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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-20-04 at 11:45 PM

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**FLEx** has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 11:16 PM.

J~FOUR has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 11:22 PM.

yo,

J~FOUR, Im like codene, i don't feel pain, but ill clog you like a smokescreen/
but hopefully, you don't seep through cracks and approch me/
cuz vaccinations a must when you encroach me//
surrosis of the mouth is all to familiar//
when i spit the flames burn, into your interior, your inferior//
to all races, Turk, Iraqi, and Jew/
your fluid level sank so low, Aquaman cant save you//
my words'll enslave you, it's like a journey that's spiritual/
that i got more luck and charm than a box of cereal/

J~FOUR it's been fun, but you should try another time/
cuz you more of a bird, then mother gooses nursury rhyme

I Knife Ya Skin, Sharp As Pins And Use ya Blood Used For Paintings
Cause I Stay "Over Flex" Like "Dedicated Athlete Training"~

Dog No Complaining, Cause My Click Roll Wit Macs To The Game
And Put "4 Round Your Frame" Like "Stars In Your Name"~

Lame... I Crack Your Bones In All Ya Zones To Hurt And Damage Ya
And This Dude Dont "Keep Fans" Cause Its To "Cold In Canada"~

Blah.. Thats All I Had Time For..

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Voted For: **FLEx**

Flex git my vote cuz he had tha best opening tha best metaphors best closing....jus best erything

return tha favor..vote on muh battle vs. Jim Crow

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Voted For: **FLEx**

wow wackish battle

punchs-**f**
mets-none
pers-none
mutis-none
stuckture-none

wack battle but **f** takes it just by stuckture and punches he came only a little hard but he wins wack battle

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Voted For: **FLEx**

I think four had more rhyming more personals harder punches and his closure murdered this battle.

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uppin the votes people..................................

Voted For: J~FOUR

j four........
1st bar-decent punch...like how you played off of his name...hit semi hard
2nd bar-lol again good play off name...decent personal....could have been worded better..but hit kinda hard
3rd bar-good personal....hit hard...best bar in the battle in my opinion.....
overall- should have made it a couple more lines....it almost cost you....also try to use more multis in your verse...that would help alot....but overall decent verse...

flex.......
1st bar-hmm kinda self glorifying and it was streched....didnt hit very hard.....decent vocab though
2nd bar-again didnt hit very hard....didnt like it that much...sorry just wasnt feelin it
3rd bar-lol made me laugh....decent punch...could have been worded a lil better...but hit kinda hard
4th bar-self glorifying...garbage line
5th bar-played...hit semi hard though...not too great
overall.....i felt like your punches just didnt hit very hard at all....use more multis and that will help out...and work on your punches and meta...also work on wordplay and how to word the lines.....good drop

i voted for j four because his punches hit harder....and he stayed consistent with his punches....where flex didnt.....and i also felt like he played off of flexs name nicely.....

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