MarvJay1009 vs Coopa Bang
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew/d'r/hate votez
No Recycling
No Biting and No Feedin

dont duck Marvelous... :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-28-04 at 05:15 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

dont whut??? nigga im here where ya check in at dogg

Coopa Bang has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-27-04 05:30 PM.

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-27-04 05:44 PM.

MarvJay1009??Damn nigga you must not have a clue who I be
Maybe you need to go OPEN MIC and check I Got That butz thatz just a maybe
You beatin me is like hiddin footage NEVER BEFORE SEEN
Ill smack you like a bitch you are and make you like fat joe to lean
Shit rook what the hell where you thinkin exceptin my battle
This fatboys TITTIES be holdin more milk than a herd of cattle
C'mon besides suckin on my dick you're makin nyc look very dumb
I dont need merk you,You do it ya self by shootin ya self wit my cum
Fuck FAM how much info do you need about me just to make a punchline
Itz been 2 hrs and all i seen is "damn,he's good,his verse is betta than mine"
You said yes to this battle cuz you think you gonna merk me
Think again you lil like pee wee and im big like the professional league

jea.....

u dumb! 4 now stupid is ya name,i'll put da ruga 2 ya brain.....
no deal "mario bros." is da only time we'll c "coopa in da game"
fam dont believe ya text,fagget u neva squeezed a tech...
u live on rv ur like "amature flipper's" cuzz u "need da net"....
i asked around about dis dude no1 said dis quer could ryhme
u gettin a deal? lol nope u couldn't get ya "year book signed"
if u do i bet u da deal is wack.....cuzz nobody feel a ya raps.
u'll neva be "big" in rap umm maybe just "guerilla black"....
ya time is up...fam whut can i say ya ryhmes just suck...
if i rob u i'd feel like "cops at da vibe awards" i wont "find a buck"

nuff said

okay....uppin 4 votes n pleez explain dem ppl da favor will be returned

uppin whut da fukk y niggaz aint votin

yo is ya niggaz blind on here damm niggaz dont vote on shit

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

open:Marve: "u dumb! 4 now stupid is ya name,i'll put da ruga 2 ya brain.....
no deal "mario bros." is da only time we'll c "coopa in da game"
-Very nice, a little better than the other opener. Good use of his name.

close:Marve:"ya time is up...fam whut can i say ya ryhmes just suck...
if i rob u i'd feel like "cops at da vibe awards" i wont "find a buck"
-Good meta, good use of recent events. Funny as fuck. -True badboy

Marve's best line:"if u do i bet u da deal is wack.....cuzz nobody feel a ya raps.
u'll neva be "big" in rap umm maybe just "guerilla black"...."
-This is fucking sweet. Proving real talent there. Multi rhyming, metaphor use and hard punch!! Very clever.

Coopa's:"You beatin me is like hiddin footage NEVER BEFORE SEEN
Ill smack you like a bitch you are and make you like fat joe to lean"
-In my opinion this was your best line, and your only one on Marve's level in htis battle. Nice use of metas and good punch

Overall: Marve's punches were far funnier and harder hitting. His use of multis, personals and metaphors were untouchable in this verse.

Well done Marve, real good verse

This was feedback posted for Coopa Bang
 

checkin dem pollz famz...nice verse to both...close battle

^^^^y u aint vote dunn return da favor.....but uppin can we get some more votes

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

flow marv
hits marv
lyrics marv
structure marv
imagry marv
opener-closure both
vocab marv
over all marv
and hey hit up on my links and leave honest votes peace.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

marv jay got this is was one sided good shit i like that shit about tha olny time coopa in tha game sumthin mario bros..that shit killt it fa real
return tha favor
chuck low vs. death
chuck low vs.denied truth
chuck low vs.kkkhater

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uppin 4 some more votes

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

yo both yall niggas came hard but marv J out shined U man
his verse was tighter even though this was a close close battle

favorite linesu dumb! 4 now stupid is ya name,i'll put da ruga 2 ya brain.....
no deal "mario bros." is da only time we'll c "coopa in da game"
fam dont believe ya text,fagget u neva squeezed a tech...
u live on rv ur like "amature flipper's" cuzz u "need da net"....
i asked around about dis dude no1 said dis quer could ryhme
u gettin a deal? lol nope u couldn't get ya "year book signed"
ILL
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uppin 4 more votes ppl

uppin some more fukkin votes!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

both were good but tha drop on your killed Coopa Bang..........

uppin 4 more votes

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^vote!!!!

uppin damm im tired of doin dis shit

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

this was a onesided battle marv had better everything
nice metas and everything

u gettin a deal? lol nope u couldn't get ya "year book signed
^^^^^BEST LINE

you were ok wasn't feelin ya flow coopa but you did have one good line

You beatin me is like hiddin footage NEVER BEFORE SEEN

good battle overall drop feedback on my mosh open mic

Voted For: Coopa Bang

my vote goes for Coopa Bang, he had better punches.. 'i dont needa merk you you do it urself, but shootin yaself wit my cum' << i like that shit.. vote - Coopa Bang ... return tha fav. man.. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=170678 << Tha Sickness Vs. ~Babylon~

uppin 4 more votes

upin damm dis i get dis shit closed 4 nothin

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ vote ppl

uppin 4 more votes ppl

Voted For: MaRVJay1009


Openor=Marv
Strukture=Tie Both Easy Ta Read
Punches=Marv,His Wass Better
Personals=Tie Both Had Some Ok Personals
Vokab=None,Need Ta Up Ya Vokab
Multiz=None,Fix That
Metaz=Marv Had A Couple
Closer=Marv,Ok Punch And Ok Wordplay

Marv Took This With Tha Harder Punches And Decent Personals Elivate Ya Vokab...............

/v Marvjay1009................