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ache has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-15-04 08:37 PM.

..Exponent.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-15-04 08:39 PM.

Exponent Hea Ta Break Ya Down Like A Parylzed Victim...
Onli Chances Of Winnin Against Me Is If U Hacked Tha System..
If I Handed Ova This Loss Tha Win Ustill Couldn't Take..
I Guess 4rm Ridin A Lot Of Dicks Left Ya Bodi With A "Ache"
Watch Me Leave His Rappin Career With Out A Trace..
Winnin This Is Easy Seems Like lil C.A.L.I Took His Place..
I Rip This Herb Up Like A Vanilla Dutch..
This Pussi Is A Newbie Where Does He Get Off Thinkin He's Tough..
I'll Break U Down Like A Mathematical Equation..
Or Leave U Dead With Some Recognition Like Tha Japanese Invasion..
Trying To Beat On Freshmen? Fucking Grumpy Old Man..
With Tha Votes I'll Get 5 U 0 Like Ya Money On Hand...
His Onli Win Came 4rm A Prick Who's A Jerk..
Sufferage 4rm This Loss,Hommie U Shoulda Went Ta Work..
Leave U All Fucked Up Like 1 Of 1mics Verse..

~1~

Voted For: ..Exponent..

damn ex y everbattle you in they always close:

flow: both
style both
vocab ache
opener niether
closer ex
punches ok this was the hardest to judge cause ex had some i didn't get (Leave U All Fucked Up Like 1 Of 1mics Verse..) and ache didn't have any real hard ones. but if i had to i would go with ex cause he had more punches
personals real close ya'll both had hard ones, but ex's were more directed to his opponent.
rhyme sceme i wouldn't usually include this caturgory but ex you scheme was off son so this goes to ache

both need to elevate but i can both of you do good things.

ex: 7.5
ache: 6.5

over all this goes to ex

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Voted For: ..Exponent..

gotta go wit exponent....his punches were harder then aches...the bar that cought my attention was the lil cali personal....pretty good....structure was there...ache need ta work on dem punches...i think thats what really wins battles

return tha HONEST favor....i hate gettin slept on....http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=164636

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Voted For: ache

i think u got my vote..because..u came wit harder punches..da first bar..was nice..to me...decent..weak battle..

punches,meta,no multis..need to learn to add...Personals..cuz u might be a Prewriter..

just being..honest....Exponent..u had some decent punches..wont hitting hard enoguth now..

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Voted For: ache

You both nice verses...
both structures were good and in place
flow was good..hard hittin punches landed
and nice vocab too...but overall ache came
harder in this one by a hair...tha punches were
just a little harder tho...

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Voted For: ache

This was a pretty good battle...However, Ache in my opinion had way better punches and he hit harder than exponent...BOth verses flowed good, but Ache gets this for the punches and wordplay...1

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Voted For: ..Exponent..


Ex
Aiight This Verse Was Good In A Couple Of Ways, First Of You Had Some Good Punchlines, Second Of The Personals Was Good, Your First Line Was Self Glorify, Try Not To Do That In Your Raps, Fix Up Your Structure A Little And You'll Be Good, Your Personals And Punches Is What Won This Battle....9/10

Ache
Structure Was Decent, Lined Up The Lines I Admit Your Structure Was More Decent Then Ex's, Vocabulary Was Pretty Good Nice Shit, The Punches Just Wasnt All The Way There This Battle Was Close, Personals Math Oh Shit That Was Tight Hommie, Nice....Over All...8.8/10

Vote=Exponent

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