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Old 12-26-04, 11:31 PM   #1
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High Fructose vs Skriptz

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Old 12-26-04, 11:32 PM   #2
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High Fructose has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-26-04 11:32 PM.
 
Old 12-26-04, 11:43 PM   #3
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Well look here skripz imma give you some tips
You got dusty spits nigga u need to Refurbish Lips
Well im Puttin things together great like a stapler
Put the Decloration* on ur writtins n ull have a Valuble peice of paper
If You say u the greatest tight or any of that im the same**
You a peice of shit Now you know why the dump is callin ur name

* Decloration of Indepence is important peice of paper
** He put No Recyling Dumg Garbage Dumb ..
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Old 12-26-04, 11:53 PM   #4
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Old 12-26-04, 11:59 PM   #5
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Haven’t battled in a while. . . I’m feeling a little rusty
But what I’m wondering is....
..........how can you have 5 wins and still be dusty?
You Been here since August…still a light weight? Shit doesn’t factor
H.F. thinks he's rolling on dubs but he's driving a tractor
High F. is whack. . .all his punches are missing...
...Like where he's loctaed*

When it comes to spitting. . .H.F. don’t bring shit…
…Like he’s constipated

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Old 12-27-04, 01:44 AM   #6
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uppin this.....
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Old 12-27-04, 09:58 AM   #7
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Voted For: High Fructose

punchs-tdo
person-none
mets-none
multis-none
struck-tdo

i oliked tdo better he camr harder had better struck by far the other guy had wack punches and struck easy win for tdo came hard had better stuck none had personals or nuffin

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Old 12-28-04, 01:04 PM   #8
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Old 12-29-04, 12:57 AM   #9
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Well look here skripz imma imma give you some tips
You got dusty spits nigga u need to Refurbish Lips
^^nope
Well im Puttin things together great like a stapler
Put the Decloration* on ur writtins n ull have a Valuble peice of paper
^^decent
If You say u the greatest tight or any of that im the same**
You a peice of shit Now you know why the dump is callin ur name
^^weak

coulda came harder kid.....you had a good flow but ..........you had basic vocab.....stretched lines.......bad structure........weak punches and i gues a personal attempt..........okay meta.....no wordplay

Haven’t battled in a while. . . I’m feeling a little rusty
But what I’m wondering is....
..........how can you have 5 wins and still be dusty?
^^decent
You Been here since August…still a light weight? Shit doesn’t factor
H.F. thinks he's rolling on dubs but he's driving a tractor
^^humerous
High F. is whack. . .all his punches are missing...
...Like where he's loctaed*
When it comes to spitting. . .H.F. don’t bring shit…
…Like he’s constipated
^^nice personal/punch

okay you came harder with punches and personals.........you had better vocab..........your flow was better.........your structure wasnt too great..........you had no multi's........

v/Skriptz
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Old 12-29-04, 01:50 AM   #10
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Voted For: High Fructose

aii this is how i feel

HF
You Came wit some nice punchez ......your structure was good............and your meta's was good but you need to work on multi's and vocab Bcuz thats what was lacked other than that i like your verse////////

Skriptz
You Came strong......jus not strong enough bcuz yo left out alot of basic thing that a verse needs and thats what hurt you the most...............I think really you need to go n try to work on ya style..........no hate .................jus a suggestion

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Old 12-29-04, 12:22 PM   #11
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hmmm wack battle.. better punches by skript and personals.. u both need to elevate badly.. i know skriptz spit half ass shit on purpose.. but damn that other cat needs to step it up.. better flow by skript structure skriptz punches skriptz and personals skriptz... not a good battle at all.. elevate plz

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Old 12-29-04, 08:43 PM   #12
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w/e buddha i dont need to elevate.....
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Old 12-31-04, 01:05 PM   #13
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Old 01-01-05, 04:34 PM   #14
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Old 01-01-05, 09:05 PM   #15
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Haven’t battled in a while. . . I’m feeling a little rusty
But what I’m wondering is....
..........how can you have 5 wins and still be dusty?
gd opener, punch, hard hittin and witty - 8/10
You Been here since August…still a light weight? Shit doesn’t factor
H.F. thinks he's rolling on dubs but he's driving a tractor
meh.........ok i suppose as ur filler..a bit lame - 6/10
High F. is whack. . .all his punches are missing...
...Like where he's loctaed*
When it comes to spitting. . .H.F. don’t bring shit…
…Like he’s constipated
lol, gd humour for your closer, hard hittin - 8.5/10

Well look here skripz imma give you some tips
You got dusty spits nigga u need to Refurbish Lips
humour, but not hard hittin, an ok opener-7/10
Well im Puttin things together great like a stapler
Put the Decloration* on ur writtins n ull have a Valuble peice of paper
ok not a punch at all....and bad as a filler cos dnt hep ur drop at all -5.5/10
If You say u the greatest tight or any of that im the same**
You a peice of shit Now you know why the dump is callin ur name
nice attempt at orignalty and wordplay, an ok punch but weak, a decent closer tho -7.5/10

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