Battle Rules:

10-14 Lines
No Crew/hate/DR Votes
No Recycling
No Biting and no feedin

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 12-28-04 at 10:09 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Assas-Sin has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-28-04 09:40 PM.

C'mon dawg you couldnt spit hot when ya body was ova heated
Ya changed ya name to Acuity cuz you kept gettin defeated
Beatin me is like you gettin being betta than me
See that will neva happen when ya fake ass keeps biting
Ill clap you with da tipy toe of da 9
Youre my bitch so when i say sit you know ya place in line
Takin me on was da dumbest decission ya made so far
Well maybe not?I think da first one was when ya went in da Gay Bar
Fuckin faggot get ya stack up before you get clap up
And if this lose doesnt sink in low enough to make ya throw up
Backup Punk before i show ya how many bones ima break
You challeneged me so no show on me herb cuz itz too late...

...wrote it in like 10 minutes so its w.e fam...

Acuity has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-28-04 09:43 PM.

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Voted For: Acuity

acuity had better hits this was close but acuity came a lil bit harder....tha last 2 bars were off the HOOK....so u get my vote look out back
chuck low vs. denied truth
chuck low vs. kkkhater
chuck low vs. death

^^w.e fam...you shouldve said bad structure on da last 2 bars but itz all good....still uppin

Voted For: Acuity

Good Job Man..

Assas~sin rushed his verse wicked.. structure was off wich ruined the flow.. Some decent personals but nothin to over excell acuitys verse..

Acuity Your verse was good, good flow structure good punches and wordplay.. It Was On Target the Whole Time never slipped.. great job on this..


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Voted For: Assas-Sin

i think assas-sin got this one his punches got em hit hard straight to the point metas were good flow was tight rhymes were ill goood job kid
best line-----Takin me on was da dumbest decission ya made so far
Well maybe not?I think da first one was when ya went in da Gay Bar

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Voted For: Assas-Sin

i say that assassin won becuz he had better wordplay he did stretch it but i was there wit him. i think both vreses need structure and multis.
punches went to assasin becuz he started witone and they werent played out like the jarrasic park stupid suck ass one so overall assassin won

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Voted For: Acuity



Lookin 4 rhyming classics, dont waste ur time checkin drops by Assa-sin
His punches are played and past-it, like he pickin up punches from the jurassic
multis was aight, punch aint connect picking up punches from jurassic WTF??? weak.....

Ur crews a sham, u make MC's laugh, like ur roster is a set from Def Comedy Jam
Wack City is ur native-land, milked lines like they coming from a mammary gland
set up line good again punch aint connect N i wasnt feeling it...

Ima taint ur so far perfect score, throw ur head and ur so-called rhymes to the hoards
Show RV Spittin Anonymous means fuk~all, like Bush claimin justifications for War
set-up line weak but this time punch connected decent....

Assasin so ur used to fatalities, testin me shows a serious lack of rationality
Ur name lacks originality, ima giv u a loss, bring ur record a degree of proportionality
decent vocab flow off thou....

In ur raps basics fail to be applied, u cud get merked by any MC worldwide
U couldn't transform and spit monstrous lines, even if u drank a potion like Jekyll and Hyde
decent...

I leave you in a shudder, your steering an ill-fated course, like u broke ur rudder
Spittin Anonymous brotha, cos lame and ur name are synonymous with eachotha
best bar u had preety good..........

man u had alot of bars that could of hit way better and all and some just aint make no sense and was weak as-hell last 2 bars was when u picked it up finally but it was to late...
6.5/10

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C'mon dawg you couldnt spit hot when ya body was ova heated
Ya changed ya name to Acuity cuz you kept gettin defeated
thats decent...

Beatin me is like you gettin being betta than me
See that will neva happen when ya fake ass keeps biting
flow off and punch was weak...

Ill clap you with da tipy toe of da 9
Youre my bitch so when i say sit you know ya place in line
flow ok, no punch

Takin me on was da dumbest decission ya made so far
Well maybe not?I think da first one was when ya went in da Gay Bar
weak, gay bar? weak....

Fuckin faggot get ya stack up before you get clap up
And if this lose doesnt sink in low enough to make ya throw up
clap up?-throw-up? dont not rhyme for shit.....
plus u should of re-worded that last line....

Backup Punk before i show ya how many bones ima break
You challeneged me so no show on me herb cuz itz too late...
decent ending....

mang after i saw acuity verse i thought u had this win hands down i even copy and paste the vote from acuity to u'rs only to copy and paste it back now that im done reading this shit...

honestly ya both lacked alot word but ass-sin u had no good punch, some of ya lines need to be re-worded and just think out-side the box word...

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Voted For: Acuity

Assas-in
um not to much decentsy in there..theres a few nice lines with soem tight wittyness in them...but no real punches or anythign well actuall yo be honest theres one good line in there it was all good tho...your vocab was good and so was your flow and stucture..nice verse tho..no hate pz

Acuity
hmmm nice verse actually fianlly i see hwo good you are lol....your punches were tight and so were your wordplay...some real creativity in them lines...you had soem good stucture and flow also...plus you used some pretty tight vocabulary in there...no ahte to both pz

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