with time idiot.

distilled 11-16-04 02:58 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ..NoMercy..
Nos...distilled i looked it up it means stop time...the defination i found...


Gay ass new name.

Uppin this.

And that is one of the stupidest things, anyone has said, ever.

Premanition 11-16-04 03:04 PM

Voted For: distilled

hahahaha....

distilled took this easy in my eyes....lol some real nice lines in there.....flow was beta, punches were way way beta, personals, yeh ya took that too, best i've seen from you distilled, very impressed...first bar was sick...nice personal...

X...you came o.k but none of ur punches were realy hittin that hard, some were abit played...

stay up

v/distilled

can you hit this crew battle wiv an honest vote plz, up 3-0 but bein mad slept on, thx...
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=159868

thx

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

headgames 11-16-04 04:21 PM

This was feedback posted for distilled
 
just checkin the count good luck fam, nice battle.

distilled 11-18-04 09:39 PM

UPPING THIS SHIT

Come on and Vote.

Hurry up now, I wanna get this closed soon.

distilled 11-21-04 07:56 PM

Upping You Hoe's

Get In Here And Vote

Get To 50

Namsayin

distilled 11-22-04 01:34 PM

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Cocaine 11-22-04 02:34 PM

Voted For: distilled

lmao.. distilled killed it.. xclusive u attempt punches.. but they are unbelievably wack... distilled u didnt have a very good verse but it was still enough to win.. X u gotta elevate bad... if u wanna battle vets and keep ur pretty record u better start working harder.. cause u just got ripped by distilled.. no hate

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distilled 11-23-04 04:35 PM

ARE YOU FUCKING JOKING!!!

Xclusive, you little bitch ass fuckin faggot.

Everyone, every single fucking person said I owned you except Troop said I owned you.

Go Die, I'm battlin you again hoe.

I. Mind 11-23-04 04:41 PM

Voted For: distilled

to be honest, this was a wack battle, hopefully you guys could do better lol..

Distilled: your punches we're wack, there was only one good line, n sitll wasn't good lol, now thats sad, but i'm pretty sure you've elevated alot, but yea..
punch:4/10
flow:7/10
total: 11/10
only 2 differ things cuz dats all there was in here...


two by four: your shyt was just plain wack, elevate on vocab, struct, flow, everything

vote: dis

Distilled lets see if u can “represent” that name and stop time…
By “defending” your mom trying to get on me like a jiggly lime…

Wtf was that.. Seriously.. None of it made sense.. Its like saying yo yo, ummm your names distilled, can you stop time?
uhhh uhh, yo, jiggly lime..

It started nowhere, and there was no personals or punchline. Do you even know what Distilled means?

Elevate.. A lot.
Thankyou.

Peace.

distilled 11-25-04 04:00 PM

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distilled 11-26-04 06:56 PM

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distilled 11-28-04 08:26 PM

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distilled 11-29-04 01:26 PM

Please God Vote.

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NAMSAYIN

I OWN THIS GUY

DrasticMeasureZ 11-29-04 04:08 PM

This was feedback posted for ...Xclusive...
 
You make less sense than chinese cartoon's dummy,
I mean we'r still all awaiting this 'Audio soon, coming'
I say awaiting, the word I'm looking for is dreading,
Who wants to here a 14 yr old, attempting story telling,
Especially a Faggot that wears pink at parties to be cool,
I look at Mike Hawk's sig, shit get's me rollin every time dude,
^^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD PUNCHES NICE FLOW GOOD PERSONALS NICE



To be honest you can't type, So how you gonna battle??
Even your family hates you 'No pics of X up on the mantle'
Serious man, you'v got a face even a mother would hate,
Your like 'I'll be as good as you in 3 years when I elevate!!'
^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES GOOD FLOW


OVERALL= YA VERSE WAS GOOD NICE PUNCHES GOOD FLOW......DECENT PUNCHES EITHER WAY DIS WAS AN GOOD VERSE NICE (THUMBS UP)

Distilled lets see if u can “represent” that name and stop time…
By “defending” your mom trying to get on me like a jiggly lime…
How are you gonna be good at “audio” coming from the U.K…
Tempting to “sound” awful like a English men with tooth decay…
I cant believe you asked elephants if your raps were so “tricked-out”…
Then got “played” by animals with “dead” brains & now ur forgot about...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIGHT GOOD PUNCHES GOOD FLOW



Im sry you don’t have to mention you like “cross-dressers” that’s ok…
Its iight you reach for ur 1 dollar on top the “table-dresser” to pay…
Im so sry English people are not a “force” of anything in crew fights…
You “push” & try to “squeeze” fat ones alot when u dont have the rights…
^^^^^^^^^^^ EH THAT CLOSA WAS KINDA WEAK FAM


OVERALL= OK VERSE UNTIL THE CLOSA JUST PUT IT DOWN THE DRAIN......U HAD SOME GOOD PUNCHES ON THA 1ST PART...U SHOULD KEPT THAT GOING....BUT DEN U ENDED WACKNESS ON THA CLOSA



IN MY OPINION I THINK DISTILLED GOT DIS HANDS DOWN CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND GOOD FLOW.......THA PERSONALS & PUNCHES TOOKED OVA


XCLUSIVE- U HAD AN GOOD START BUT AT THE END U JUST FUCKED IT UP.......PUNCHES WERE GOOD FROM THE BEGINNING...BUT AT THE END OF THE CLOSA U JUST CAME NOT HARD.......

SO I GIVE DIS TO DISTILLED

4fil 11-29-04 04:32 PM

Voted For: distilled

Distilled lets see if u can “represent” that name and stop time…
By “defending” your mom trying to get on me like a jiggly lime…
^^^^NO.......... weak intro
How are you gonna be good at “audio” coming from the U.K…
Tempting to “sound” awful like a English men with tooth decay…
^^^^^NO........ yo xclusive.... this shit your doiing.... like... "audio" then "sound"..... you think thats word play... it aint... its wack and it sucks.... dont do it
I cant believe you asked elephants if your raps were so “tricked-out”…
Then got “played” by animals with “dead” brains & now ur forgot about...
^^^^no.... not really....
Im sry you don’t have to mention you like “cross-dressers” that’s ok…
Its iight you reach for ur 1 dollar on top the “table-dresser” to pay…
^^^^NOPE.......
Im so sry English people are not a “force” of anything in crew fights…
You “push” & try to “squeeze” fat ones alot when u dont have the rights…
^^^no.... weak closer....
overall xclusive... weak verse...... that shit you have like your last line with the.... "force" "push" Squeeze" is just weak as wordplay..... nuff said

distilled you wins this man.... good verse...
xclsive..... think about the feedback i gave you and change your shit man it just aint connecting..... vote distilled
you distilled... can you return the favour and drop a vote on the battle in the sig aint.... im dying to get it closed... thx

Acuity 11-29-04 04:47 PM

Voted For: distilled

HOLLLLLAAAA 2x4 got merked

Vote: distilled

Opening: distilled - heavy
Endin: distilled
Lyrics: 2x4
Wordplay: 2x4
Punches: distilled
Originality: distilled -------family pics n shit
Personaks: distilled - sig diss, audio diss, photo diss --- didnt c many from 2x4 cept 4 played out UK angle
Structure: tied
Flow: distilled

2x4: 7/10
distilled : 8.5/10


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