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11-11-04, 12:40 PM
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Premanition vs Epic
IP: 7B4D F900
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Crew Battle - Mind.Above.Body Vs P.I.N.K 6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting  Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-14-04 at 12:40 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. This Battle Is Now Closed
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11-11-04, 01:05 PM
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#2
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IP: 7B4D F900
Premanition has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-11-04 01:05 PM.
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11-11-04, 03:51 PM
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#3
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
Epic has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-11-04 03:51 PM.
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11-11-04, 03:58 PM
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#4
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
Aiight Im Ready............................................. .
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11-13-04, 11:56 AM
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IP: 9090 54F9
Askin rhetorical questions, “whos nxt?”, won’t want the answer…
Cos ya skill like ya girl’s chest, need something to enhance~ya…(*) This kid got a bunch of multis but punches got played concepts… I’d say im shaggin ya girlfriend, but damn that claims nonsense… ‘Epic’, ~‘Thriller’ in this thread wen I merk this ‘paedophile’…(**) Dawg ur 18 with a girl looking spotty, immature and juvernile… Fuck confident, u’d put ur house on me if u were a bettin~man… Cos u know like I know, 4 all ur wins u’ve neva faced a veteran… P.I.N.K on the straight n narrow…lol….wiv ya leaders name…(***) Thinking u ‘jesus’…’cross’ wiv me n u bout to ‘bleed to fame’… (*) girls pic - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=158001 (**) – Michael Jackson (***) – zig zag |
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11-13-04, 02:08 PM
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
Come On Is A Premonition Really Necessary For This Occasion? You Wanna Battle? You'll Lose I'm Like A Mathamatical Equation Look Out It's An Invasion P.I.N.K Running Threw Ya Whole Crew One By One Get Slaughtered Starting Off With Little Old You Mind Above Body? Hmm A Minority Statement According To You Cant Spell Premonition RIght ,What A Clown ,Your A Fool As A Matter Of Fact Kid,You As Worthless As Hang-Ho "Pre"Writing Like Getting "Pre Tickets" At Fan-Dang-O Your Eternal Infected With Tha Sick Rhymes Im Throwing Forever Elivating And Like A RIver Over-Flowing Im Abusive With Explicit Lyrics Watch Where You "Stand" For I Leave You "Paralized" Better Yet End Your Entire Life Spand Stand Amongst Me Solitude And I'll Leave You WithOut A Jaw Remove Your Tounge You Cant Spit And Drop You Back Like A Ball I'm An Aggresive Mind On Tha Mic That's YOUR Premonition Left You Eternaly Damaged It's About Time You Call Your Phisician My Mission Wasnt Hard Bring You To Tha Front Line And I Succeeded Ya Verse Was Pointless Was Never Even Needed |
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11-13-04, 02:39 PM
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IP: E1CD E891
o.k uppin this
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11-15-04, 12:05 PM
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IP: 50E1 5131
lol hes changed the message below his name....wen i wrote this it sed 'whos next?'...
