Lil-Youngstah vs (~*~Dj KiD~*~)
 

Battle Rules:

8 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-19-04 at 12:25 PM

Must drop verse in 160 minutes after check in.

(~*~Dj KiD~*~) has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-19-04 11:57 AM.

i no u gonna win
but gl anywayz homie .....................

g.l 2 u 2 may da best mc win aight................

Lil-Youngstah has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-19-04 12:01 PM.

Youngstah u will be a dead Youngstah after i finshed with u
bullet in da head too yeah u twat ur face looks like ur mams poo

ill knock u down to ur bones crack shut up face or ill give u a smack
ur shit ur ryhmes r shit any1 would of tho u was a computer hack

man u think ur it but ur just a ass dick ridin is ur best subject in life
dont worrri i got my knife slice u in bits n got r.i.p* like ur wife

*rest.in.piss

ur gonna win den........................................

I Start spittin my versez.. like if i was a Psyber-net-ix,
U 19? still u haven't had any.. until u tried Cyber-net-Sex/
Dj Kid... i'll Scratch u Like a Mix record on a Turn-Table,
Sell u Like a Used Prostitute though Worser like a Burned-Lable/
Cut-yo-Wrist, Slip-yo-Throat... like if I was ready 2 battle in Combat,
Break-ya-spine, so like an Old man u sayin...*I just Threw-out my Back*/
Dawg u *wack*, Though u Defyin da Word,
U gettin lyrically stabbed by my *mic-sword*...

dat's my verse

aight let's do this may da best mc win

uppin for votes on this battle....

u won dis easy or well anufther 1 imma lose...................

Voted For: Lil-Youngstah

Lil-Youngstah - Good verse you had some good flow and multi's wit hard hitten punches.

Best Line - I Start spittin my versez.. like if i was a Psyber-net-ix,
U 19? still u haven't had any.. until u tried Cyber-net-Sex/

Worst Line - Dawg u *wack*, Though u Defyin da Word,
U gettin lyrically stabbed by my *mic-sword*...

DJ Kid - iight verse it was a little simple but the flow wasnt to bad.

Best Line - man u think ur it but ur just a ass dick ridin is ur best subject in life
dont worrri i got my knife slice u in bits n got r.i.p* like ur wife

Worst Line - Youngstah u will be a dead Youngstah after i finshed with u
bullet in da head too yeah u twat ur face looks like ur mams poo

OVERALL - This was a one sided battle.. Lil took this is every way shape and form. He had harder punches and bettter flow. Kid try usin some personals and multi's in your verse.

Vote - Lil-Youngstah

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uppin on votes.................................yep

Voted For: (~*~Dj KiD~*~)

damn you some shit nigga. just give up son. if you want some help you should sign up for elevation.

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sorry that was not supposed to be a vote. ill get that removed. sorry..........

Voted For: Lil-Youngstah



Youngstah u will be a dead Youngstah after i finshed with u
bullet in da head too yeah u twat ur face looks like ur mams poo

OMG just fuckin quit rap that shit was weak as fuck

and the rest of ya verse got even weaker and u rap like a bitch no no not a female but a BITCH



I Start spittin my versez.. like if i was a Psyber-net-ix,
U 19? still u haven't had any.. until u tried Cyber-net-Sex/
now that bar alone killed hes whole verse hands down

but then u started to fall off but still manage to beat him actully that first bar manage to beat him

thats enough on my vote

it's cool reloaded....just get da vote off aight...well uppin for votes

uppin for votes on da battle................mayne's

Voted For: Lil-Youngstah

DJ-KiD->
nice punches
had an okay multi in 1 line..
flow was aight on ur drop
vocab was okay
overall u get a 5/10...yo punches
could've been harder tho..

Lil-Youngstah
nice punches..they landed
ya structure was a little strecthed
ya vocab was pretty decent
w/p was aight..
6/10

Lil-Y took this one...punches were harder than DJ'z
and they landed...

uppin for votes on da battle still let's finish this

Voted For: Lil-Youngstah

Punches : Lil Y
Personals : Lil Y
Flow : both
Mettas : Lil Y
Complexity : Neither
Multies : Lil Y


VOTE<><>LIl Y ::: He Took It In About Every Catagory

aight 1 more vote let's end this battle...uppin for votes

uppin for votes.....one more to go on this battle.

Voted For: Lil-Youngstah

Lil-Youngstah Gets My Vote:


IP:


I Start spittin my versez.. like if i was a Psyber-net-ix,
U 19? still u haven't had any.. until u tried Cyber-net-Sex/
Dj Kid... i'll Scratch u Like a Mix record on a Turn-Table,
Sell u Like a Used Prostitute though Worser like a Burned-Lable/
Cut-yo-Wrist, Slip-yo-Throat... like if I was ready 2 battle in Combat,
Break-ya-spine, so like an Old man u sayin...*I just Threw-out my Back*/
Dawg u *wack*, Though u Defyin da Word,
U gettin lyrically stabbed by my *mic-sword*...

This was an ok spit liked the multis and flow. your last 2 lines messed up the structure tho so try to keep that in check aight

Think i'm gonna break this one down

Youngstah u will be a dead Youngstah after i finshed with u
bullet in da head too yeah u twat ur face looks like ur mams poo
4/10 "u twat your face looks like your moms poo"?

ill knock u down to ur bones crack shut up face or ill give u a smack
ur shit ur ryhmes r shit any1 would of tho u was a computer hack
5/10 weak


man u think ur it but ur just a ass dick ridin is ur best subject in life
dont worrri i got my knife slice u in bits n got r.i.p* like ur wife
6/10 your best line

You Need To look at some of the battles that people are winnin and try ta find out why aight elevate and keep battlin