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View Poll Results: Untraceable vs Tha End
Tha End 0 0%
Untraceable 5 100.00%
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Old 12-04-04, 02:49 PM   #1
Untraceable
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From: p-ville
Tha End vs Untraceable

IP: 408D D2A2

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-07-04 at 02:49 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.
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Old 12-04-04, 03:49 PM   #2
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Untraceable has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-04-04 03:49 PM.
 
Old 12-04-04, 04:13 PM   #3
Untraceable
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From: p-ville
IP: 408D D2A2


they call me untraceable but your name is eraseable and replaceable
placeable acts of Tha End from back in august but he's uncapeable*
unescapable moves cuz your a pawn on the board bout to be defeated
greeted to a suprise causin ya demise cuz ya aint winin if ya pleaded
treated with no respect but what, do you expect me to not hit directly
especially when im textually better and youngin's not gettin it in sexually
your crusin for a bruisin and im causin contusions now thats my Final Solution*
juicein for the last drop and usin it for energy so i can destroy like pollution

*play on his name and he signed up in aug
*play on his Rapper name
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Old 12-04-04, 08:15 PM   #4
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Old 12-05-04, 10:23 AM   #5
Tha End
Flyweight
 
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IP: 3787 D32C

how bout 6-20 man not no 6-10 .........................
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Old 12-05-04, 12:03 PM   #6
Tha End
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IP: 3787 D32C

alright heres my drop u better drop ur shit and not flake out

forensic science cant break my raps neither can ur crap
hes an untraceable queer cuz i just worked magic and made him disappear
he gets a pair of timberlands and starts rappin
remember man before this what happened
rode up beside him put this nine through is ride and
he cant catch me hes ridin in a ford chevy thats an 83'
try in find me wit ur tweezers and ur microscope
hide them 12 year old hoes r.kelly and hide that k.y jelly
here comes the Po to get ur ass and its not a felony
synthesize my verbz to create mad chemicalz
use em gainst this bitch cuz hes too cynical
bastard hes hagard and withered from raps i splurred from my aggressive voice
dude your gayness isnt hereditary its a choice
a frenzy of rap hardness bout to begin see u cant stop me
cuz im on fire and ur expiration date is 2 years expired
heat came tha day u dropped by wearin wires u damn snitch
bitch turned to snitchin cuz he gots a clit and cant rip
gotta be a hoe if his first name is Jane and last is Doe
rolled over u in this battle so take ur shitty ass back to herdin cattle
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Old 12-05-04, 12:53 PM   #7
Tha End
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uppin for some votes cmon peepz dont sleep on this
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Old 12-05-04, 03:56 PM   #8
Untraceable
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From: p-ville
IP: 408D D2A2

damn dude u didnt even wait till i said yes or no to the 6-20 lines...........idk if ill be a bitch about it or not.......we'll see i leave it go for now
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Old 12-05-04, 04:35 PM   #9
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uppin for votez............................................
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Old 12-05-04, 06:02 PM   #10
JRoy
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From: 360 Olympia
This was feedback posted for Untraceable

IP: 75E4 9AE4

iight this was a differn't battle..i'mma admitt....ya text is really small....but yea i'm just gonna post feeeback.....i think that you got it tho..
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Old 12-05-04, 06:26 PM   #11
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noonesiller
 
IP: 568C C42A

Voted For: Untraceable

ok my vote goes to Untraceable.... an ok verse here...... most of it was basic..... just plain rhymes schemes... nothing special.....
tha end...... your shits way to simple man.... elevate..... and you guys both need to get some wordplay going..... read through the tutorials.... the do help
vote..... untracable

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Old 12-05-04, 06:27 PM   #12
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IP: 568C C42A

return the favour aight and drop a vote on the battle in my sig ok..
 
Old 12-06-04, 07:34 PM   #13
Tha End
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uppin for some votes..............................
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Old 12-06-04, 07:49 PM   #14
JJFLOWSUM_5
Flyweight
 
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From: st.louis
IP: 3AE8 B82C

Voted For: Untraceable

man u took dis battle away da otha dudes verse had no structa and he had no punches and half da time it aint even rhyme...damn!!!!!!u took dis one..holla

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Old 12-07-04, 12:16 AM   #15
Untraceable
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IP: 408D D2A2

uppin lets see some more votes on this battle......
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