**FLEx** vs J~FOUR
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-20-04 at 11:45 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

**FLEx** has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 11:16 PM.

J~FOUR has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 11:22 PM.

yo,

J~FOUR, Im like codene, i don't feel pain, but ill clog you like a smokescreen/
but hopefully, you don't seep through cracks and approch me/
cuz vaccinations a must when you encroach me//
surrosis of the mouth is all to familiar//
when i spit the flames burn, into your interior, your inferior//
to all races, Turk, Iraqi, and Jew/
your fluid level sank so low, Aquaman cant save you//
my words'll enslave you, it's like a journey that's spiritual/
that i got more luck and charm than a box of cereal/

J~FOUR it's been fun, but you should try another time/
cuz you more of a bird, then mother gooses nursury rhyme

I Knife Ya Skin, Sharp As Pins And Use ya Blood Used For Paintings
Cause I Stay "Over Flex" Like "Dedicated Athlete Training"~

Dog No Complaining, Cause My Click Roll Wit Macs To The Game
And Put "4 Round Your Frame" Like "Stars In Your Name"~

Lame... I Crack Your Bones In All Ya Zones To Hurt And Damage Ya
And This Dude Dont "Keep Fans" Cause Its To "Cold In Canada"~

Blah.. Thats All I Had Time For..

Aight Then, Lets Get Some Votes.....................

Voted For: **FLEx**

Flex git my vote cuz he had tha best opening tha best metaphors best closing....jus best erything

return tha favor..vote on muh battle vs. Jim Crow

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Voted For: **FLEx**

wow wackish battle

punchs-**f**
mets-none
pers-none
mutis-none
stuckture-none

wack battle but **f** takes it just by stuckture and punches he came only a little hard but he wins wack battle

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Voted For: **FLEx**

I think four had more rhyming more personals harder punches and his closure murdered this battle.

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uppin the votes people..................................

Voted For: J~FOUR

j four........
1st bar-decent punch...like how you played off of his name...hit semi hard
2nd bar-lol again good play off name...decent personal....could have been worded better..but hit kinda hard
3rd bar-good personal....hit hard...best bar in the battle in my opinion.....
overall- should have made it a couple more lines....it almost cost you....also try to use more multis in your verse...that would help alot....but overall decent verse...

flex.......
1st bar-hmm kinda self glorifying and it was streched....didnt hit very hard.....decent vocab though
2nd bar-again didnt hit very hard....didnt like it that much...sorry just wasnt feelin it
3rd bar-lol made me laugh....decent punch...could have been worded a lil better...but hit kinda hard
4th bar-self glorifying...garbage line
5th bar-played...hit semi hard though...not too great
overall.....i felt like your punches just didnt hit very hard at all....use more multis and that will help out...and work on your punches and meta...also work on wordplay and how to word the lines.....good drop

i voted for j four because his punches hit harder....and he stayed consistent with his punches....where flex didnt.....and i also felt like he played off of flexs name nicely.....

^^^^1st good vote of the battle.......tell your voters to explain their votes and they wont get dq'd............

Word Good Looking Duke.. Lets Get Some Votes Up In This Biatch..

"This Nigga Said Cheat.. ROTLMFAO.. Stop IMin Niggas To Vote And I Wont Delete They Votes... ROTLMFAO..."

wot the fuck

This was feedback posted for J~FOUR
 

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Voted For: J~FOUR

voted for J 4:
I Knife Ya Skin, Sharp As Pins And Use ya Blood Used For Paintings
Cause I Stay "Over Flex" Like "Dedicated Athlete Training"~
^^^self glorifying........decent
Dog No Complaining, Cause My Click Roll Wit Macs To The Game
And Put "4 Round Your Frame" Like "Stars In Your Name"~
^^^aight
Lame... I Crack Your Bones In All Ya Zones To Hurt And Damage Ya
And This Dude Dont "Keep Fans" Cause Its To "Cold In Canada"~
^^^good

