Denied Truth vs Chuck Low
 

Battle Rules:
20 lines or 10 bars...
No Crew Votes..
No Recycling...
No Biting..
2000 RV if you beat me...
Just a plain ole battle folkz...

Good Luck and Let's Go.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-26-04 at 10:54 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

Chuck Low has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-26-04 10:26 PM.

Denied Truth has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-26-04 10:35 PM.

Ur Life Is Filled Wit Lies Cuz U Too Whack So U Denied Truth/why U Was Out Playin Games I Was In Ma Cell Block Where My Grind Roots/but Now Im Out Slicin Hoes Like U And Sparkin Green On A Daily Basis/ Now I Got This Soft Bitch On Tha Computer...he Probly Makin Crazy Faces/i Use Ta Sit In Ma Cell Askin God Ta Trade Me Places/cuz Like Denied Truth I Made Hellu Mafuckas Say Thay Graces/see U Like The Cattle And Im Tha Big Bad Wolf/i Been Bad Since Birth, Im Live In Living Color Like U Was On Sinbads Turf/hellu Weed I Blow I Just Relax And Stuff/ My Tracks Be Tuff, When I Come Around He Be Like Relax Its Chuck/christmas Just Pass But Im Still In The Spirit/ I Rip This Shit So Hard Even God Be Like.....mary This Boy Kill'd It..../

bitch i know its da holiday and you ain't a tree
but yo weak ass'll get lit up strait fuckin wit me...
chuckie i'll return ya to ya bride,like a bad gift ya been denied
if tha people sed u a winner, den dem people lied (so sorry)
You ain't complex or compound, ya lyrically down
ya rhyme'z a joke, are you an alias of wickedclown?
you destroyin yoself competing, if u show it'll be a surprise..
either way you lose cuz in this battle u face certain demise..
i'm so sorry for the pressure, u ain't producin punches or hits..
its like i'm not movin...but you shootin and continue to miss..
bitch u wanna be me..so i guess that i can be ur worse critic..
and all da rhymez ya thinkin up niccuh, prally i alredy spit it..
ain't no blockbuster hit like diesel in da chronicles of riddik...
u jus finished...face it boi...if i'm a ass..u've jus been shitted..
so many characterz i can barely fit it..i must admit it...
just quit bitch...yo rhymez are lifeless and incoherent...
irrelevant to all and ignored like you ain't writin good rhymez...
aint' got no airtime in a while like yur re runz of good timez...
so au revoir bitch..goodbye..yo linez are a mess....
and remember when u step to meh u fuck wit da best...

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Voted For: Denied Truth

v/ denied truth
she had better structure and punches and personals......
You ain't complex or compound, ya lyrically down
ya rhyme'z a joke, are you an alias of wickedclown?
that line was pretty good..............

chuck you gotta be more direct with your disses ..........and have harder hittin punches elevate

v/ DT

Voted For: Chuck Low

Chuck Low got this on my catagory his structure is fuckd u kno well his shit was tuffer and i think he got this cause he came more professinol u kno i gotta give it to the realist so he got it better flow punches personals that wins it right there so u kno he got it denied truth Elavte u still ned to work on ya flow punches and personals so than u'll get more battles good shit to both i feel chuck low got this with more profession in his rhymez please don't delete this vote theres no more other ways to explain

holla back and vote on my battles

^wow...homie...

he rapped on bein in jail...what da fuck dat gotta wit shiit....whatever tho..i ain't trippin tho....blowing weed and shit....what kind of shit iz dat...niccuh came mo professionally...whatever tho...i ain't trippin...

Uppin

Voted For: Denied Truth

IIHT This wat a goood battle both ends of the battle were spitting good

Chuck low: Yo ya verse was really gay just to let ya know, ya whole verse was like a 6.5 out of ten...you stared off good den went off a lil, your whole verse was almost all was self glory you ya kept on talkin shit about yaself u only had disses goin to him and not punches.

D Truth:: igght this is how it went down opener nice and so was the closer bth was goin good... you had hard hittin punches and hard hittin disses, you won overall becuz you didnt felll off ya wordplay and stuff like he did...

Structure: D truth
Closer: D truth
Opener: D truh
enjoyed: both
Punches: D truth
Overall: D truth

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this was a blow out it just sad some people cant vote fa real thay gotta dickride all tha time.......

we need votes so we can close this shit.......im tired of waitin for this shit ta finish

Voted For: Denied Truth

one sided battle. chuck had bad flow and structure and he had wack rhymes and played concepts and was sometimes selfglorifying. denied came harder and used personals and more creative punches and he had a better flow and structure.
no hate.
v.denied truth
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Voted For: Chuck Low

have to go with chuck nothin against you heres why,
flow chuck
rhyming chuck
opener-closer tie
personels tie
hits chuck
vocab chuk
imagry chuch
overall chuck but hey keep workin homes peace and take it easy.

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we need more votes ta close this shit out so pick your winner

somebody vote.need votes. need voes need votes VOTE FOR SOMEBODY i been waitin 2 long

Voted For: Denied Truth

vote: denied truth ....... truth just ripped up on chuck ....... i liked that chuckie line ........ ya got great word play and ya metaphors was good ....... the punchlines were really good thats why i vote fo truth

Keepin ^ It ^ Real...and its hard for people to dickryde when they don't even know ima girl...!! sSo cCheck yYosSelf homie...


And i know this was a one-sided battle...i merk'd u lil nigga.

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Voted For: Chuck Low

Chuck Low you had terrible structure..flow was nice...Punches where weak..Vocab was decent..Personals where good so was ya multis...wordplay was aight...

DT betta structure...flow was nice..punches weak..vocab was bad...Personals were aight..Multis you were lackin...

close battle..Both need to elavate but I give it to....Chuck Low

v/Chuck Low

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Voted For: Denied Truth

check low:
to be super honest you stucture made me eyes bleed to death and your flow was mad weak....your vocab was off...and you dont quite understand anything to do with rap lol....your rhymes were basic....hmm i jsut didnt liek your verse at all

D Truth:
hmm pretty good yoru stucture was decent and you know how to rap...so basically why do i need to explain bull shit becuz you had tight punchlines and some pretty witty metaphores in there...it was all tight....i would like to say...you won;)

return the favour links in the sig...pz