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Old 11-28-04, 09:59 AM   #1
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wake up MAKE IT A HOTT ONE FEEEEEEEEEEEDDDD

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Cats wish they had a batch of raps to match my tactics
My lyrical madness climactic like poppin a handful of prophylactics
But you can't swallow this I'll never be eaten
Never defeated or beatin as long as I'm breathin I'm never retreatin
I drop science like clumsy professors in auditoriums
And stretch nigga's out like a montherfuckin accordions
I'll damage ya physical, whether minumum or maximum
Spinnin and spittin till my raps platinum flattin em
Nitroglycerin sizzlin droppin more lines than a fisherman
Feel the friction i got the hooks to keep u listnen
My diction will have ready u to move like an eviciton
You think your hitten your missen ur jus moanin and pissen
Then like a thanksgivin turkey my ryhmes carve em like corkscrews
Force screws to loose when I nail em like horseshoes
I'll find your vital organs and put a machete there
Thug type playa but bitches say I'm a teddy bear
Al Capone style brusin your back
Make you an interracial cat, half blue and half black
Then I slice jugular veins crushin' your frame
Till the pressure from the skull plates bustin your brain
And while you at work I feed you bitches sloppy dick
I got a hard drive, your man got a floppy disk
The only time you have safe sex and be felt
Is if you jacked off in a car wearin a seatbelt
Like Dhali Lama’s mind with rhymes so ahead of my time
Now 8 planets rotate around the Earth instead of nine
Cuz I destroyed the Earth with a timed verse in the past
Which is now the future, so prepare for the blast
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i know you wish you never battled me but its too late faggot
im packing punches and they don’t come in Kool-Aid packets
damn.. merkin shyt here mang... tight structure.. on point


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Reppinn...................Retro-Bution.................

Last edited by PntBlnkDistnce : 11-28-04 at 12:24 PM. Reason: nobody was friggen feedin wake up people
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Old 11-28-04, 10:04 AM   #2
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All I can say is kool. nice piece and return the favor.
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Old 11-28-04, 10:18 AM   #3
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Wow, That Was Some Nice shit.. you spit like a nigga from my hometown..

we call him reminize...


shit was flames dunny..


return the favor with a vote in one of my battles?
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Old 11-28-04, 10:40 AM   #4
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yo yo that drop was tight man, shit dat shit flowed..it was heavy...mad lyrics, nice structure, some multis overall tight piece....

Return tha favour on my battle wit Lil Rip wit a favour --- link in sig. Peace
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Old 11-28-04, 11:58 AM   #5
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wow...wasnt expecting nuthin like this...this shit was sick man...brutal...fire...hot...goddamn...lol...nice drop fam...1
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Old 11-28-04, 11:59 AM   #6
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That was pretty nice

Good Vocab And Multis And The Flow Was Ok

The Structure Could Be Worked On a little bit but over all it was good

8.5/10
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Old 11-28-04, 02:36 PM   #7
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commm keeepp upppin i neeed feeed

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Originally Posted by SixX da FinisH
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i know you wish you never battled me but its too late faggot
im packing punches and they don’t come in Kool-Aid packets
damn.. merkin shyt here mang... tight structure.. on point


Battle stats 3-0
KO'S
Weedex
Terror 2005
Wreckk

KINGDIPSET-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162918
WRECKK
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162997

Reppinn...................Retro-Bution.................
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Old 11-28-04, 02:40 PM   #8
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nice may;n...that drop was good....like ur vocab...and it flowed pretty good....structure was there as well

return tha HONEST favor in my battle against infector mindz

stay up
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Old 11-28-04, 02:42 PM   #9
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not bad for a newb....6/10....came pretty nice...stucture came off...but the vocab was good..metaphores wasent feelin them..but it was ok...keep dropin
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Old 11-28-04, 02:57 PM   #10
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pretty decent drop... i liked the fact you had good vocab., and overall it waslike 8/10... thanks for the feed on mine
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Old 11-28-04, 02:57 PM   #11
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.......................Nice................
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Old 11-28-04, 03:07 PM   #12
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pretty nice om i liked the vocab alot keep em commin
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Old 11-28-04, 04:32 PM   #13
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keep feedin guys im hungry upp'in
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Quote:
Originally Posted by SixX da FinisH
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i know you wish you never battled me but its too late faggot
im packing punches and they don’t come in Kool-Aid packets
damn.. merkin shyt here mang... tight structure.. on point


Battle stats 3-0
KO'S
Weedex
Terror 2005
Wreckk

KINGDIPSET-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162918
WRECKK
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162997

Reppinn...................Retro-Bution.................
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Old 11-28-04, 07:35 PM   #14
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u guys neeed to feed on this cmonn
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Quote:
Originally Posted by SixX da FinisH
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i know you wish you never battled me but its too late faggot
im packing punches and they don’t come in Kool-Aid packets
damn.. merkin shyt here mang... tight structure.. on point


Battle stats 3-0
KO'S
Weedex
Terror 2005
Wreckk

KINGDIPSET-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162918
WRECKK
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162997

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Old 11-28-04, 07:35 PM   #15
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that was nice son, u had good flow and the syllables were really connected. U are really good at multies and usin good vocabulary holla back at me for the feed back 1
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