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4-6
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High Fructose has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-26-04 11:22 PM.

Yo im stoppin ya pop heres a jammin Star
Im toppin ya best well i guess im Cannin Bars
You aint stopin the definition you know im tight
You a derrty dude i put water on ya and i see the light
you Boastin and braggin dude ill juss rip this turd
You only posting in the fuckin Fl and u mad u only rip herbs

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"Its The Definition"

... Open . . Battles ...
VS Wisdom 2-1 ME

VS Cannabars 1-3 HIM

VS Skriptz 0-2 HIM


The RV. Takeover Is Around The Corner
Record
5-2

Cannabarz has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-26-04 11:52 PM.

Voted For: Cannabarz

whos even SAW THIS GUY, LAW DECIDES ..I blessed-ya-LIMITS !! ..
specially when ya fuckin postbit looks like a piss TEST FROM GRIMACE !!..
nice multi’s here
ya image-weak .. but heh, you get notin from HIGH FRUC ..
when he couldn't get a fuckin fan puttin his face next to a SKY DUCT !!..
decent
this guy-sucks, jesus !!! get a fuckin real win ! let this FUCKA BOAST !!..
im happy, it'll took 30 minutes to get orange juice and FRUC' A TOSE !!!..
decent closer

Yo im stoppin ya pop heres a jammin Star
Im toppin ya best well i guess im Cannin Bars
…
You aint stopin the definition you know im tight
You a derrty dude i put water on ya and i see the light
…ok
you Boastin and braggin dude ill juss rip this turd
You only posting in the fuckin Fl and u mad u only rip herbs
…no

Overall…
Cannabarz took this one…came harder in the punches
And had a decent structure…but overall came harder in
The punches tho

Return Tha Favor Cannabarz

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^Might fault on that there.....

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Voted For: Cannabarz

High Fructose:
Yo im stoppin ya pop heres a jammin Star
Im toppin ya best well i guess im Cannin Bars
Weak opener, self-glorification
You aint stopin the definition you know im tight
You a derrty dude i put water on ya and i see the light
More self-glory in 1st line, no real punch here
you Boastin and braggin dude ill juss rip this turd
You only posting in the fuckin Fl and u mad u only rip herbs
Weak, 'nuff said...

Cannabarz:
whos even SAW THIS GUY, LAW DECIDES ..I blessed-ya-LIMITS !! ..
specially when ya fuckin postbit looks like a piss TEST FROM GRIMACE !!..
Stretched a little bit, and punch didn't really hit
ya image-weak .. but heh, you get notin from HIGH FRUC ..
when he couldn't get a fuckin fan puttin his face next to a SKY DUCT !!..
Played concept, but decent
this guy-sucks, jesus !!! get a fuckin real win ! let this FUCKA BOAST !!..
im happy, it'll took 30 minutes to get orange juice and FRUC' A TOSE !!
Ok closer, a little on the weak side...

Winner: Cannabarz, with an overall better verse. But Can it didn't seem like you cam very hard on this one, I've see better from you.
Return the favor to a link in my sig, honest explained votes only...

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Voted For: High Fructose

Vocab - Bars
Flow - Bars
Punches - Defined
Personals - Defined
Structure - Defined
Multies - Didn't See Any ..
Metas - Bars

My vote is to - Defined.

Weak Battle . Elevate More Peeps.

Voted For: Cannabarz

Lemme break it down:

Cannabarz:

punches:9/10
flow:10/10
wordplay:8/10
personals:6/10

Overall some pretty good shit man...nothing short of what I expected to see from you...You pretty much killed it...

The Defined One:

Punches:6/10
flow:10/10
wordplay:7/10
personals:4/10

Overall, your verse was decent...Your punches werent hitting as hard as they needed to be against a competition like cannabarz, so that lost your vote...Everythang else was iight, except I really didnt see any personals from either of you...

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By the way, can both of you return the favor and hit up the two open mic links in my sig and hook me up with a little feed? Thanx...1

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Voted For: Cannabarz

Canna get my vote becuase he came harder, his flow was better, he had better strucutre better personels and I could understand his verse more here is how I graded it.

CANNA

whos even SAW THIS GUY, LAW DECIDES ..I blessed-ya-LIMITS !! ..
specially when ya fuckin postbit looks like a piss TEST FROM GRIMACE !!..
ya image-weak .. but heh, you get notin from HIGH FRUC ..
when he couldn't get a fuckin fan puttin his face next to a SKY DUCT !!..
8/10 keep elevating tho homes

AB

Yo im stoppin ya pop heres a jammin Star
Im toppin ya best well i guess im Cannin Bars
You aint stopin the definition you know im tight
You a derrty dude i put water on ya and i see the light
5.9/10 keep workin hos vocab flow and strucutre and keep elevating to

please hit up on my links peace.

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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...918915&posted=1

Voted For: High Fructose

both were quite WEAK...

but A.B came up with better punches (besides the low quality)..his verse made more sense to me...and the structure was better that canab'z..A.B i think u should hook up on battles with longer line limits cos i think u could entertain a lil better with more lines....


vote on mine too...sig below..

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