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..:Outbreak:.. vs Sinner
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10 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-17-04 at 02:47 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
..:Outbreak:.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-17-04 02:17 PM.
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Sinner has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-17-04 02:19 PM.
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Fuckin Retarded Dick, ain't trying...Sinner's bound to have a pre written monstrosity :)
This Just another Oppurtunity For Sinner to Be Owned and Clowned- Thought Xclusive was King of herb's, Obviously he was Overthrown and S was Crowned- I Mean Look at this Bitch, begging for help from different Crew's- His Outlook On Battle's are Prolly You win some you lose some but obviously that don't apply to You!-* It's Real Out Here...Huh...Kid You've got ya Priority's Mixed Up- You ain't No Sinner,Ya Rhyme's are "Paw" Like the Andrex Paper Pup-** I'll Snatch the Breath From Ya Chest, and Leave a Standing Carcass You Coul'dnt feel me if we were playing water Polo, and ya name was Marcus-*** Your Open Mic's are Shit Kid Why not just Quit, Decease, Just Stop- My Line's are Tight...Like Ya little Sister, Until They both Go POP!-**** Explanation's-* Saying that you win some you lose some you know that sayin doe'snt apply because he lose's all the time.. **Carex-is a tissue paper here in the UK, and there is a little pup that rep's the company :) ***Marco Polo-Think about it, :) **** Owned......Ha Ha...If You dont get this might as well join Sinner and DIE :) |
Now shit break has come to give me a little tention this mutha fucker is so old he forgot he's on a pention and not to mention this little faggots a bitch and pedofile mutha fuckers got health problems and he got the piles look at it's avatar it's a fuckin doll that is spankin he gets turned on by it cause he's gay and starts jackin he thinks his rhymes are uneque he can't even speak went out wid a dog for a week and she just got freaked Just read up about how you luv all ya monster munch your gettin punched silly and you died wid my first punch |
You could of at least tryed you fuckin dickhead, i mean for a pre written verse that was WACK as ...ummmm....YOU :)
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yea whateva and that an't prewriting dumass and it wasn't wack like yours wid out a fuckin punch.... dumass lol.
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Upping let's get this closed....Sinner is just a herb, his verse prove's It... :)
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it an't though stop swaying you votes you fake mc.
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Voted For: ..:Outbreak:..
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-LMFAO!!!...... outbreak nailed you dawg.....harder verse throughout....some punches were...-eh-.....but, they were W.A.A.Y. harder than yours.....sinner's verse flowed better cuz outbreaks was a lil choppy....but, outbreak came clean in all otha areas for realZ.... vote/ outbreak ..take it or leave it.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for ..:Outbreak:..
Sinner U Got Humliated Plus Got Owned Mayne
Dats My Boi Outbreak Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Reppin Da P.i.n.k Dis Battle Is One Of Dose P.i.n.k. Productions |
you even said some of his punches were meh so how did that make his freestyle get the vote I don't understand this...
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This was feedback posted for Sinner
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his verse was stretched god dammit and if you read his punches they are weak nuff said...
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Maybe...but they were stronger than yours i didn't vote coz i knew u'd try and get it removed :thumbup: |
Voted For: ..:Outbreak:..
Ohhhh Shit thought I would peep this verse, dame sinner your verse was well basic with played lines. you did have some ok word play at times but some lines like.... he thinks his rhymes are uneque he can't even speak went out wid a dog for a week and she just got freaked ^^^Poor as hell^^^ Best bar was the close. Out.. Come nice and won this battle on his frist bar basiclly This Just another Oppurtunity For Sinner to Be Owned and Clowned- Thought Xclusive was King of herb's, Obviously he was Overthrown and S was Crowned- ^^^Nice opener with a hard hitting punch. Out had decent vocab, wordplay and flow and was relentless with the punches... Vote .:Out:. |
Voted For: ..:Outbreak:..
