Never Had - Will A Peer, Ecko & Enygma
 

The first of what will hopefully become many collabs :thumbup:

1st - Will A Peer (first audio)
2nd - Ecko
3rd - Enygma
Final Production - Enygma

Never Had

I've left feedback in just about everyone's threads on here.....;)

ecko sucks i expected that though what surprised me is how much enygma has elevated better flow lyrics even your voice is better you have a better presence on the mic then before dont sound so white or scared pretty good willa your sylable rhymes are too simple but you have a nice voice and good flow and potential as well a decent song really :thumbup:

yea thats dope.... Willas part was dope! lmao.... Ecko was hot.... Enygma was dopest shit.... beat was nice..... dope song...

word...dope shit willa,i told you girl.......cant wait for our collab.....you all did great on this track, was feelin this foreal, keep droppin fam...1....just watch out.....for A.I...........111111111111

Enygma ofcourse was the best on the track.... Will A Peer would be a far second, and Ecko a close third...... will a peer juss went real slow on it so it wasnt as good..... pretty good spit by her lyrics wise... enygma juss picks that shit up and runs with it wen his turn comes up... Ecko was ehh...... his voice ande presence was aight, but the lyrics werent great and he juss seemed opff at some points..... overall it was good.... will needs to speed up her flow i think, Ecko needs more time, and Egnyma needs no feed really.. return the favor in the sig \ / \/ \/ \ /

yea i was rhymin really slow lol ill speed it up on the next track

willa ya shit is AIGHT...and i kno Ecko and Diss A.I....?? dont do dat son so...thats ok tho...Ecko...ya quality is ass...and ya flow is kinda rushed at some places..O "Congrads to AI"-Ecko......yea betta had heard dat shit...

Enygma...ya shit was straight...seemed like some of ya words was rushed too...

Listening as i type

Beat is pretty coo

First... Sound young...femcee?? Presence is def there.. flow is off and on tho.. lyrics is coo.... u have a pretty nice style.. jus work on the flow

Second... that transition was coo... voice is iight... wouldnt mind hearin this with a bit more emotion... your kinna rushin a few bars.. other then that the flow is on

Third... Yeah def shinin on this... Like the lyrics ... Dope style.. A few bars are rushed....like that "ever since i been spitten shit" didnt sound as on point as everything else.. but i was def feelin your verse..

Nice drop yall... A few things to be worked on.. but i was feelin it..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=160798
Any of yall... hit that when u can.. Pz.

yup i ma femcee lol

Interestin.

I used this beat before is Alchem beat

Damn Will u sound young..........but it was str8 1st time hearin you

Ecko i heard yo shit before 2much pop ups try to filter it

E ...takin shot at A.I...i see interestin expect one in return

Good day

i dont see why i sound so young lol i pose as parents so kids can some and get drunk with me lol

will a --- u flow was off and on but it's a first, u already kno to hit me up if u need to.. ecko- scratchy and rushed sort of, enygma- pretty nice til the end.. fell off a lil'.. another female.. welcome to audio girl...

gangster gangster
change ur sig if ur gonna be in a crew with her agasin lol

Ah'ight I'm dropping real feed cuz engyma is the real feed master....lol

Willa....your voice is unique, yeah somewhat young sounding but its different and different is always good, your flow is real choppy though...I think its cuz you haven't learned how to calculate ya breaths yet...I ono but u were taking badly timed pauses..and your emotion wasn't there, it was almost like u was talking but u somewhat new to this so don't get down on yourself about it cuz it was better than most new comers.

Ecko...you were rushing your lines alot, it killed your flow, u gotta shorten ya lines and manage ya syllables better...your miscounted syllables is the reason why u were stumbling on alot in ya verse, ya delivery was really blan as well, thats cuz u were rushing ya words u can't really emphasize words wit ya tongue when u gotta focus on getting out lines dat are too long.

Engyma...I see u still obsessed wit the fast flow..which is cool but the secret to making it flow smoother is throwing multies in there and changing it up...your rhyme scheme was way too consistent..and it made ya spit monotone, try throwing influctions in ya verses like saying certain words louder, or in a unique way..or write some lines to fall short of the snare so in order to make it hit snare u gotta drag out certain words...it'll make ya verses more entertaining, but it was a decent verse..I was just trying to give some helpful pointers

Decent track..I'd give it a 6.5/10...it coulda been better but fair drop all in all

hmmmmmm...............

*sniff sniff*

do i smell a call out??????

hahahahahahhahahahahha

will a peer..... first time i heard ya..... sounded mad young, flow was off in a lot of places...... half decent for a first peep.......5/10......

Ecko........ same as above.... but you gotta slow down...... your not enygma..... take your time wit it doggie...... i'll give you a 6/10.......

enygma...... flow was on point...... your style reminds me a lot of Necro.... cant hate on your verse though...... pretty decent drop.... you carried this track.... 8/10


oh no question there will be tracks dropping soon in response......


"ez"

To all that thought this was to them.....bring it....lol. Nothing like some friendly competition :thumbup:

But on the real....thanks to everyone that took the time out to peep our shit and give us some good feedback. Believe me, we REEEEEAAALLLY appreciate that shit......also, everyone that left a link I will try to reply to.

first person, i thought u were a little boy at first, but at closer inspection i see you are a gurl. swell. you have a.... unique voice, on point for the most part, you fell off a few parts but i think i can see you elevating. just keep droppin.

second dude sux ballsack. not feelin these kinda styles where peeple get too bigheaded when they are still below tha bar. work on formating your bars so youre "rhyming words" are at the end of the loop right so they sound correct. besides that it was better at the beggining but u shortly fell off big time... better luck next time.

enygma my man, i remember you were the first person to ever reply to my first drop on rv, that was a few months ago, i looked at you're link you dropped in my thread for the "NBA REMIX" and i can see a huge difference now. in just a short few months i can see you have a better outlook on rap. i see this happening to alot of cats lately, they just all of a sudden click out of nowhere. you definataly on point on this, keep improving cuz you're mos def doin ya thing. :thumbup: get at me

Track was fairly weak with the execption of enygma, who sound like me :) .... Ecko was so so, just needs to get more comfortable with a mic and beat, WillaPeer was very amatuer, very simple flow that managed still to fall off often... Enygma hit the track flowin, I really think u startin to sound like me- I dunno if u tryin to or what, I think a little more emphasis on some of your stressed syllables in them multies would really bring out your lyrics, and help the flow sound better... Keep workin on quality and keep droppin... expect a come back on this one :)

^^^LOL.....I was thinking the same thing the last couple of times I listened to it. I was like.....damn, I kinda sound like my boy SeventyThree. But anyway, bring it on :thumbup:

And to anyone else that felt offended by it, bring it ;)

I was interested to see how this would turn out after I left CS. Enygma when you started off you had a flow goin' like Big Pun. Hit me up for a collab sometime...

uppin for feedback.......first time i heard this with willa......gud shit..

basically its war now whores..........................