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B. Magik 12-08-04 09:45 PM

BLACK~MAGIK vs e-dubz
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

All votes must be explained

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 12-09-04 at 09:45 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

System 12-08-04 09:46 PM

BLACK~MAGIK has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 09:46 PM.

System 12-08-04 09:48 PM

e-dubz has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 09:48 PM.

B. Magik 12-08-04 10:10 PM

..I'ma blast-this-punk, 8 lines, and still ya ass-gets-crushed..
..Especially since he's packing punchlines, that dont pack-no-punch..
..Eat-this cat-for-lunch, all his raps-suck, quit trying to act-tough..
..Cuz like 'nerds getting revenge,' I'ma blast-this-fuck..
..I'll bombard-this-pennyweight, pop-him-where-he-stays..
..This dude 'aint hot,' but shit, I'ma still 'drop-him'-anywayz..
..Watch this ho-get-killed, claiming that he flows-with-skill..
..I aint 'Christopher Reeves' but believe when I tell you that I 'roll-with-steel'..

Quick keystyle...no hate in this battle...
..

e-dubz 12-08-04 10:20 PM

when i come through some of these niggas turn like the leaves make magik piss his fatigues, spit sick enuff to spread disease
my black~Magic more sick then Johnson on and off the court
thas my sport, the red dot on ur forehead like da Hindu sort
nothin complex, my rhymes eat away at ur insides like E.coli
slippin six shots while dippin and rippin ur brains out, thas why
last bar killin u faster then u fillin up glass-for glass wit da Hen
believe its when my multis go thru u like the inside of ya men

e-dubz 12-08-04 10:22 PM

shit, leaves is spose to b the last word in the first line.. o well fuck it

*GHOSTE* 12-08-04 10:29 PM

This was feedback posted for BLACK~MAGIK
 
checkin pollz............................................. ...

B. Magik 12-09-04 12:06 AM

Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

B. Magik 12-09-04 03:34 PM

uppin for votes on this battle...come on yall...1...

e-dubz 12-09-04 05:34 PM

uppin this shit..

e-dubz 12-09-04 09:19 PM

uppin this battle..

OptiKaL 12-09-04 09:27 PM

This was feedback posted for e-dubz
 
just checkin polesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

B. Magik 12-09-04 10:53 PM

uppin............................................. .................

e-dubz 12-10-04 03:15 PM

uppin this..dont sleep

B. Magik 12-10-04 03:33 PM

damn...come on yall...vote bitches!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jesus fucking christ...upping this bitch!!!!!! 1

Oz™ 12-10-04 03:41 PM

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

black~magik verse was pretty good.....his punches were there....the best part of ur gameis ur multis.....had nice ones in there....stay up

e-dubz.....elevate dawg....ur verse was pretty weak...work on dem punches

\V/-Black~Magik

return tha HONEST favor man...hate gettin slept on.....http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=164636

B. Magik 12-10-04 10:06 PM

Thanx man...Finally someone fucking voted!!! Uppin for more!!!!!!!! 1

Strategies 12-10-04 10:49 PM

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

Yeah my vote goes to Black

Standout lines:
..Watch this ho-get-killed, claiming that he flows-with-skill..
..I ain't 'Christopher Reeves' but believe when I tell you I 'roll-with-steel'..
By Black Magic

when i come through some of these niggas turn like the leaves make magik piss his fatigues, spit sick enuff to spread disease
by e-dubz

Black Magik came a little harder big ups man

B. Magik 12-11-04 10:55 PM

Thanx man...Uppin for a few more votes on this mother fucker...1...

rapRaw 12-12-04 05:38 AM

This was feedback posted for BLACK~MAGIK
 
no battle record on dis site 2 vote
wanna say black magik izzz dope

Premanition 12-12-04 06:27 AM

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

v/black

both were weak to me wiv played punches but black had a tight flow n gud multis....e-dubz ya closer was wack n ya opener was stretched....hmmm expect beta from you...

pz

B. Magik 12-15-04 06:22 PM

Thanx...hmm...Uppin this battle...come on yall...1

B. Magik 12-18-04 01:29 PM

uppin this mutha fucka...dont sleep on my battles yall...1!!!!

NewKid 12-18-04 01:34 PM

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

Iight Bm Verse Started Off Good And Ended Off Iight He Had Tha Strukture,Punches And Metas And Tha Verse Wass Well Struktured And Easy Ta Read....8/10


E-Dubz Ya Verse Wass Pretty Wack It Started Off Tired But Ended Ok You Had Tha Vokab But No Good Punches Some Metaphors But Not Like Bm's Elivate On This 1 And Make Ya Bars Closer Ta Each Otha 6.5/10

Leave A Honest Vote N Mih Battle

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B. Magik 12-19-04 04:35 PM

Thanx...uppin for one more vote...tryin to get this battle closed...1

L.E 12-19-04 04:49 PM

Voted For: e-dubz

E-Dubz's Verse
when i come through some of these niggas turn like the leaves make magik piss his fatigues, spit sick enuff to spread disease
8/10 Nice opener haha...
my black~Magic more sick then Johnson on and off the court
thas my sport, the red dot on ur forehead like da Hindu sort
4/10 Blah...
nothin complex, my rhymes eat away at ur insides like E.coli
slippin six shots while dippin and rippin ur brains out, thas why
5/10 Ehh...Self-praise...or whatever you wanna call it..
last bar killin u faster then u fillin up glass-for glass wit da Hen
believe its when my multis go thru u like the inside of ya men
6/10 A'ight...but still self-praise...

20/40=50%

Black Magik's Verse
..I'ma blast-this-punk, 8 lines, and still ya ass-gets-crushed..
..Especially since he's packing punchlines, that dont pack-no-punch..
7/10...a'ight decent opener...
..Eat-this cat-for-lunch, all his raps-suck, quit trying to act-tough..
..Cuz like 'nerds getting revenge,' I'ma blast-this-fuck..
4/10...Blah...
..I'll bombard-this-pennyweight, pop-him-where-he-stays..
..This dude 'aint hot,' but shit, I'ma still 'drop-him'-anywayz..
5/10...played but a'ight I guess...
..Watch this ho-get-killed, claiming that he flows-with-skill..
..I aint 'Christopher Reeves' but believe when I tell you that I 'roll-with-steel'..
4/10 Meh...

20/40=50%

Well...looks we like we have a tie...I;ma have to base this on flow...E-Dubz gets it wit better flow.

No hate. Return the favor...links in my sig.

B. Magik 12-20-04 11:53 AM

Uppin this battle...even tho i should get the win because e-dubz got banned...Just need one more vote...uppin...1


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