flex:
J~FOUR, Im like codene, i don't feel pain, but ill clog you like a smokescreen/
but hopefully, you don't seep through cracks and approch me/
^^wack
cuz vaccinations a must when you encroach me//
surrosis of the mouth is all to familiar//
when i spit the flames burn, into your interior, your inferior//
^^^screwed structure...wack......
to all races, Turk, Iraqi, and Jew/
your fluid level sank so low, Aquaman cant save you//
^^^dry
my words'll enslave you, it's like a journey that's spiritual/
that i got more luck and charm than a box of cereal/
^^^decent........

overall voted for J4 for better punches, flow, and structure

J~FOUR it's been fun, but you should try another time/
cuz you more of a bird, then mother gooses nursury rhyme

ps can you please return a vote in my sig..........thanks

Voted For: J~FOUR

not bad but u could of hit with more stuff but those bars are preety good but i need to see more as for the other guy u used that nas bar:
surrosis of the mouth is all to familiar// * u might of changed that a little bit only*
when i spit the flames burn, into your interior, your inferior//
thats exsactly the same but whatever u lose original point plus props and ECT...

VOTE: j for being original and actully trying and for having better bars either way u look at it.......

weather i knew or didnt knew he bit that nas bar but its whatever count it or delet it but its a honest vote.....

Voted For: J~FOUR

structure j flexu need to work on ur strcture its important in text
flow tie although j was more complex
personals j flex u need to work on this also thats what wins battles
punches j by a lil flex looked like he prewrote adn both tried to come gangster u shouldnt do that on the net
overall j
flew elevate work on ur structure and drop personals no hate good battles just elevate

please RETURN THE FAVOR
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...242#post1840242
and drop another link i will vote on any links droped in the battle if u vote ppl like to sleep around here

Voted For: J~FOUR

I Knife Ya Skin, Sharp As Pins And Use ya Blood Used For Paintings
Cause I Stay "Over Flex" Like "Dedicated Athlete Training"~

Dog No Complaining, Cause My Click Roll Wit Macs To The Game
And Put "4 Round Your Frame" Like "Stars In Your Name"~

Lame... I Crack Your Bones In All Ya Zones To Hurt And Damage Ya
And This Dude Dont "Keep Fans" Cause Its To "Cold In Canada"~
^^^^^^^^^ GOTS TO SAY NICE WORDPLAYS.........NICE PUNCHES AND PERSONALS LOL...........

Dog No Complaining, Cause My Click Roll Wit Macs To The Game
And Put "4 Round Your Frame" Like "Stars In Your Name"~
^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE WORDPLAY WITH AN PERSONAL AND WITH AN PUNCH 3-COMBO







J~FOUR, Im like codene, i don't feel pain, but ill clog you like a smokescreen/
but hopefully, you don't seep through cracks and approch me/
cuz vaccinations a must when you encroach me//
surrosis of the mouth is all to familiar//
when i spit the flames burn, into your interior, your inferior//
to all races, Turk, Iraqi, and Jew/
your fluid level sank so low, Aquaman cant save you//
my words'll enslave you, it's like a journey that's spiritual/
that i got more luck and charm than a box of cereal/

J~FOUR it's been fun, but you should try another time/
cuz you more of a bird, then mother gooses nursury rhyme


^^^^^^^^^^^^^ O AIGHT FAM U GOT AN GOOD FLOW, PUNCHES ELEVATE HOMIE....PERSONALS DIDNT SEE ANY...PUUNCHES WERE KINDA TOO BASIC



OVERALL=J-FOUR GOT IT. CAUSE HE HAD GOOD PUNCHES WITH PERSONALS GOOD FLOW TOO, FLEX DIDNT HAD NO GOOD PUNCHES NO GOOD PERSONALS JUST FLOW...ELEVATE ON PUNCHES FLEX...I GIVE THIS TO J-FOUR CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS