wake up MAKE IT A HOTT ONE FEEEEEEEEEEEDDDD
 

Cats wish they had a batch of raps to match my tactics
My lyrical madness climactic like poppin a handful of prophylactics
But you can't swallow this I'll never be eaten
Never defeated or beatin as long as I'm breathin I'm never retreatin
I drop science like clumsy professors in auditoriums
And stretch nigga's out like a montherfuckin accordions
I'll damage ya physical, whether minumum or maximum
Spinnin and spittin till my raps platinum flattin em
Nitroglycerin sizzlin droppin more lines than a fisherman
Feel the friction i got the hooks to keep u listnen
My diction will have ready u to move like an eviciton
You think your hitten your missen ur jus moanin and pissen
Then like a thanksgivin turkey my ryhmes carve em like corkscrews
Force screws to loose when I nail em like horseshoes
I'll find your vital organs and put a machete there
Thug type playa but bitches say I'm a teddy bear
Al Capone style brusin your back
Make you an interracial cat, half blue and half black
Then I slice jugular veins crushin' your frame
Till the pressure from the skull plates bustin your brain
And while you at work I feed you bitches sloppy dick
I got a hard drive, your man got a floppy disk
The only time you have safe sex and be felt
Is if you jacked off in a car wearin a seatbelt
Like Dhali Lama’s mind with rhymes so ahead of my time
Now 8 planets rotate around the Earth instead of nine
Cuz I destroyed the Earth with a timed verse in the past
Which is now the future, so prepare for the blast

All I can say is kool. nice piece and return the favor.

Wow, That Was Some Nice shit.. you spit like a nigga from my hometown..

we call him reminize...


shit was flames dunny..


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yo yo that drop was tight man, shit dat shit flowed..it was heavy...mad lyrics, nice structure, some multis overall tight piece....

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wow...wasnt expecting nuthin like this...this shit was sick man...brutal...fire...hot...goddamn...lol...nice drop fam...1

That was pretty nice

Good Vocab And Multis And The Flow Was Ok

The Structure Could Be Worked On a little bit but over all it was good

8.5/10

commm keeepp upppin i neeed feeed

nice may;n...that drop was good....like ur vocab...and it flowed pretty good....structure was there as well

return tha HONEST favor in my battle against infector mindz

stay up

not bad for a newb....6/10....came pretty nice...stucture came off...but the vocab was good..metaphores wasent feelin them..but it was ok...keep dropin

pretty decent drop... i liked the fact you had good vocab., and overall it waslike 8/10... thanks for the feed on mine

.......................Nice................

pretty nice om i liked the vocab alot keep em commin

keep feedin guys im hungry upp'in

u guys neeed to feed on this cmonn

that was nice son, u had good flow and the syllables were really connected. U are really good at multies and usin good vocabulary holla back at me for the feed back 1

that was hot homie, i didnt see that one comin, u didnt fall off nowhere neither, consistent throughout the whole thing, that was some crazy shit foreal, stay up homie, that shit was nice

thnx guys thats sick im workin on a new om now and got a collab with mistah tate comin up right quick soo ill be back

liked it...good shit...keep it up..especially good vocab..7.5/10.........keep em coming......

yo son that was a nice drop i liked it an give it a 8/10 it had a little bit of everything sum punchs nice vocab an multi's ...yo keep droppin that hot shit son stay up...
.......RTF holla at one of my battles wit unknown prospect or jono.....

ahh that was pretty hot son
you had nice flow and use of vocab
you haha *spat* some hott lines there

werd keep doin ya thang homie

9/10

Good Vocab... Is it really about anything? O well, seemed like you focused a lot on rhymes and inner multies, and if that was your goal, good job... Rhymes were crazy...

was alright...........

thnks guys keep feedin ima upp this one

yea man i was feeling it... dope drop..good use of multies. keep it up n keep spitting flames man. il be checkin ya collab ya drop ok. ^^

sweet deal mang that sounds hott thnx for the drop ill leave one on urs when u make a new OM peace mang



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you wrecked that bitch.... good drop..... elevation... that was ripe

i really didnt feel like reading it all, but it was tight from wut i read...... return tha favor n up Poloroid Picture 4 me. pz

Yo This Was Sick Coz.....Dawg You Fire Vocabulary Was Tight....9/10

thnx guys i will return the favors im in abttle right now so check it out nowobyds votin

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