e-dubz vs sabotage
 

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e-dubz has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-04 09:25 PM.

sabotage has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-04 10:49 PM.

had to rush it but here it is

E heard his sh!t was good but it was Nature Calling, this herbs fake
You couldn’t be ‘pure dopeness if you ‘swallowed your first name’*

Couldn’t make a difference if u were a minus problem..u crumbling like soggy cookies
They should call me the ‘vet’, notice the way im checkin this pussy

*pure dopeness is under his name.....first name is e(short for ecstasy)

already dropped......................................

i get under yo skin, leave yo with the dermatologist
but this is only stage one cause murda will follow this
by now sabotage know im dope man.. and i dont loose
while your so called 'hot lines' require a 'phone booth'

uppin this battle...

Voted For: e-dubz

e-dubz took this.....neither were great but sabatages structure? nah don't like it, thought e had beta flow n had the stronger punches...

v/e

can ya hit this wiv an honest vote, y'all know how fustratin it is wen battles get slept on so plz return the favour...pz
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^umm ok...............

.........uppin 4 votes...........

Voted For: sabotage

Feedback for my man sabotage.

That e-line made me laugh man, haha, Dope battle.

Vote removed

Damn........

Errrm, In case you can't tell by the first 5 words, that was meant to be feedback, Sorry........ Get it deleted or whatever you gotta do.

Voted For: e-dubz

i like the wordplay in the first line........ althought the second line sounded more like filler...... coulda switched them up, and it woulda been better i think........ second bar was better punchline wise.....although u spelled "lose" wrong, and the finisher was pretty good...... i aint heard it before so it aint played to me..... overall it was better then sabotage

now sabo...... poor poor sabo.... lmao, ur first two lines dont RHYME....... how can u write four lines and not have some of them rhyme..... the line was pretty dope wen u figure out wat it means, but the explanation takes away from the feelin u get..... and "minus problem" was worded pretty bad..... and wat does a vet have to do with checkin pussies????? maybe theres sumthin i dont get, but it really shouldnt have the 's for "vet" to me........ overall u didnt do bad, buit neither of ur lines worked well

v/e-dubz

dawg u must be dumb if u dont understand that........

......pussy is a cat.....cat is an animal.....vets check animals.......

......ur an idiot..........

should sed "checkin this cat" then...... less connections needa be made

uppin this shit..

Voted For: e-dubz

e-dubz: decent...1st bar was okay slightly effective but in a way both of these bars were very played........................ like stuffed animals na mean LIKE WHOA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sabotage: blah.......1st bar was....weird you should of worded it better because it made no sense....I think you meant to say "if you swallowed your usertitle for your name"
that would of been much better. 2nd bar was decent but played as fuck.

vote: e-dubz both came whack but dubz was a lil better.

uppin this shit..

yall obvioulsy dont understand nothing..........

.......first name meaning the "e"...............

Voted For: sabotage



i get under yo skin, leave yo with the dermatologist
but this is only stage one cause murda will follow this
5/10
by now sabotage know im dope man.. and i dont loose
while your so called 'hot lines' require a 'phone booth'
4/10

E heard his sh!t was good but it was Nature Calling, this herbs fake
You couldn’t be ‘pure dopeness if you ‘swallowed your first name’*
5/10
Couldn’t make a difference if u were a minus problem..u crumbling like soggy cookies
They should call me the ‘vet’, notice the way im checkin this pussy
6/10

This was kinda a weak battle tha punches were kinda played but i felt sabotage came with jus the better drop in my eyes
aint really much 2 judge in such a small battle but overall
sabotage had the better drop here

thanks man ..............

.......uppin 4 more votes.................

Returned honest votes would be nice these dayz

yo when that one vote gonna get taken off.. it was spose to b feedback

uppin this battle..

keep votin..uppin this

Voted For: e-dubz

Vote E Dubz.. easy win... sabotoge had some weak lines.. wasnt feeling it.... e budz good lines was the last.... sabotoge....i wasnt feeling ya firrst bar.. i understand it fully but not liking it... not a good punch or personal...
vote edz..

Voted For: e-dubz


i get under yo skin, leave yo with the dermatologist
but this is only stage one cause murda will follow this
^^^^^^^^ WORDPLAY AND AN DECENT PUNCH



by now sabotage know im dope man.. and i dont loose
while your so called 'hot lines' require a 'phone booth'

^^^^^^^^^^^^ MUWAHAHAH WORD NICE PUNCH DECENT

7/10



E heard his sh!t was good but it was Nature Calling, this herbs fake
You couldn’t be ‘pure dopeness if you ‘swallowed your first name’*
^^^^^^^^^^^ COULD'VE BEEN BETTA "OK" PUNCH




Couldn’t make a difference if u were a minus problem..u crumbling like soggy cookies
They should call me the ‘vet’, notice the way im checkin this pussy
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ EH KINDA WEAK MAYNE NOT AN GOOD PUNCH

4/10




OVERALL= E-DUBZ GOT DIS HANDS DOWN WITH AN LIL WORDPLAY AND AN DECENT PUNCH TO END IT

SAB- YA PUNCHES COULD'VE BEEN BETTA MAYNE U HAD PERSONALS & PUNCH BUT DA PUNCH WASN'T HARD HITTIN