just lettin ya know... come on uppin this....bein mad slept on... pz
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11-15-04, 01:53 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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This was feedback posted for Epic
IP: 9A07 1297
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.......................... checking the score |
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11-15-04, 05:28 PM
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
^^^^Pre Yes I Did Fam Cuzz I Needed To Put P.I.N.K And I Also Edited Tha Pictures Of My Girl Cuz That Was Old As Fuck And That Is No Longer My Girl
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11-15-04, 05:32 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: C837 AA17
Voted For: Premanition
Askin rhetorical questions, “whos nxt?”, won’t want the answer… Cos ya skill like ya girl’s chest, need something to enhance~ya…(*) ^^nice opener , fresh concept This kid got a bunch of multis but punches got played concepts… I’d say im shaggin ya girlfriend, but damn that claims nonsense… ^^lmao,.....but not hard hittin.. ‘Epic’, ~‘Thriller’ in this thread wen I merk this ‘paedophile’…(**) Dawg ur 18 with a girl looking spotty, immature and juvernile… ^^ok, Fuck confident, u’d put ur house on me if u were a bettin~man… Cos u know like I know, 4 all ur wins u’ve neva faced a veteran… ^^meh weak... P.I.N.K on the straight n narrow…lol….wiv ya leaders name…(***) Thinking u ‘jesus’…’cross’ wiv me n u bout to ‘bleed to fame’… ^^not bad... overall you had some ok punches, focus on harder hitting personals n get some wordplay in there, it'll help... Come On Is A Premonition Really Necessary For This Occasion? You Wanna Battle? You'll Lose I'm Like A Mathamatical Equation ^^nonsense..weak Look Out It's An Invasion P.I.N.K Running Threw Ya Whole Crew One By One Get Slaughtered Starting Off With Little Old You ^^man, wtf?..? Mind Above Body? Hmm A Minority Statement According To You Cant Spell Premonition RIght ,What A Clown ,Your A Fool ^^lmao, wheres the punch? As A Matter Of Fact Kid,You As Worthless As Hang-Ho "Pre"Writing Like Getting "Pre Tickets" At Fan-Dang-O ^^omg...nope..! Your Eternal Infected With Tha Sick Rhymes Im Throwing Forever Elivating And Like A RIver Over-Flowing ^^nope..! Im Abusive With Explicit Lyrics Watch Where You "Stand" For I Leave You "Paralized" Better Yet End Your Entire Life Spand ^^nononope..!, fuck are you tryin? Stand Amongst Me Solitude And I'll Leave You WithOut A Jaw Remove Your Tounge You Cant Spit And Drop You Back Like A Ball ^^meh... I'm An Aggresive Mind On Tha Mic That's YOUR Premonition Left You Eternaly Damaged It's About Time You Call Your Phisician ^^filler again.. My Mission Wasnt Hard Bring You To Tha Front Line And I Succeeded Ya Verse Was Pointless Was Never Even Needed ^^meh ok concept but played n written badly... . man this is the worse verse ive ever seen from you, i cant believe you expected to win against any1 with such a poor level of punches n no personals... you need to go read the tutorials again son...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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11-15-04, 05:36 PM
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
^^Fair Vote Premanition Was Better I Honestly Say That So Big Ups To You Premanition
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11-15-04, 05:38 PM
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IP: CBE5 FD5D
thanx dawg.........
lets get the votes comin.......... pz
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11-16-04, 02:14 AM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: D135 D6AF
Voted For: Premanition
Come On Is A Premonition Really Necessary For This Occasion? You Wanna Battle? You'll Lose I'm Like A Mathamatical Equation 2/10 self glorification Look Out It's An Invasion P.I.N.K Running Threw Ya Whole Crew One By One Get Slaughtered Starting Off With Little Old You 2/10 Mind Above Body? Hmm A Minority Statement According To You Cant Spell Premonition RIght ,What A Clown ,Your A Fool 2/10 As A Matter Of Fact Kid,You As Worthless As Hang-Ho "Pre"Writing Like Getting "Pre Tickets" At Fan-Dang-O 1/10....The hell is that Your Eternal Infected With Tha Sick Rhymes Im Throwing Forever Elivating And Like A RIver Over-Flowing 1/10..No Im Abusive With Explicit Lyrics Watch Where You "Stand" For I Leave You "Paralized" Better Yet End Your Entire Life Spand 3/10 Stand Amongst Me Solitude And I'll Leave You WithOut A Jaw Remove Your Tounge You Cant Spit And Drop You Back Like A Ball 1/10....Doesnt rhyme I'm An Aggresive Mind On Tha Mic That's YOUR Premonition Left You Eternaly Damaged It's About Time You Call Your Phisician 5/10 My Mission Wasnt Hard Bring You To Tha Front Line And I Succeeded Ya Verse Was Pointless Was Never Even Needed 2/10 ya punches were simple ya wordplay was ok ya similies were ok ya personals werent there overall u had jus not a very good drop Askin rhetorical questions, “whos nxt?”, won’t want the answer… Cos ya skill like ya girl’s chest, need something to enhance~ya…(*) 4/10 This kid got a bunch of multis but punches got played concepts… I’d say im shaggin ya girlfriend, but damn that claims nonsense… 4/10 ‘Epic’, ~‘Thriller’ in this thread wen I merk this ‘paedophile’…(**) Dawg ur 18 with a girl looking spotty, immature and juvernile… 3/10....Pedophile Fuck confident, u’d put ur house on me if u were a bettin~man… Cos u know like I know, 4 all ur wins u’ve neva faced a veteran… 4/10 ya punches were hittin ya wordplay was real good ya structure was ok ya similies were good ya personals were there u had everthing ya comp didnt prem winz hands down P.I.N.K on the straight n narrow…lol….wiv ya leaders name…(***) Thinking u ‘jesus’…’cross’ wiv me n u bout to ‘bleed to fame’…
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11-16-04, 03:55 AM
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...Belong...
