King~~Dipset vs warrior
 

Battle Rules:

5-6 Bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 70

Check in by: 12-03-04 at 06:07 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

King~~Dipset has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-02-04 06:10 PM.

aii Here I Go

Ill merk dis jerk Catchem Jackin his Johnson Tryn 2 get growthspurt* ( Get It? )
I Bet U take dicks Up da ass....Den notice how da truth hurts*
//1

Ill make ya punches feel like pats n look Yo Ova Like a scanner
and I seen Dat ive Fucked U up Mo times than a porno Banner
//2

Im On fire Dude .....u Jus Gonna supply The Gas
Ill Smoke Yo ass So Bad Da voters gonna need oxygen Masks*
//3

There Is no Way 2 Stop Me like chuckie i got An evil Seed
But killin is a hobby for me So they jus call me evil deed
//4

U Suppose To B a warrior But you aint put up A fight
U Suppose To B My Daughter But all I C is A Dike
//5

I Come like Daytime so I turn Out Ya Light
when I knock ya ass out I get no responce from U like yo open mics
//6
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1st *
Jackin a Jack Makes It grow so he Thought jackin his Dick was either Gonna Make him grow Or his Dick

2nd*
He takes It up The ass so when he gets fuck he notice The Truth ( which Is that He takes it up the ass) hurts

3rd*
When I smoke This Bastard when voters come to vote They Gonna need an oxygen Mask.
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If you dont undertsand then plz Dont Vote
Peace

warrior has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-03-04 01:06 AM.

ya verse wouldnt get red(read) if u wrote it wit ya wrist-slit/
and who needs noobs for easy wins when we got king~~dipshit/

i spit-sick this bitch-gets riped-quick without a doubt/
u on my dick like lipstick when ya bitch pull me out her mouth/

ill rip ya dumb text and i aint gon break one sweat/
i asked him if he gon come hard he said im only 14 i cant cum-yet/

im gettin tired of beatin herbs wit a keyed verse so y do i do it/
its kinda pointless ur verse already makin yaself look stupid/

between rapverse and porn, Kings constantly on the computer/
"tell NBC to cancel the show cause we found THE BIGGEST LOSER"/

uppin.............................................

up up and away....................................

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Voted For: warrior

kings-
punches and structure wansnt there....hard to follow long wit.
Warrior had better punches and had a much stronger readable verse
both need to elevate a lil king needs to more than tha warrior tho so my
vote=Warrior

check my battle out http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=163844

This was feedback posted for King~~Dipset
 

Yo last line was hot u nice I think hot but stop usin those baby rhymes other than that that was hot this was a tie nice battle

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well atleast my post count is gettin higher .........

by this rate ima have 10,000 posts oh yea uppin......................

this is gettin rediculous how long is this battle gon take

come on dipset u suppose to be helpin me wit this uppin shit i cant be the only one doin this

Voted For: King~~Dipset

This was a nice battle....i like it.....but King Dipshit i mean Dipset (j/m) got this by a lil bit
pretty equal but you had a little harder punches.....nice battle.....bot of you keep elevatin
peace

Com Yall Lets Get This Battle Some Votes and yall know that i done voted on EVERYBODY battles and if u say i didnt your a lier so Yall Cmon Stop Sleepin On My battles I done voted on every battle that i could ** the ones that i was eligable for**
So Yall Stop sleepin on my battles and you know i dont do that to you so
Uppin

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Voted For: warrior

Warrior's verse: I was feeling his verse a lot because it was easy to read and the punches were hitting hard.

ya verse wouldnt get red(read) if u wrote it wit ya wrist-slit/
and who needs noobs for easy wins when we got king~~dipshit/

i spit-sick this bitch-gets riped-quick without a doubt/
u on my dick like lipstick when ya bitch pull me out her mouth/

ill rip ya dumb text and i aint gon break one sweat/
i asked him if he gon come hard he said im only 14 i cant cum-yet/

im gettin tired of beatin herbs wit a keyed verse so y do i do it/
its kinda pointless ur verse already makin yaself look stupid/

between rapverse and porn, Kings constantly on the computer/
"tell NBC to cancel the show cause we found THE BIGGEST LOSER"/

King~~Dipset's verse: Wasn't feeling his verse like warrior's. It was lacking flow, and gay jokes are played.

Ill merk dis jerk Catchem Jackin his Johnson Tryn 2 get growthspurt* ( Get It? )
I Bet U take dicks Up da ass....Den notice how da truth hurts*
//1

Ill make ya punches feel like pats n look Yo Ova Like a scanner
and I seen Dat ive Fucked U up Mo times than a porno Banner
//2

Im On fire Dude .....u Jus Gonna supply The Gas
Ill Smoke Yo ass So Bad Da voters gonna need oxygen Masks*
//3

There Is no Way 2 Stop Me like chuckie i got An evil Seed
But killin is a hobby for me So they jus call me evil deed
//4

U Suppose To B a warrior But you aint put up A fight
U Suppose To B My Daughter But all I C is A Dike
//5

I Come like Daytime so I turn Out Ya Light
when I knock ya ass out I get no responce from U like yo open mics
//6

Voted For: warrior

Close...but warrior takes it wit some nice punches and witty personals. Stucture and flow needs to be fixed up from both. Decent battle, but elevation is good for everybody.

Return the favor. Thanks.

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Voted For: warrior

wow pretty good battle....i was impressed by both of you......props to both...

king- u really have to work on your multis man....if u get to the point were u can use some nice multis.....you will be hard to beat...i can see that you are elevating...keep up the good work....work on the multis....you had some pretty good lines in your verse

warrior- i picked you because you had a personal in your verse which was pretty nice...better use of multis...and your punches hit slightly harder......other than that...you both were about even......good battle....no hate to your king.....

return the favor with an honest vote in my battle with terror2005...thanks

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This was feedback posted for King~~Dipset
 

King Dipset The Structure Was terrible other then that ya verse was ok and warrior you verse was decent to its just feedback

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come on people i hate when battles last foreva

uppin u son of a bitches uppin ...

ok ok im sorry for callin yall sons of bitches now please can u vote

Voted For: warrior

weak battle...
warrior came harder in this one
punches were harder...but decent tho..
structure was okay, and tha flow was aight..
but King~~ yo shit was aight, punches could've
been a lil harder, structure was a lil too stretched
but u tried tho i can see that, nice try tho............