Both needed better punches...no wordplay was here ^^^he had some wordplay throuwn in the mix. The flow i'm basing my vote on... "This Just another Oppurtunity For Sinner to Be Owned and Clowned- Thought Xclusive was King of herb's, Obviously he was Overthrown and S was Crowned-" ^^^Example of good flow this guy wrote up...this basically won th battle Return the favor...OR I'LL NEVER VOTE FOR GUYZ BATTLES AGAIN...LOL http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=160715 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=160367 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Upping ...........Sinner Your Verse was worse than Wack............
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Voted For: ..:Outbreak:..
..:Outbreak:.. get my vote came much hard but didn thave very good stuture sinners was ok but he didnt come well ..:Outbreak:.. was much better came hard and had better flow ..:Outbreak:.. get my vote easy came way hard /v ..:Outbreak:.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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This was feedback posted for ..:Outbreak:..
hahha he got owned....werd killa verse.. hahha laughed so hard!!!
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Voted For: Sinner
sinner got this cuz the other guy verse was all ova the place sinner punches was just simple yet hit with enough impack to get the win |
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Voted For: ..:Outbreak:..
This Just another Oppurtunity For Sinner to Be Owned and Clowned- Thought Xclusive was King of herb's, Obviously he was Overthrown and S was Crowned- ^^eh ok, more humourous then anything.. I Mean Look at this Bitch, begging for help from different Crew's- His Outlook On Battle's are Prolly You win some you lose some but obviously that don't apply to You!-* ^^decent..stretched a bit It's Real Out Here...Huh...Kid You've got ya Priority's Mixed Up- You ain't No Sinner,Ya Rhyme's are "Paw" Like the Andrex Paper Pup-** ^^good........ I'll Snatch the Breath From Ya Chest, and Leave a Standing Carcass You Coul'dnt feel me if we were playing water Polo, and ya name was Marcus-*** ^^lol, k this was decent Your Open Mic's are Shit Kid Why not just Quit, Decease, Just Stop- My Line's are Tight...Like Ya little Sister, Until They both Go POP!-**** meh weak closer . . Now shit break has come to give me a little tention this mutha fucker is so old he forgot he's on a pention ^^ok, not bad but is it a real personal, i dunno.. and not to mention this little faggots a bitch and pedofile mutha fuckers got health problems and he got the piles ^^no, not even a punch... look at it's avatar it's a fuckin doll that is spankin he gets turned on by it cause he's gay and starts jackin ^^bad ryhmin, no decent wit yet??.?? he thinks his rhymes are uneque he can't even speak went out wid a dog for a week and she just got freaked ^^hell no, this is jus bad...doesnt constitute as a punch Just read up about how you luv all ya monster munch your gettin punched silly and you died wid my first punch ^^weak closer.. . k,outbreak..you typed in capital thats the main reason ya shit looked stretched at times, some of ya punches were decent closer was blah< not overly great but you had some wit in ya verse..(marco-polo,line)...decent drop..stay up.. . sinner,..your opener was decent< but it seemed like a fake personal..that aint koo.the rest of youy lines were simple n had no wittyness in them 1 line didnt even ryhme... you gotta try n get some wordplay n better vocab...your structure was the only real thing you had going for ya.... ..outbreak-gets my vote for havin some wittyness in his punches n keepin a decent flow throughout his verse... . pc |
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dude you had no wqit in ya entire verse..it was a poor battle verse.. oh n can you stop pm'n me...!, i don't help any1 so its not personal.. |
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Voted For: Sinner
vote for affect i think u came harder ur punches were a little better opener and closer were good flow was easier to follow structure is good retro jus had some werid ass punches i dunno they didnt hit as hard as urs keep uppin this bitch tho check out my battle with weedex |
Voted For: ..:Outbreak:..
V/Retro.....punchs an creativity was on point in this battle he just had a better verse all around..... Affect his verse wasn't really dissin hard i really thought it was basic but u had flow...good battle to both of u....v/ Retro RETURN THE FAVOR......... |
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Voted For: Sinner
yo u was hot your rhymes really make sense keep it up. HOLLA |
This was feedback posted for ..:Outbreak:..
checkin polls, im not votin cuz im too lazy to put it all out, but i feel Retro took this. px
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Look @ all the d/r votes for sinner lol shit man Reto needs
to get up in here and get this shit sorted... 1~ |
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