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Old 12-20-04, 07:42 PM   #1
Cuban~Storm
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Trojan... vs Cuban~Storm

IP: 0825 899A

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6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
NO D/R Votes
No Hate Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
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Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 12-23-04 at 07:42 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


This Battle Is Now Closed

 
Old 12-20-04, 07:46 PM   #2
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Trojan... has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 07:46 PM.
 
Old 12-20-04, 08:31 PM   #3
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Cuban~Storm has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 08:31 PM.
 
Old 12-20-04, 08:33 PM   #4
Cuban~Storm
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Yes it’s Cuban~Storm reigning RV and on this Rain Coat bitch
So you think ya ruff around the edges I think not and I’m a lunatic
So you “smooth with the ladies” but you look like a pussy this time
But its true wat they say you could be a dick...well not mine
Trojan can’t deal with the fact that my rhymes are much hotter
This bitch is too dumb, that he looses himself while he wonders
So there’s no question, that to me you’re no contestant
So now I confess this, that I once was and still am blessed
No more need of a bitch wit protection let alone lubricated
So I’m done...cuz once I bust, this Trojan gets wasted
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Old 12-23-04, 09:00 AM   #5
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Cuban~Storm:

don't even pretend ur ill, ya wack.. imma reveal him
i'd put my two pennies in... but he'd prolly steal 'em
i don't expect u to show against me.. frankly who would
u aint commin close to a tie.. only thing u'll draw.. is blood
i'm getting dangerous and it's fair for me to say goodbye
chuz..
i'm grabbing the scissors and cutting..........off ur air supply
cuban is definatly cutting edge.........of the front lawn
and there's no need for a menu
.................especially when i'm cooking up a storm
 
Old 12-23-04, 01:46 PM   #6
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This was feedback posted for Trojan...

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.............................................just checking the polls.
 
Old 12-23-04, 09:26 PM   #7
Cuban~Storm
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upin for an easy win............................................... ......................
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Old 12-23-04, 11:06 PM   #8
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uppin for an eazy win bitches
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Old 12-23-04, 11:30 PM   #9
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Voted For: Cuban~Storm

Wow umm Ill Take The Time to Give A Detailed explanation on This Battle

Trojan
To Start off with You Id like To Say you Structure Was the first thing That I saw That was jus Fucked Up.....Then I Read Ya Verse and at the beggining It had A Decent flow but then At The End You wont rymin and it seems like you were jus tryin to talk and not rap,,,,,,,umm Basically You need to work On Ya Style all Over Bcuz you Seriously Fucked this verse Up
No Hate Mayne Jus Speakin My opinion

Cuban~Storm
I Liked ya verse and I Like the way You Held That Same Rythm and Flow Throught The whole verse ...I didnt See any Flaws with your Punchez and Personals Bcuz they Are Str8.....Um The only Thing i can Say Is Try to Work On Multi's But Thats Not No Big problem when Ya Got a Verse like your but thats What i Say you Were Missing So.....There.

Please Take The Time To RTF In My battle ..I Only have One Battle And I Think It Wouldnt Hurt You To RTF Thanx
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Old 12-24-04, 12:01 AM   #10
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checkin pollz........
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Itz Coopa Bang bitch and I done made a transition,
I smell what ya hattaz cookin but ya aint smellin what im wrippin,
The net fixin to burn cuz Bang in the buildin....




Me fallin off,start Trippin and slackin,
Nope that will never happen Just like the Pope Rappin......
 
Old 12-24-04, 12:03 AM   #11
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Nice Cuban~storm Keep It Up Uppin For My Nikkah Cuban Werdness
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Old 12-24-04, 04:50 AM   #12
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fuckin' kids...not knowing how to vote................wackness
 
Old 12-24-04, 04:20 PM   #13
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up-up-up and away!

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Old 12-24-04, 05:01 PM   #14
Cuban~Storm
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uppin for an easy win.....................................
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Old 12-24-04, 05:02 PM   #15
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Voted For: Cuban~Storm

don't even pretend ur ill, ya wack.. imma reveal him
i'd put my two pennies in... but he'd prolly steal 'em
…no
i don't expect u to show against me.. frankly who would
u aint commin close to a tie.. only thing u'll draw.. is blood
okay
i'm getting dangerous and it's fair for me to say goodbye
chuz..
i'm grabbing the scissors and cutting..........off ur air supply
decent
cuban is definatly cutting edge.........of the front lawn
and there's no need for a menu
.................especially when i'm cooking up a storm
okay

Yes it’s Cuban~Storm reigning RV and on this Rain Coat bitch
So you think ya ruff around the edges I think not and I’m a lunatic
decent
So you “smooth with the ladies” but you look like a pussy this time
But its true wat they say you could be a dick...well not mine
good
Trojan can’t deal with the fact that my rhymes are much hotter
This bitch is too dumb, that he looses himself while he wonders
good…
So there’s no question, that to me you’re no contestant
So now I confess this, that I once was and still am blessed
…okay
No more need of a bitch wit protection let alone lubricated
So I’m done...cuz once I bust, this Trojan gets wasted
decent closer

Overall C~S took this one…punches were just plain-harder
And the structure + flow was good with it…Trojan came weak
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