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No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-17-04 at 04:03 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Jay-SmileZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-04 04:05 PM.

Elemental Soul has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-04 04:07 PM.

Im gettin really happy now,cuz im about to crack a "smile"
Staple ya mothas pussy lips together so that u cant come out
You must be stoned like a fucken madusa victim
Ya rhymes wouldn't be durable if i put batteries in'em
Rippen the J's outta dictionaries,just to expunge ya race
Ya punchlines are just sad,so whipe that smile outta ya face

Dont i get the win now....this nigga no showed AND he accepted the battle.......

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Led Poetic

watch u mean i'm still here?

i accepted already just get ya verse ready

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http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=177925

http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=160715

Feels like i'm "HOLDIN REWIND" the way i keep "SLAUGHTERIN ya KIND"/
you ryme like a new CRACK HEAD the way u "CHOKIN ON LINES"// (Lines from his verse/ crack lines)

"POKING BEHIND" in tha MIC only way u can get ya "ASS in da BUSSINESS"/
ELEMENTAL claims he eats EmcEEs....he does he "SWALLOWS my CHLIDREN"// (swallow yuck)

"HOLLOW bullets SPITTING" he shitting cause he aint "RACKED up my LEVEL"/
Elemental claims his CIRCULATIN TRACKS but he just "BASHING them PEDALS"// (Bike racing)

Voted For: Elemental Soul

wasnt feeling da battle ya'll....elevate sum....~1~

Vote removed

hey...i hit post feedback....but o well it'll get dq'd any way.....my bad i aint try to hit the vote button ya'll

uppin............................................. .................................................. ..............................................

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Led Poetic

Voted For: Elemental Soul

Elemental Soul get my vote came hard had harder pucnhes and better flow n strture Jay-SmileZ came weak and didnt have no flow or stuture or nuttin both came weak but ES came hard and had better flow n Struture 1 suded all the way

v/ Elemental Soul

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HAHAHA WOOOOOOWWWW you said i didnt have flow????

Was this cause i called u a virgin on the mugshot forum???

Damn i knew i should have black-listed you before u voted

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http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=177925

http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=160715

Voted For: Jay-SmileZ

well i think that J took this because elemental just didnt come as hard or didnt even put in any effort in this...this only takes someone like 10 seconds to type up...realitically 2 minutes...
Jay had some aiight punches, around that level of a rookie but shows potential...dont worry fam im elevating too..,
elemental go read some tutorials and learn...my only other advice would be to re read your verse before postin...

Return the favor in the sig....much appreciated...

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actually i change my mind...elemental soul takes it...PM strobe to get that changed...pz...

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