[rate]~Life's A Bitch~[rate]
 

This how I'm feeling right now...If you feel the same way, leave me some feed...thanx

..I'm tired-of-struggling, tired of always rhyming-and-hustling..
..I'm sick-of-life, and I think-its-time, for my eyes-to-be-shutting..
..I'm tired of caps-and-slugs, grab-and-runs, acting-tough..
..And I'm sick of the world, that made me resort back-to-drugs..
..I'm tired of slanging-bricks, chasing-kids, for their eighty-cents..
..Tired of not-being-stable, and not-being-able, to pay-the-rent..
..Sick-of-the-pain, tired of thunder, sick-of-the-rain..
..Sick-of-cocaine, tired of thinking this-is-a-game..
..Tired of slitting-my-veins, but the knife-isnt-help..
..Sick of hiding-from-belts, why must I live my life-in-this-hell?..
..Tired-of-family, tired of friends not being there-for-me..
..Bouncing around like trampolines, and working at Dairy-Queen..
..I'm sick-of-women, and sick of having to play tricks-to-get-em..
..I'm sick of these trick-friendships, and girls who wont quit-bitchin..
..I'm tired-of-stress, tried-my-best, but life-is-a-mess..
..Too bad I can't start all over, and try-it-again...

Lookin for maybe 2 cats to get on the remix to this...hit me up if u interested...SERIOUS RESPONSES ONLY!!! IF YOU'RE NOT GONNA DO IT, DONT WASTE MY TIME!!!! anywayz...leave me some feed on this...I will return the favor...Thanx...1

yo...someone gonna leave me some feed or what?? Jesus...come on yall...uppin this bitch

uppin this fucker!!

yo man...that is some dope shit...nice flow, word play, and structure was good...8/10...keep that shit comin

no doubt dawg...thanx for the feed...uppin for more...1

Yeah man nice verse a lot of emotion and some decent
wordplay could have uped the vocab...

How can a 14 year old relate to all this ? Is this real or just
a topical drop.

alot of this is real man...I threw in a few lines for a topical...but alot of it is real

by the way, thanx for the feed...uppin this bitch!

ay Black~Magik that was hella tight 7/10 the word play was good and thats just tight cuz tha words are so true, really good word play

thanx man...glad u felt it...uppin for more feed...come on yall quit sleepin on this fuckin thing!! 1

thats some ill shyt man nice flows and topic 8/10 keep em comin bro im new to this shyt but hit me with some feed mang
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162583

aight I'll hit it up...thanx for the feed man...uppin this fucker!!!!!!!

yo this was fire mang...
multis was good,
flow was good,
all around shit was just TIGHT mang.....

9.0 outta 10.....

fire...

wow...thanx dawg...glad yall like it...uppin...1

Yea This Shit Was On Point.. On The Real.. Good Job ON This..
nothin you gotta work on either..



return the favor with a vote? hit my sig..

This Was A Good Piece Kid I Was Feeling It....9/10...But I Got To Say SomeThing...If Life's A Bitch Then Fuck Hur.....Lol

Gd Gd I Like It....

good stuff homie......................keep em' comin............werd,.......~1~

yea this shit was raw man, i'm feelin a lot like how you was writin man, so im really feelin that shit, nice drop homie, and im down for doin a remix

hit my shit up when u can

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162307

damn nigga...
 

you done left me speechless i wanna say something other
dan good wordplay,and shyt like dat all i can and gonna
say is good shyt and imma try to hit u up wit a verse fo dat
remix holla atcha boi

that was some dope shyt man nice flow felt it all the way from beginin to end but yeah man dope work bro keep uppin n post a hit on my drop

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162583

dope drop man, was heavy, was feelin theme and content , expressed yo shit 4real, ( 8.5/10)get at me if u still lookin 4 head 2 get up on remix im down. Peace - return favour chek ma battles and rop an honest vote

4 sho...thanx for the feed and criticism...If you are serious about the remix, pm me a verse and I will get back to u...lets get this shit goin!! Uppin...1

Uppin This Bitch!!!

Kool Shit homie I liked the rhymes. Good stuff. Return da favor with my open mic. Its getting slept on all sick. or mad w/e.

Good lookin out man...thanx for the feed...uppin this bitch...1