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MaRVJay1009 vs George K.Stanza
Battle Rules:
10 lines..nothin more No Crew Votes no i hate marvjay votes No Recycling No Biting aight check in dogg..lets go voter's drop ya links da favor will b returned Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-24-04 at 01:35 PM Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in. |
George K.Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-04 07:40 AM.
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MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-04 08:40 AM.
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pardon da wait dunny...........
i dont get y u be spittin dem bar's,but stop mention marv's.. u not a gangsta mc just a "tuff-poet" like da nigga from "oz"* stay tryn da clown me well,but dog how ya pound keep shells u nice? but u have "no-proof" like "em" be he found "d12"..... look at 1 of george post if u wanna c da sloppyest fukk ryhme fukk ya "crew" fag 2 mags a leave ya "body.above ya.mind"... ima slump dis chump...he's gay he like men da touch his butt a "straw" n "sex" describes ya skillz cuzz you "fuckin-suck"..... your goin da b my 1st example ima b deadin dez fukkz.... ya cd a be like "air" when it drop cuzz it a "neva be touched" *my first bar...he does poetry n if any of ya'll seen oz on hbo they had a dude name poet u'll get it* n his crew is mind above body...so u'll get da otha punch |
Fuckin joke'll get smoked, and for his skill i'm still searchin'
cus if J had a dime for every time he came ill - he'd be a virgin weak he's the worst in Queens, kid's equipped with piss poor spits the only time i'd peep Marv's cuts - is if they're were on his wrists bitch is geek reaks of ass, doubt he knows how to win n if his verse looks like crap - its' cus i scared the shit out of em' sit down you simp, how can you fend, for yourself you smell of herb Marv'll make Rv proud when he drops...off the face of the earth a waste of my words the gay's merked, wack that he raps is strange so i gave Mj a penny for his thoughts - and still got back change please detailed votes only, no bs |
i dropped that crew earlier
no bs either it was before the call out |
Voted For: George K.Stanza
Aiight look. George took this battle because of better punches that were simple but more effective. Marv, ya shit def wasnt bad, but damn that "" symbol type crap is played man.. Some decent multies in ya verse. But at times the punches fell off in my opinion. v/ George K.Stanza.............. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: George K.Stanza
dam nigga he had harder punches more personals better flow and most of all his opener and closure was killer. so this is my vote but hey keep elevating. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
Fuckin joke'll get smoked, and for his skill i'm still searchin' cus if J had a dime for every time he came ill - he'd be a virgin decent not bad weak he's the worst in Queens, kid's equipped with piss poor spits the only time i'd peep Marv's cuts - is if they're were on his wrists ok bitch is geek reaks of ass, doubt he knows how to win n if his verse looks like crap - its' cus i scared the shit out of em' decent sit down you simp, how can you fend, for yourself you smell of herb Marv'll make Rv proud when he drops...off the face of the earth ha preety good made me laugh really a waste of my words the gay's merked, wack that he raps is strange so i gave Mj a penny for his thoughts - and still got back change could of been a better ending not a strong finish but it was ok a few good bars a few decent 7.0 i dont get y u be spittin dem bar's,but stop mention marv's.. u not a gangsta mc just a "tuff-poet" like da nigga from "oz"* decent stay tryn da clown me well,but dog how ya pound keep shells u nice? but u have "no-proof" like "em" be he found "d12"..... ha im feeling that good word-play N all soild look at 1 of george post if u wanna c da sloppyest fukk ryhme fukk ya "crew" fag 2 mags a leave ya "body.above ya.mind"... good play off hes crew name which make is a personal ima slump dis chump...he's gay he like men da touch his butt a "straw" n "sex" describes ya skillz cuzz you "fuckin-suck"..... ha good one your goin da b my 1st example ima b deadin dez fukkz.... ya cd a be like "air" when it drop cuzz it a "neva be touched" decent meta and a better ending u had a couple of more better bars plus u had a personal and a decent meta and diss thats why i think u edge it out here nice battle ya'll it was a good read |
up...that mab punch was wack
played as fuck..... |
if you don't understand dont vote.................