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IP: CCAE A7E8
Voted For: Premanition
Premanition Askin rhetorical questions, “whos nxt?”, won’t want the answer… Cos ya skill like ya girl’s chest, need something to enhance~ya…(*) /\ i thought nice opener good punch This kid got a bunch of multis but punches got played concepts… I’d say im shaggin ya girlfriend, but damn that claims nonsense… /\ ok line ok punch flowed aight ‘Epic’, ~‘Thriller’ in this thread wen I merk this ‘paedophile’…(**) Dawg ur 18 with a girl looking spotty, immature and juvernile… /\ lol nice Mike Jack punch in the 1st line Fuck confident, u’d put ur house on me if u were a bettin~man… Cos u know like I know, 4 all ur wins u’ve neva faced a veteran… /\ an aight punch coulda been better though P.I.N.K on the straight n narrow…lol….wiv ya leaders name…(***) Thinking u ‘jesus’…’cross’ wiv me n u bout to ‘bleed to fame’… /\ nice closer diss was good nice wordplay Epic Come On Is A Premonition Really Necessary For This Occasion? You Wanna Battle? You'll Lose I'm Like A Mathamatical Equation /\ opener didn't connect Look Out It's An Invasion P.I.N.K Running Threw Ya Whole Crew One By One Get Slaughtered Starting Off With Little Old You /\ not a strong punch at all more filler Mind Above Body? Hmm A Minority Statement According To You Cant Spell Premonition RIght ,What A Clown ,Your A Fool /\ nice punch and usin his name to good effect As A Matter Of Fact Kid,You As Worthless As Hang-Ho "Pre"Writing Like Getting "Pre Tickets" At Fan-Dang-O /\ ??? blah to that bar Your Eternal Infected With Tha Sick Rhymes Im Throwing Forever Elivating And Like A RIver Over-Flowing /\ filler Im Abusive With Explicit Lyrics Watch Where You "Stand" For I Leave You "Paralized" Better Yet End Your Entire Life Spand Self-Glory...blah Stand Amongst Me Solitude And I'll Leave You WithOut A Jaw Remove Your Tounge You Cant Spit And Drop You Back Like A Ball /\ 2nd line aight but again 1st line a self-g line...avoid them I'm An Aggresive Mind On Tha Mic That's YOUR Premonition Left You Eternaly Damaged It's About Time You Call Your Phisician /\ nice rhyme but again self-g in the 1st line My Mission Wasnt Hard Bring You To Tha Front Line And I Succeeded Ya Verse Was Pointless Was Never Even Needed /\ 1st line self-g 2nd line....a lot of closers are ending like that lately...starting to get played now Ima go wit Prem because his verse was better overall...this wasn't the best i've ever seen and to be honest both probably could've come a lot harder but Prem was better on this occasion wit the punches both had decent structure and flow and the rhymes were coo...but Epic try and avoid Self-Glory lines they damage ur verse because it's wasting lines because it's a battle not a self-glory match...but better luck next time...and an ok battle but v/Premanition...RTF on the link in my sig (The Song Now Playing)
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