Troubled Lifestyle
 

stepping quietly,making sure no-one is around.
all I hear is the wind,and stick's breaking on the ground
sneaking,while walking,I keep look out over my shoulder
I never thought this is how it would end,thought I'd die much older
keeping my eye's open,and constantly aware
I never thought I would go thru with this dare
I thought i wouldnt,but obviously I do care
Feeling's run thru my spine,Know I no the feeling of true fear
I hear a noise to the left,
I speak quietly,yet load enough for them to hear
"who's that? whos there?
the scamper away leaving me in chill's
now I can see why people pre-write there will's
Im stuck hear,with no option to carry on forward.
i wish I had a weapon anything,even a swored
no one around nme ,not even the lord
i carry on there's no turning back
why did i let my self get into this postition
im to scared to even start wishen,
deperate feeling's running thru my vain's
i wish some 1 was with me ,so they could feel my pain's

good :thumbup:
u had flow rhymes don o bout stuckture but u did well
:thumbup:

uhm thanx. whew....

lmfao...........................

*agrees*

all good cept for structure..

that's good comin form me..cuz I'm mean to everybody

ask aroundzzz

ok baby boi you must be a pro. lol

lol yes I am...

I Know a pro at making the ladies happy....

Felicia..........................carm down.................
lmfao............................

ok i will i will.........

lmfao.......................................

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free psot but its iite. upping this song.

yeah good flow but work on the structure all in all lmfao but hit me up im new so w/e
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162583

ok babe I will.

That Was Really Good...

fav line..

now i know why people pre-write there wills..




keep it up mami..

Leave some feed on my open mic, or vote in one of my battles? its appreciated..

ok sweety I'll do that. :hump:

Upping This iight people. I'll return The favor in any way..... ok. :hump:

^_____________^...uppin....

thanx sweety. apreciate it. ^________^

I will babez. Can someone teach me too battle?

I can tommorow...it should be easy cuz...this was pretty good...

tommorow I'll help you...cuz..I'm bout ta get of in a minute..

I'll Help You Too.......

Thanx you sexy things.... lol
and thanx Zeke...:hump:

good stuff.........just work on ya structure a lil bit...