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
Marvjay............. i dont get y u be spittin dem bar's,but stop mention marv's.. u not a gangsta mc just a "tuff-poet" like da nigga from "oz"* ok opener....1st line wasnt great...2nd line hit pretty hard...made me laugh stay tryn da clown me well,but dog how ya pound keep shells u nice? but u have "no-proof" like "em" be he found "d12"..... good wordplay.....hit decent.....good bar look at 1 of george post if u wanna c da sloppyest fukk ryhme fukk ya "crew" fag 2 mags a leave ya "body.above ya.mind"... not really feelin it....coulda been better...wasnt too great ima slump dis chump...he's gay he like men da touch his butt a "straw" n "sex" describes ya skillz cuzz you "fuckin-suck"..... good meta n wordplay.....1st line is played...but 2nd line hit hard your goin da b my 1st example ima b deadin dez fukkz.... ya cd a be like "air" when it drop cuzz it a "neva be touched" it was ok....should have came with a better closer though...2nd worst bar of your verse George.......... Fuckin joke'll get smoked, and for his skill i'm still searchin' cus if J had a dime for every time he came ill - he'd be a virgin decent opener....hit decent....not real hard though weak he's the worst in Queens, kid's equipped with piss poor spits the only time i'd peep Marv's cuts - is if they're were on his wrists ok.........just a decent punch....nothin spectacular bitch is geek reaks of ass, doubt he knows how to win n if his verse looks like crap - its' cus i scared the shit out of em' 1st line not good.....2nd line better but you shoulda made it a lil more complex and it would have hit harder than it did sit down you simp, how can you fend, for yourself you smell of herb Marv'll make Rv proud when he drops...off the face of the earth hit decent.....ok bar a waste of my words the gay's merked, wack that he raps is strange so i gave Mj a penny for his thoughts - and still got back change played....very very played....sorry but it is....just not too great of a closer so i voted for marv because...........i thought overall his punches hit harder than stanzas.....both had some nice multis but marv used more....marv killed george witht he wordplay and metas........marvs verse was just better but....one thing you need to work on marv....is start spelling out your words....its annoying tryin to read somebodys verse when your using the words .....ya...cuzz...fukkz....neva...dem......well you get the picture....but just start spelling out your words the way they need to be spelled....it was the only part i hated about your verse...no hate...just stating facts....good battle both of you |
Voted For: George K.Stanza
i dont get y u be spittin dem bar's,but stop mention marv's.. u not a gangsta mc just a "tuff-poet" like da nigga from "oz"* weak concept and punch stay tryn da clown me well,but dog how ya pound keep shells u nice? but u have "no-proof" like "em" be he found "d12"..... played concept..weak look at 1 of george post if u wanna c da sloppyest fukk ryhme fukk ya "crew" fag 2 mags a leave ya "body.above ya.mind"... ok..but this shotting gangsta shit isnt good ima slump dis chump...he's gay he like men da touch his butt a "straw" n "sex" describes ya skillz cuzz you "fuckin-suck"..... gay punches are playted your goin da b my 1st example ima b deadin dez fukkz.... ya cd a be like "air" when it drop cuzz it a "neva be touched" We touch air all the time...weak concept and punch Fuckin joke'll get smoked, and for his skill i'm still searchin' cus if J had a dime for every time he came ill - he'd be a virgin lol, sex lines are played, but good flip weak he's the worst in Queens, kid's equipped with piss poor spits the only time i'd peep Marv's cuts - is if they're were on his wrists meh..decent...weak punch bitch is geek reaks of ass, doubt he knows how to win n if his verse looks like crap - its' cus i scared the shit out of em' played, weak punch sit down you simp, how can you fend, for yourself you smell of herb Marv'll make Rv proud when he drops...off the face of the earth Lol a waste of my words the gay's merked, wack that he raps is strange so i gave Mj a penny for his thoughts - and still got back change ok..played concept..ok punch Overall George merked for a verse with better concepts and harder hitting punches and more consistency....Marv..get rid of the ""and ... and shit like that, it makes your verse look that more herbish Vote=George |
uppin 4 more votes dis shit been up 2 long
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
MARV .. you didn't come nice.. a few shits you had were aiight the oz line, but nothing else going for you. i dont get y u be spittin dem bar's,but stop mention marv's.. u not a gangsta mc just a "tuff-poet" like da nigga from "oz"* ^ that's all i can say was nice. GEORGE .. even though your last line is played the FUCK out. i still have to give this to you, you came aiiigh to .. you had a few good lines to quote, came better than Marv. the wrist line an the crap line got it. |
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
this was a overall pretty good battle..MarvJay had betta punches i thought..His hit harda in my opponion,George you had played punches..Flow was a tie..Vocab goes to George though,Marv needs to expand his vocab...Personals went both sides cuz most of em were fake personals...Multis N Metas went both sides... CLOSE BATTLE v/MarvJay1009 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=168819 ^^turn da favor^^ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin 4 more votes lets get dis shit closed ppl
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Voted For: George K.Stanza
damn.. kstanza ripped it.. better punches.. no personals from either.. but stanza had much better punches.. better structure and better flow... he also threw some multi's in their. but so did jay.. this was a pretty one sided battle in my opinion.. stanza's punches just hit much harder... and thats what gives him the edge.. good job to both... no hate |
uppin 4 some more votes ppl come on...............................
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Uppin 4 More Votes Ppl Lets Get Dis Shit Closed
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
ok ok these was a decent battle but it had a clear winner, basically marv did it with way more detailed punches, k stanza threw some decent stuff at him but marv's shit just dug way deeper so my vote goes to marv |
This was feedback posted for George K.Stanza
Checking poll's, good closer.
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uppin 4 some more votes
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uppin 4 some more votes
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
hahahahah hands dwn marv j homie .kat wats up wit u and dunny any wayz,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, hahahaha stay tryn da clown me well,but dog how ya pound keep shells u nice? but u have "no-proof" like "em" be he found "d12"..... ^^^^^^^^^^^ yo good shit wit the above line good filler homie..................honestly................... ...yo had harder punches and awesome vocab................marv yo good shit good opeer too................ George man u need 2 elevate more homie,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, but not 2 bad good drop.........yo marv return the favour in the battle below against me and necro pyronix k homie.......................... |
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