The first of what will hopefully become many collabs

1st - Will A Peer (first audio)
2nd - Ecko
3rd - Enygma
Final Production - Enygma

Never Had

I've left feedback in just about everyone's threads on here.....

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ecko sucks i expected that though what surprised me is how much enygma has elevated better flow lyrics even your voice is better you have a better presence on the mic then before dont sound so white or scared pretty good willa your sylable rhymes are too simple but you have a nice voice and good flow and potential as well a decent song really

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yea thats dope.... Willas part was dope! lmao.... Ecko was hot.... Enygma was dopest shit.... beat was nice..... dope song...

word...dope shit willa,i told you girl.......cant wait for our collab.....you all did great on this track, was feelin this foreal, keep droppin fam...1....just watch out.....for A.I...........111111111111

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Enygma ofcourse was the best on the track.... Will A Peer would be a far second, and Ecko a close third...... will a peer juss went real slow on it so it wasnt as good..... pretty good spit by her lyrics wise... enygma juss picks that shit up and runs with it wen his turn comes up... Ecko was ehh...... his voice ande presence was aight, but the lyrics werent great and he juss seemed opff at some points..... overall it was good.... will needs to speed up her flow i think, Ecko needs more time, and Egnyma needs no feed really.. return the favor in the sig \ / \/ \/ \ /

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

yea i was rhymin really slow lol ill speed it up on the next track

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willa ya shit is AIGHT...and i kno Ecko and Diss A.I....?? dont do dat son so...thats ok tho...Ecko...ya quality is ass...and ya flow is kinda rushed at some places..O "Congrads to AI"-Ecko......yea betta had heard dat shit...

Enygma...ya shit was straight...seemed like some of ya words was rushed too...

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[.Diabolic:.]

Listening as i type

Beat is pretty coo

First... Sound young...femcee?? Presence is def there.. flow is off and on tho.. lyrics is coo.... u have a pretty nice style.. jus work on the flow

Second... that transition was coo... voice is iight... wouldnt mind hearin this with a bit more emotion... your kinna rushin a few bars.. other then that the flow is on

Third... Yeah def shinin on this... Like the lyrics ... Dope style.. A few bars are rushed....like that "ever since i been spitten shit" didnt sound as on point as everything else.. but i was def feelin your verse..

Nice drop yall... A few things to be worked on.. but i was feelin it..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=160798
Any of yall... hit that when u can.. Pz.

yup i ma femcee lol

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Interestin.

I used this beat before is Alchem beat

Damn Will u sound young..........but it was str8 1st time hearin you

Ecko i heard yo shit before 2much pop ups try to filter it

E ...takin shot at A.I...i see interestin expect one in return

Good day

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i dont see why i sound so young lol i pose as parents so kids can some and get drunk with me lol

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will a --- u flow was off and on but it's a first, u already kno to hit me up if u need to.. ecko- scratchy and rushed sort of, enygma- pretty nice til the end.. fell off a lil'.. another female.. welcome to audio girl...

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gangster gangster
change ur sig if ur gonna be in a crew with her agasin lol

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Ah'ight I'm dropping real feed cuz engyma is the real feed master....lol

Willa....your voice is unique, yeah somewhat young sounding but its different and different is always good, your flow is real choppy though...I think its cuz you haven't learned how to calculate ya breaths yet...I ono but u were taking badly timed pauses..and your emotion wasn't there, it was almost like u was talking but u somewhat new to this so don't get down on yourself about it cuz it was better than most new comers.

Ecko...you were rushing your lines alot, it killed your flow, u gotta shorten ya lines and manage ya syllables better...your miscounted syllables is the reason why u were stumbling on alot in ya verse, ya delivery was really blan as well, thats cuz u were rushing ya words u can't really emphasize words wit ya tongue when u gotta focus on getting out lines dat are too long.

Engyma...I see u still obsessed wit the fast flow..which is cool but the secret to making it flow smoother is throwing multies in there and changing it up...your rhyme scheme was way too consistent..and it made ya spit monotone, try throwing influctions in ya verses like saying certain words louder, or in a unique way..or write some lines to fall short of the snare so in order to make it hit snare u gotta drag out certain words...it'll make ya verses more entertaining, but it was a decent verse..I was just trying to give some helpful pointers

Decent track..I'd give it a 6.5/10...it coulda been better but fair drop all in all

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